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barbiebala

@barbiebala

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

oh shakti is khushi 's bro
nice to see the affection of bro and sis
the store room romance was wooo
i hope arnav will not hurt her

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Chapter Five :

Don't bother with the criticizing PM's Zara! I love the way you're developing the story...and I have absolutely no issues with the length of the updates either. So sit back...and write freely! :D

So Arnav has some feelings towards Khushi. I'm not hinting at romantic ones...but feelings..as in he's getting affected and drawn towards her and her personality.

Woah.Ajit and Shakthi sound really competitive. Though Shakti takes it more on a friendly note...I didn't feel similar vibes from Ajit. I'll wait to see how this pans out in future.

So that's why Khushi lets Aman be what he is. She knows it harmless. Now that's one question answered for me!😆

Ahhh...nice try Arnav. but Khushi isn't going to let her guard down soon. I hope Arnav apologizes to her properly. 'Maybe' doesn't work for me. Or maybe that's how Arnav is. Doesn't open up soon does he? Same goes for Khushi too. This is going to be a long ride...and I'm all for it!

Thank you for the pm Zara! :D

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

Chapter Six :

Dammit. This bet is going to hurt everyone involved...especially Khushi. Arnav man! You know its wrong...and its starting to lead Khushi the wrong way!

But this Khushi..I like her attitude. Despite being flustered, she doesn't show it on the outside. And that is something admirable. :)

Shakthi is Khushi's bro? Woah. So what happened then? I liked the way you portrayed the brother sister equation between Shakthi and Khushi...really sweet. :D

He's so protective and caring for her too...despite the fact that he bother's what everybody else will say should they see Khushi at his training centre.

Payal and Akash...I can see them becoming this cute cuddly couple soon!😆

Awww...he got hit because he was distracted. LOL...many more hits in store Akash, if you don't have your head in the game!😆

Anjili makes an appearance. And Shakthi likes her? Hmmm...very interesting.

I'm liking the way you're slowly developing every character in the story Zara. And what makes it more special is the stark difference in the style of writing from VWT. Hats off to you!👏

Thanks for the PM!😳

Edited by ..SankiMedhz.. - 12 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

good to know that akash and payal are getting along fine

so shakti and khushi are siblings - hmmm, interesting

nice update zara

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

so shakthi is khushi's bro...love it...

payal and akash are moving so fast...Arnav and Khushi are dimwits 😊

please please give us an update with a full on boxing match and let Arnav thrash them all :) want to read an adrenalin pumping boxing game 😊

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

I finally got a chance to see the character sketch you'd put up on the blog! Lovely choice. :D

And WAIT...Shyam is Jutin???😆

Oh boy...is he going to be a villain here ?? :/

And Why o Why is Shakthi in his father's rival team? What is the deal behind it?

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

very interesting update...😊

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#488

very bold move by arnav!
i knew it, he is her brother :) and a possessive one :D.
oh we have anjali kaur thts cool.
payal is getting softy :)

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: Nichuss
updateee...😃

miss my spamming in zaara's thread 😆

now to part
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ha ha ha kushi was red embarrassed seeing

arnie caught her ,,n ofcourse hawwttiee wink..😉

ayye ayye..kushi teasing paayal..he he he😆 lol normal as it gets😆

Khushi standing up: " Well I'm going to go to the store room to get a bag of ice from the freezer."
Payal blinked: " Huh? Why?"
Khushi squinted her eyes still watching Akash: " Becuase it won't take long til-"

ha ha ha ha roflss...kushi cracked me..😆

The sound of a body flopped to the ground making Khushi jump a bit and Payal stand up shocked.

Payal: " Akash?!"

bichara akhi 😆

ha ha ha cant imagine the face f akhi..aftr ths

incident 🤣 yay! glad you found it funny😆

Khushi: " I didn't need your help Arnav. "
Arnav smirked: " From where I was standing it looked like you did. "
arnie scored today...my arnie baby.. lol yesyes you baby😆

Shashi, his wife, Khushi...and Shakthi?!.
i was missing my shakthi..n here it goes.. ☺️

wow...they r bestie..bro n sis...now i

understood y he was gvng glaring to arnie the

other day...(tough time for my arnie...to win

kushi ) we shall see😉

Khushi twitched her lips making Shakthi smile a bit: " I'd like you to feed me too?"
Khushi grinned instantly: " Pakka?"
Shakthi's eyes smiled at her smile and nodded.
im loving this sister-brother..(my hawtiee

shakthi ) lol this is your hotty too?😆

Shakthi hmmed: " True, however I trust Aman. I might need to keep an eye on this Arnav though-"
arnie baby u r tough time starts now,.. dundundahh

Khushi grinned: " Ohhh so you remember her name do you Bhaiya?"
he he he😆

Khushi smiled fully packed: " Well...I'm not complaining or anything...she looks perfect to be my bhabhi.
sorry kushi..i think i will be perfect for ur

bhabi LOLOLOL🤣

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gift

xxx

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: ..SankiMedhz..
Chapter Five :

Don't bother with the criticizing PM's Zara! I love the way you're developing the story...and I have absolutely no issues with the length of the updates either. So sit back...and write freely! :D YAY!😆

So Arnav has some feelings towards Khushi. I'm not hinting at romantic ones...but feelings..as in he's getting affected and drawn towards her and her personality. correctamodo!😃

Woah.Ajit and Shakthi sound really competitive. Though Shakti takes it more on a friendly note...I didn't feel similar vibes from Ajit. I'll wait to see how this pans out in future. who's Ajit?😆

So that's why Khushi lets Aman be what he is. She knows it harmless. Now that's one question answered for me!😆 lol.

Ahhh...nice try Arnav. but Khushi isn't going to let her guard down soon. I hope Arnav apologizes to her properly. 'Maybe' doesn't work for me. Or maybe that's how Arnav is. Doesn't open up soon does he? Same goes for Khushi too. This is going to be a long ride...and I'm all for it! we shall see

Thank you for the pm Zara! :D