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sruthiif

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#951

I don't think any other title would've been apt for this FF...
nice update... i feel he's being too mean i don't know... both are suffering...
whats this new secret again??eagerly waiting for the next update...

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samirao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#952

First of all , thanks a ton for the pm , must say ur queen of suspense and cliffhangers , so
So ruthless Asr is back , I thing Arnav and Khushi both r suffering , Khushi should do something , to win Arnav's trust and love , what with those books now , what Khushi have done now , may b she is studying further , plz plz no more mu , hope u will end the hate track soon , I really apriciate that u update every day , eagerly waiting for next part

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hashey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#953

Awesome update. Again a cliffhanger, what is she lying about now..

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jeya0301

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Posted: 12 years ago

#954

Oh god now I'm worried abt khushi..:( a lovely update..:) thnk u..:)

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Annie12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#955

In the beginning I did not like the storyas much as I am liking it now.. Superbly written.

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kristin

@sweet_5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#956

What ahhh!!!!!

Again thanks for the update, I'm such a dork I've been waiting all afternoon for you to update, it's a daily routine now :D

I wanna cry! Poor Arnav and poor Khushi! Ugh I hate Payal with all my heart. I understand why Arnav is Upset with himself. The one time he opens up his heart and he gets screwed over!

Oh dear god please not another MU! What is Khushi hiding now?

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Katelyn

@Katelyn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#957

This is a really emotional and heart breaking update! I cried for the pain that both of them are suffering!! 😭

"But then he clenched his fists and turned away, and she felt as if she had lost something precious.." This line especially hit me hard! My heart felt heavy feeling her loss! 😭 Yes, she lost her Arnav. In his place is the cold, ruthless, and calculating ASR. For this man will never trust her again! At the moment, Arnav is buried deep inside! I love how you've written ASR/Arnav inner struggles.

Yet, another cliffhanger! I think ASR is misunderstanding Khushi about the books! She is repenting for her deed and I don't see her trying to lie or undermine him again! His mistrust of her runs deep. It will be difficult for Khushi to prove herself. Their attraction for one another is undeniable. I think subconsciously Arnav always want Khushi around whether working at AR or going on business trip with him! I don't buy the hate thing. If you really hate a person, you wouldn't want to see that person's face at all!

Eager for the next update! You are such a talented storyteller! ⭐️ Hats off to you!! 👏 Thanks for the long update!

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#958

God what is next???its intrriguing...each chapter has its own secret...waiting...

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#959

oh Gosh cliff hanger again.

What did he find in the book? What Khushi lied about?

It was an intense chapter.

Beautifully written every emotion, every moments, each words, each sequence.

Fight of the Titans.

Khushi is gutsy and stubborn as well. She knew she was wrong, but didn't bow down her head in front of Arnav. Arnav also was determined in his decision.

But a hidden attraction is there from both sides.

Let's see how long they can control their desire.

Edited by sohara - 12 years ago

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#960

Kudos to u! Excellent update!
Khushi's guilt n Arnav's pain n anger both portraited superbly..
Poor khushi, her life is really destroyed just coz of jiji's lies..
Don't know ASR will trust n forgive her! Arnav might !
N now what r those books! Is it kind of confession?
PS: I also don't know much bout the share n transfers but then after hearing Arnav's decision, khushi shouldn't sign on trf paper .
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