VIRMAN FF*ek mein aur ek tu*PART 14* NEW UPDATE

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akki27

@akki27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

loved ur last two FF n now its looking amazing,looking fwd toi it plzzz PM me

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shilpa09

@shilpa09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

[QUOTE=samu_khamkar]Its fab...completely different...buts wats the age of aisha? Cont soon[/QUOTE]

u will get to know it in next chapter dear:):):)

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Kidrauhl

@Kidrauhl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Firstly 🥳 your writing a new ff you go hun xx. The name ek mein aur ek tu simply amazing name. Love the banner hayye looks as good as the dinner on my plate 🤪. Virmans meeting Pervet Vadhera and Witch Sharma im sorry shilpa i need air to breath 🤣 dude that was too hilarious. Manvi wanting virat to pay for the damages hes broke 😳 well that came out as a shocker quite a big shock I would say. Virat going to pay Manvi back but how by becoming a nanny or a cleaner for her 🤣 stop it shilpa your making me cry 😭 too funny. He probably could bring Aisha and Manvi together and then fall in love with Witch Sharma 🤣 or Aisha could fall in love with him that would seriously be awkward 😳.
Thanks for the pm hun update soon and pm me please 😃
Inayah 🤗
Ps sorry for the long comment and for reading my bakwaas

Edited by S.Khan - 12 years ago

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AKSH

@LV88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

loved it..

awesome start...

waiting for next

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Aenna

@Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Omggg ur new storyyy
m luvinggg vry nice concept..
I think aisha will.lyk virat..den manvi
nd plzzz update asap

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Dik

@Dik..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Nice one...
Loved it
Continue soon...

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JESMY

@JESNIA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

its really interesting.But I have a humble request. Dont make a crush in Aisha's mind towards Virat in future.I am afraid Becuse she is a teenage girl and our Virat is also handsome.plz...(its just a request I hope you dont mind.)
THANK YOU FOR YOUR PM.

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Afshan

@afshanmk093

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Ah its fab! we wamt more n more chaps of tis

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

i loved it

superb update

plz cont soon

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Wow Shilpa New FF!!! Interesting concept.. Loved the title and the banner also😃.. Superb start.. So many things happened in the very first part.. First of all I loved Virman conversation.. They are worst enemies forever 😈.. Great 😛.. Loved Manvi's character.. She is strong, independent and kind also.. I hope Virat will accept her offer.. Virat as sexy and handsome Nanny 🤣🤣.. Sounds awesome.. Aisha is an interesting character.. I guess Virat will bring them together.. Will be waiting for the next update.. Thanks a lot for the pm.. Take care 🤗 🤗