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hatelove_1

@hatelove_1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

what a blow

awesome

loved it

plzzz continue soon

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

Omg!.whats his relation with payal?.that was nail bitingly exciting.please update soon.

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@march2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

that seems nasty...praying that its all a misunderstanding...

but what exactly happen

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Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

I dont know what to say..totally stumped..oh how you weave a tale :D

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

Awesom update...feel bad for Arnav and also kushi but guessing theres mre to the story ...looking forwatd to read more...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#676

A very, very fascinating story with a monster twist!!

Glad to see you have imbued your Khushi with Spunk and a spine...and guts to stare down one of the most formidable businessmen. Kudos to her.

Waiting to see how this story unravels...whether its all a misunderstanding, and Arnav is actually innocent of all wrongdoing, or whether he was actually, in some small way, culpable for what happened to Payal, and by extension, Akash and Khushi's mom. Will take your Post script to heart..so am not judging anybody without further details 😊

While I loved IPKKND on air for the most part, one of the sticking points for me was the power/ respect asymmetry between the leads--and I don't mean the money part. Seemed to me that a lot of times, Arnav would get away with trampling all over Khushi's dignity and self respect, and Khushi would forgive him in a jiffy, without concrete remorse shown from his end. Just my opinion 😊

Which is why it is very unique & refreshing here (in an almost sadistic manner 😊) to see Khushi being the one holding the aces, and Arnav the one on the back foot. Feel very bad for him of course, AR fashion house embodies the sweat, blood and toil he put in over years & years. So this must be a crushing blow. As to whether he did anything to deserve this...you have asked us not to judge, so will have to wait till your next update 😊

Another realistic touch in your FF--the AR empire is shown to be weathering difficulties due to the global recession, Arnav actually goes to office as well as makes trips abroad as an international business mogul would be expected to do..small deft touches which make your story come alive.

Eagerly looking forward to the next update. Could I request you for a PM when you update next?

Cheers...

Edited by RamnVij - 12 years ago