Pyar ke doh deewane(pg 24 updated!!!) - Page 9

Part 14

Kripa is about to go to the bathroom when angad puls her back down.she is now right on top of him.

Angad-tum kaha jaarahi ho mughe akela chorkar

Kripa-shutup angad and let go of me

Angad-nahin (he starts kissing her neck)

Kripa- (she pushes him away)angad let go mughe nahane jana hai

Angad-great idea mughe bhi nahane jana hai

Kripa-tum yaha 5 mins ruko main abhi atti hoon

She was about to go when once again angad pulls her back down

Kripa-angad ab kya

Angad-kripa kyun na hum saath shower kare

Kripa-angad u dog

She starts hitting him playfully,

angad smiles at her behaviour at grabs her two hands and stares in to her eyes.he was coming close to kiss her and kripa was aware of this fact so she couldn't use her hands as angad had a tight grip but she could use her teeth,so she bites his finger which makes angad let goof her,she then runs to the bathroom while angad just sulks.

Angad-ill get you back kripa sharma

After 5 mins kripa opened the door slightly

Kripa-angad zara towel pass karma vo main andar lane bhoolgayi thi

Angad grins

and goes and gets the towel,he passes to kripa but also grabs her hand.

Kripa-angad let go of my hand

Angad-no infact im going to pull you out

Kripa-no angad don't do that

Angad-fine say I leave ur hand mughe kya milega

Kripa-tum job hi chaho

Angad-okay ill leave ur hand and I expect a kiss,so promise

Kripa-ha

Angad-okay

He lets go of her hand and waits for kripa who eventuall comes out wearing a light pink tracksuit,she is drying her wet hai,angad cant take his eyes off her.kripa saw him staring.

Kripa-aise kya dekhrahe ho

Angad-kuch nahin I cant wait any longer,kab derahi ho kripa

Kripa-kya

Angad-kripa!

Kripa-yeah that's my name

Angad-u promised

Kripa-what did I promise

Angad- u promised that ud give me a kiss

Kripa-wen did I say that

Angad-kripa

Kripa-angad

Angad-that's it

He runs after kripa all around the room until kripa trips and falls right on the bed.angad gives his cheeky grin and comes on top of her.

Angad-so kripa kya kehrahi tum,ha that you didn't promise youd give me a kiss,well looks like ull have to now

Kripa-angad I love u pls let me go

Angad-kripa I love u too sweetheart but pehle mughe kiss chahiye phir tum jasakti ho

Kripa-lekin

Angad-kripa until(interrupted)

B4 angad could finish his entence kripa had given him a long kiss .they then apart

Kripa-khush

Angad-ha

Kripa-ab mein jasakti hoon

Angad-nahin

Kripa-kyun

Angad-mein bhi chaloonga tumhare saat

Kripa-okay chalo

Angad-really

Kripa-ha chale ghar

angad-ghar no mughe ghar nahin jaana

Kripa-phir

Angad-mughe beach par jaana hai

Kripa-aj to ap bare romantic mood mein hao,beach oh ho

Angad-of course well go to the beach go on the rides,itll be great fun

Kripa-what I thought well go for a stroll u wan to go on the rides vo bhi subah subha r u mad,no ways im not coming

Angad-pls kripa

Kripa-no angad

Angad-pls mere liye

Kripa-no

Angad-ill buy you icecream

Kripa-(face lights up)ok chalo

Angad-wow I said cum for me no I said cum for icecream you agreed straight away

Kripa- ha because your with me 24 7 lekin you see Icecream I don't always get

Angad-what makes you thin main hamesha tumhare saat rahoonga,ok kaho ke mein kal tumse door hojao to kya karoge tum

Kripa-tum nahin jasakte

Angad-kyun

Kripa-kyunki tum meri zindagi ho aur koi bala apne zindagi se door jasakta hai kya

Angad-phir bhi kya karogi tum

Kripa-(tears in her eyes)mein marjaoongi(a tear falls out her eye)pls chorne ke baat mat karo

Angad-(wipes her tear)hey mein to aise hi kehraha that tum to sach mein rone lagi

Kripa-angad tum bahut bure ho

Angad-aur tum bahut achi,ab chale beach

Kripa-icecream

Angad-ha ledooonga ab chale

Kripa-chalo

Preview-laksh

decides to put his plan in action at the party

-AK a few more romantic scenes b4 the party

Loved the romantic part Memze 👏 Great Job!! Good Night 😃 Bye
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Divjot 😊

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was a lovley part memze.... 😳


Iqra

awsome 😛
excellent 😛
mind blowing 😛
part 😛
cont soon

Part 15

They go to the beach and have lots of fun,kripa kept chucking sand on angad so angad got angry and start chasing kripa,she runs in the water but its to cold so she comes out and bumps in to angad.she tries to move but angad is blocking all her ways.

Kripa-im sorry

angad-no no ab mein tughe chooronga nahi

he comes closer while kripa goes backwards,he holds her by the waist and pushes her against his body,so close that she can hear his heartbeat,he then kissed kripa softly after a while kripa put her arms around angad and the kiss became paasionate.there were a bunch of school kids watching angad,theyd come hear with a teacher to draw sketches of the beach.angad and kripa then broke apart hearing the laughter.the teacher with them comes up to them.

Teacher-huh ure not even married aur yeh harqat karte ho,dekhiye go somewhere else the kids are trying to concentrate here so they don't turn out like you.

She walks off leaving a gobsmacked angad and kripa.

Kripa-how could she say that

Angad-stupid were not bad r we

Kripa-I dunnow about you but im not bad

Angad-wat do you mean im bad

Kripa-ofcourse how many girlfriends did you have b4 me,so many that you cant even remember

Angad-so ure tying to tell me b4 me u never had any boyfriends

Kripa-yeah I did but they were all good and decent guys,your different your shaitaan

Angad-fine(angrily sits down on the sand)mein hi hoon shaitaan

Kripa also sits down and comes close to him

Kripa-lekin angad ure my shaitaan all the other boys were just crushes u I love

Angad-wow kripa im touched not

Kripa-tik hai mughe kya,mein kyon koshish kari hoon tumhe khush karne

Angad-u infront of me will never keep me happy(jokingly)

Kripa-(abit hurt stand up)fine agar aise baat hai to main chalti hon

She stands up and was about to go when angad pulled her down to his lap and plays with her hair

Angad-hey I was only joking

Kripa-ofcourse I know you were,I told u,shaitaan

Angad-vaise kripa tumna aj bahut khoobsurat lagri ho

Kripa-sach

Angad-itne khush hone ke zaroorat nahin hai sirf shakal se kripa have u put on weight

Kripa-angad ill kill you

She starts hitting him

Angad-(pretends)ouch kripa lagi

Kripa-sorry sorry r u ok

Angad-(laughs)lagta hai meri hadi tootgayi

Kripa-ahh angad

She starts hitting him again,after a whole lot of fighting they go back to the khannah mansion where they are surprised to find anum and sahil and laksh there.they see a angry anum and a calm sahil trying to calm her down.

Sahil-don't worry they'll be here any minute

Anum-sahil maine kaha tha tumse,I told u not to eave them alone

Sahil-anum theyre not kids relax

Anum-lekin maine phone par kitni koshish ki(that's when she sees angad and kripa)

Kripa/angad-hi guys tum sab itni jaldi bapas agaye

Laksh-kam jaldi khatam hogaya

Kripa-okay then

Angad/kripa-bye guys

They were about to go when

Anum-one minute itni jaldi bhi nahin tum dono sare raat kaha the

Kripa-ermm

Angad-mein aur kripa

Anum-kya

Angad-jungle gaye the

Anum-what jungle

Kripa-no di angad took me out to get some icecream and the car broke down etc etc(she made up a tale)

Anum-okay ill let you both off this time but next time

Kripa-yeah di we get the point

Kripa and angad both go to there separate rooms smiling.in kripas room

Kripa-(thinks)im so happy lekin kya meine itna bari kadam lekar sahi kiya

That's when she sees angad sitting at the sofa,while she was thinking angad had come in

Kripa-angad wat r u doing her

Angad-ive come to see u

Kripa-angad tum jao

Angad-whats up kripa pareshan lagri ho

Kripa-nahin to

He comes and sits on the bed beside kripa

Angad-kripa kal raat ke vaje se pareshaan ho

Kripa-vo vo haan

Angad-kripa kal raat humare beech jo bhi hua vo sirf pyar tha aur pyar mein kuch galat nahin hai lekin agar tum phir bhi aisa lagra hai to mein anum bhabhi se baat karta hoon

Kripa-nahin angad hum saat hai yeh sab se bari baat hai meri liye.

Angad looks at her innocent eyes,kripa notices angad smiling at her,she gives him a confused look

Kripa-angad what happened kaha kogaye

Angad-tumme

Kripa-matlab

Angad-kripa u know you have amazing eyes

Kripa-thanks you also have nice eyes

Angad-u have amazing lips aswell(he comes closer)

Kripa-(gets shy)angad shut up

Angad-I love you kripa

He is about to kiss her when kripa moves back

Kripa-angad jao yaha se koi ajayega

Angad-koi nahin ayega,Im telling you so where were we

He comes closer but then suddenly there a knock on the door

Kripa-crap angad hide

Angad-kaha

Kripa-anywhere just get away from her

Angad-god

Angad goes in to kripas bathroom,kripa opens the door and sees unum there

Kripa-hi di ap yaha

Anum-kripa bhool gayi aj sahil party rakha hai venue mein hume jaana hai

Kripa-di im not in a mood

Anum-u haft too,I called angad to get you but where that stupid boys gone I don't know,u know

Kripa-no di,okay di u can go now

Anum-oh no no im staying here till you don't get changed

Kripa-but di mughe nahin jaana

Anum-(she goes to kripas closet and takes out a saree)yeh lo

Kripa-di mein saari pehnoongi

Anum-yes now go in the bathroom and get changed

Kripa-but

Anum-Im not hearing any excuses(she pushes kripa in the bathroom)and don't come out till youre dressed

Angad is laughing silently

Kripa-(whispers)what shall I do now

Angad-(wispers)get dressed

Kripa-angad kuch karo

Angad-kripa kuch karo

Kripa-shut your eyes

Angad-do I haft too

Kripa-yes and until I don't tell you don't open them

Angad closes his eyes while kripa changes in to the saree

Kripa-okay angad im done you can open your eyes now

Angad-(opens his eyes)wow kripa you look amazing

Kripa-yeah I know

Angad-(comes closer)vaise kripa ab mein apna adoora kam poora karta hoon

Kripa-kya adoora kaam

Angad-abhi batata hoon

He was coming close to kiss her when they hear another knock on the door

Anum-kripa hurry

Kripa-ha di ayi

She was about to go when angad grabs her hand

Kripa-angad choro mughe

Angad-nahin

Kripa-pls

Angad-nahin,oh god pls kisibi tarah yeh kabab ke haddi yaha se jane do

That's when anum says

Anum-kripa u hurry im waiting down stairs

Angad-YES

Anum-arre kripa yeh tumhare awaaz ko kya hogaya

Kripa-di nothing vo hichkiya agayi

Anum-oh okay im waiting downstairs

Anum goes and kripa takes a sigh of relief

Kripa-thank god mein daragayi thi

That's when her eyes fall on a smiling angad

Kripa-ab tum kyun muskarare ho

Angad-nahin kuch nahin

Kripa-what do you want

Angad-u know

Kripa-yes I do

She leans in and kisses him

Kripa-khush

Angad-ha lekin ab meri baari

He pushes her towards him and kisses.he then lets go of her,kripa runs out while angad is left smiling.

Angad-gosh I love her

Meanwhile in lakshs room he is thinking

Laksh-hopefully today unum aur sahil juda hojayege,just hope everything works out as planned

Preview-the party

awesome part!!!

hmmm....kya karega laksh? 😕

aww nice bathroom scene 😳 lol!!! cont soon...

awwwwwwwwwwww memze....that was a lovley part

Hey Memze,
It was a very very cute scene 😳 especially in the bathroom 😉 . I have really gotta say this to u too..... cuz ur is purely filled with EVIL 😆 U plan evil stuff so easily it always breaks a-k apart ..... plzzzzzzzzz don't make lakshya toooooooooooooo evil... poor unum thinks it's not fair.... for u to make him evil... he's sucha sweetheart and those gorgeous sexy eyes 😉 how could u make him evil 😭. sry.. u know i'm just playing with ya.... anyways... i just can't wait for the next part and i hope u guys have fun tommorrow. Good Luck and Bye
DIvjot 😃

heyyy...just read the whole fan-fic today...what shall i say...gr888 job! 👏 👏 👏 its really gooood, cant wait to read the next part, continue soon! 😃