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sorry for opening a new topic but it is because someone messed up my other one and I can't edit my title... And it says another person opened that story... so i'll start over...

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InTrO

KrIpA sHaRmA

A very traditional girl. She is an orphan. She was raised by her brother who love her very much. She is rich but doesn't show it because she believes that people should like her for who she is and not what she has. (She is rich because their mom and dad left the money for them and Josh works at the Sharma Empire when he can). Lives with her brother in a 3 bedroom flat. Her best friend is Prithvi. She believes in true love and is looking for her prince charming. She is nice and very caring and is very delicate. She is going to go to college in Mumbia. She is perfect except she can't see!!

AgE- 20

AnGaD kHaNnA

A big flurt. He's a huge rockstar. He is rich. Has a younger sister that he loves a lot! Doesn't believe in love. He is in college in Mumbia. He is a senior. He has A LOT of girlfriends! All the girls are crazy after him because of his looks, money, and fame. He lives in a 5 bedroom flat. Angad treats girls like clothes. Once they get old, throw them away!! Hates his dad because __________. (find out in the story). Lives alone with his sister. Misses his mom (she died).

AgE- 23

JoSh ShArMa

Loves his sister a lot. He is a normal person. Very nice and caring. Mostly same as Kripa. Goes to college in Mumbia. He has heard of Angad but doesn't really think that they will get along because of their diffrences. He's waiting for the perfect girl. He is shy. Some girl like him because of his kindness, looks, and the way he cares for others and not himself that much. Josh never dates them. His best friend is Prithvi.

AgE-22

KuMuD kHaNnA

Shy. Caring. Loves her brother. She is very kind and doesn't make fun of the unfortunate or poor. She cares a lot about her brother. She is looking for her Mr. Right. She never saw her mom before. She is very pretty. Going to go to the same college as others. She has a pure heart. She loves helping people in need. Angad always gets annoyed because of that so she helps the needy in a different way.

AgE-20

DiLiP kHaNnA

Buisness man. Never has time for his family. Has a wife and 1 child. Technecly same as the show.

AgE- Lets say 56

RiShI kHaNnA

Hates his dad for not caring about him or his mom. Goes to the same college as others. He found out that his Dad had another family so he is looking for his two kids. Mean and spoilt. Plays with girls hearts. Hates Angad!

AgE-22

NaInA kHaNnA

Loves her husband. Doesn't know that he had another wife. Caring. Loves her son alot. Nice.

AgE- Lets say 54

PrItHvI bOsE

Nice and kind. Just like Josh. Shy and sweet! Goes to the same college as others. Josh's best friend. Loves Kripa. Cares for her alot. Lives alone. His parents live in Australia.

AgE- 22

AvAnTiKa KhAnNA

Mother of Angad and Aaliyah. She died when Aaliyah was born. She died by ___________. (find out in the story) Loved her husband a lot. She was broken when she found out her husband had another family.

ThEsE aRe ThE mAiN cHaRaCtHeRs!!!

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Who

are you?"

"Kripa Sharma"

"Do you believe in love?"

"Yes! Love is everything to me!"

"Do you love anyone?"

"No.."

"So I hear you can't see.. Is that true?"

"Yes.."

(This is just like a interview!)

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PrOmO 2:

"Who are you?"

"Angad Khanna"

"Do you believe in love?"

chuckles "No way"

"Do you love anyone?"

"Not after my mom's death.."

"Oh.. I'm sorry.."

"It's ok.."

"I hear this year you will break your record for girlfriends.. Is that true?"

"Of course it is!!"

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PaRt 1:

The sun rises. It's orange. You see a house and the camera goes inside it. You see a girl dressed in a green salwaar kameze, beautiful payals, pretty green bangals, earrings, and a nose ring. The camera zooms out and you see it is Kripa. She is setting the table. Then you see a guy coming down the stairs in blue torn jeans and a sleeveless red shirt. He sees Kripa setting the table and gets worried.

G (runs towards her)- Kripa!! Why do you do all this?? You know that we have servents!

K- Sorry Josh bhiya!

Then you see Josh's face. He smiles.

J- It's ok.. Now sit down..

Kripa sits down. They start to eat. While they are eating, Josh is explaining to Kripa to be careful at college.

J (fast)- Remember, don't talk to strangers. If you need my help ask! Don't let people make fun of you! After class, stay in your room so I can come get you! Don't go anywhere without me ok!

K (giggles)- Not even the bathroom??

J (laughs too)- No you can go there! (serious)- Oh.. and if I don't come, I will send Prithvi to get you!

K- Ok bhiya!! I get it!! Take care of myself!! I will!

J (hugs Kripa)- That's like my sweet sister!

K (hugs him back)- That's like my caring brother!

Both giggle and then apart.

J- We better get going!

K- Yeah! Let's go!

Kripa gets her stick thingy out and Josh watches her walk out the door.

J (thinking)- Why are you punishing my sweet sister?? What did she ever do to you?? (gets tears)

Kripa feels alone so she turns back.

K- Josh.. Come on? (waits) Why are you crying?

J (wipes his tears)- No I'm not! (changes the subject) Let's go!

K- Ok! But you first this time!

J- Ok!

Josh goes out the door and waits for Kripa to come. Then they go in Josh's car. It's a black BMW convertable - 645ci.

Soon they reach the college.

NeXt- AnGaD aNd KuMuD's EnTrY!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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huuryyyyyyyyyyy damnn yo y u ppl who ryte dah storyz dont ryte longgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg ggggggggggggggggggggggggg


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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks unum didi!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: delicateangel

huuryyyyyyyyyyy damnn yo y u ppl who ryte dah storyz dont ryte longgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg ggggggggggggggggggggggggg


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i sorry but i have a personal life too... it's not like i want to be on the internet when my friends are over....

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Posted: 19 years ago
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can a moderator please close this topic!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

can a moderator please close this topic!!

aww y do u want dis topic 2 be closed 😭

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet honey

aww y do u want dis topic 2 be closed 😭

because my other topic (the original one) is back to normal! Please post comments on that one..

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