Originally posted by: rockprincess123
I just finished reading all of the chapters on this FF so far and my dear Zara, you really are something!! What a talent and a way you have with words! It's nothing really. There's so much more writers out there, but thanks. :)
The whole uniqueness and the raw aura that this story holds has me hooked and I can't wait to find out what happens next in the story. You really are an amazing writer!!
Really glad your interested in the story line. :) Hope it remains interesting for you as it progresses.
I love reading stories that take on a different scenario and look to ipkknd's beloved love story our ARSHI and then Payash... loooll 😉 because they are sooo much of an inspiration to read and it is almost like sharing your way of experiencing or dreaming about the different Rabba Ves you would have liked them to share. Bang on the money. Thats exactly how i feel. I want to share what image is running through my head on paper.😳
It is nice seeing the tables turned a little where Khushi's family (in this case, her and her father) are in the limelight of stardom whilst Arnav's aren't. I am still in awe of how well you portrayed Shashi and how he seems to be such a great role model to girls and guys of the young generation alike. It's sooo nice to see him being in a role where his health and stamina is likely to be great rather than being bedridden with strokes all day! God bless him!! Shashi's charatcer is ment to be role model and father figure to all. Thanks for liking his chararcter
It reaally was heartbreaking seeing the small snapshot of Arnav's past and the discrimation he faced all because of his dad. Seemed like he went through a tough time and it is blatantly obvious that he wants out of the middle class life and is in for some fame. But that still don't not hinder the UNDEYING love I have for hiim! When I found out he was a "boxer" I was literally drooling there and then! I sooo love you for that!. Living through a life like arnav had has made him dream dreams and aim for very high goals. Mostly on Avni's influence. If she and akash weren't there he would have been on the wrong side of the tracks a long time ago.
My favourite bit of all the chapters put together was the meeting of Arshi for... well.. the most obvious reasons I guesss!! I love how witty Khushi is!!! Thats our Khushi😆
I hate it when guys typically stereotype girls and I think I would have done exactly what Payal would have done if I was in her situation... and I could box... and I was confident... but i can't box... and i'm not confident... but hey all that matters is the intention right!!?? I loved Payal's reaction, it was a perfect example of sticking up for girls' rights and a real epitome of woman power!!! LOL yep. Payal represents the fighting women power in us, even for those who are quiet.😊
And what is with Aman here!?! He is such a JERKK!!! I think I liked him better as Arnav's secretary! His attitude towards Khushi is horrible and I have failed his character already and so did Arnav! It's glad to know he and I have a "mental connection" here... He seemed just as angry with Aman as I was! Every doesn't like Aman, but don't worry he's all right guy trust.😉
I just hope now that Khushi doean't hold Arnav for this stupid bet that they both decided on. I have a feeling it'll come up as something ugly in the future when Khushi and Arnav are both settled into a serious relationship. expect the unexpected.😉
Now moving onto the SURPRISE entry of Shakthi aka Khushi's BRO!!! Woooww, this is one of the first FF's I've ever read where Khushi is shown to hav a big bro and their relationship is beautiful. The pure love that they both share for each other is phenomenal and I adore theior wonderful bro-sis duo!! I just don't get what made Shakthi betray Shashi.. was it some sort of conflict between the two?? From what I know so gfar, Shakthi seems to love his family, especially his sister greatly and he doesn't see one who would break his father's heart. Just sayin'... Initally I thought Shakthi would be a player or Ajay Malhortra's son but then finding out he was Khushi's bro and Shashi's son was a BIGGG shocker!! I still love hi though nonetheless!! There is a past for the gupta family but all will be revealed in good time. I love shakthi too😳
And THENN... as an added bonus was the DANCEEE!!! I love how both Arnav and Aman were soo eager to get Khushi but for the wrong reasons totally. Ergh, that stupid bet, it's ruining everything!! Atleast Khushi isn't that stupid to let it slide.. she knows somethings up with Arnav ad I really really hope she doesn't get hurt! wait and seee😊
Khushi and NK made the sweetest couple yet they weren't a couple, if that makes sense ;D. The way Khushi's attire was described was beautiful and Arnav himself was nothing less! Their dance was ultimately and offiicially their FIRST proper moment though it changed everything yet made no difference. The dance emotionally for them was a turning point. one Khushi didn't like and backed off.
Arnav and Shakthi really haven't gotten in each others good books have they?? They're gonna have to cook up some Bromance soon for the long run if they're gonna be brother-in-laws in the future!!! that one is a toughy indeed,lol.😆
I absolutely adored reading all the chapters and it was my greatest pleasure. I will be eagerly awaiting your updates in the future! Aww thanks so so much. Very greatful for your interest.😳
Awesome job!
P.S- Soo sorry for the looonng comment dear, I figured I needed to express my "love" for this story before my mind floated off somewhere beyond the forum to the boring world of exams and real life! I also figured that one big comment is better off to be read than 50 odd smaller ones right?? My theroyy see... ;)) Xx No thank you so much for the long comment. I was feeling down and this cheered me right up. 😊. I hope more readers are like you *hugs* Thanks sis for the lovely gifs 😳
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