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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#491

Damn. I meant Ajay. Mistakiya ho gaya Zara!😆

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Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: ..SankiMedhz..
Chapter Six :

Dammit. This bet is going to hurt everyone involved...especially Khushi. Arnav man! You know its wrong...and its starting to lead Khushi the wrong way!
But this Khushi..I like her attitude. Despite being flustered, she doesn't show it on the outside. And that is something admirable. :) yep indeed!😊

Shakthi is Khushi's bro? Woah. So what happened then? I liked the way you portrayed the brother sister equation between Shakthi and Khushi...really sweet. :D
He's so protective and caring for her too...despite the fact that he bother's what everybody else will say should they see Khushi at his training centre. Their relationship is very bonded.😃

Payal and Akash...I can see them becoming this cute cuddly couple soon!😆
Awww...he got hit because he was distracted. LOL...many more hits in store Akash, if you don't have your head in the game!😆 silly akash😆

Anjili makes an appearance. And Shakthi likes her? Hmmm...very interesting. Shakthi doesn't like her. He finds her annoying as she keeps wanting an interview with him. Khushi has cupid on her mind though.😆
I'm liking the way you're slowly developing every character in the story Zara. And what makes it more special is the stark difference in the style of writing from VWT. Hats off to you!👏Yay!

Thanks for the PM!😳

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CRAZY4CARTOON

@CRAZY4CARTOON

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

nyc update
shakti khushi brother

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

This is getting m0re and m0re c0nfusing. Shakti is n0t bad and Arnav is g0ing d0wn big time!!

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Arnav why r u dng this.it won't do any good...

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

that was awesome...this is def one of my favs stories 👍🏼

ohhh boy...looks like Arnavs indeep trouble big bros on the war path n if he finds out about the bet wooo eee Arnavs gonna need his boxin skills outside the ring too 😆

loved Payal,Akash n Aman banter n my fav quote this update was

Aman raised an eyebrow. Well she doesn't remember the punch she gave me when I wasn't focused...'not that hard' my foot.

could just imagine Payal knockin Aman of his feet🤣

knowin Arnav that wont stop him though😉

wonder what hes planning next 😈

glad to see Arnavs already rethinkin bet

cant wait to see what happens next plz continue n keep the PMs comin my way

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avni_barun

@avni_barun

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#497

loved the update...
thanks for PM...

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#498

Hmm shakti is her brother! I actually wasn't expecting that! Hmm this is going to bring a nice twist for Arnav later on!

I wonder how he actually going to make his move... But one question why is everyone not bothered by Aman... There must be something more to him!

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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: -Zara-

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9424976

@9424976

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#500

Great update! Story is moving forward, and wow did not know that was her brother! cant wait for anjili to come into the story! love this story with its different tracks!