Arhi SS: Help part #7(last part)

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ArnieBoyBarun

@ArnieBoyBarun

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

It was indeed really good, I think really helped!!!!!!!

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Divyanshi Vineet Malaviya

@babydevil

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

RT diii !! U wrote it superbly !! Ooh my gosh !! The ilast para on winning and lossing was so ryt and correct !

Well Di ! Need not to say that ur " Rotten " works are indeed very rotten :p

I loved ! Awesome it is ! I love all ur work ! Will be waiting for ur pm in my index !!
And remember

I'm always at ur service ! :)

Love
Diva

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

A superbly written story... Seduction at its best from both the husband and wife and Khushi was so right at the end that its not abt winning or losing but abt winning and losing... It's all a t winning someone I we and losing to the same person whole heartedly.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

see you did manage to make them both win
its only fair that they both win right
after all they are partners in this and they both have to win for sure
haiyye first her sedcution and then his
and that ended up with a very HELPFUL sunday indeed
aww just what we had hoped for
hope you continue with your ss though i wanna know what happens next
please pretty please
hope you continue writing dear
cheers for pm

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

The ending was so very beautiful. They both won yet they both lost helping each other in the process. Beautifully written. Well done 👍🏼

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tachyon

@tachyon

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

way too good!!!! nice ending!!!!!

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who cares

@Crazy-fanarhi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

OMG!!i swear im blushinnnggg!!and ufff this was sooo passionate!!😳😳...

Gaaawwddd!!i doubt a man like the ones in our fan fictions exist..*dreamy sigh*..if only they did...but i do wish every girl out there gets a loving partner..hahah..anywhooo dreams and fantacies aside..the updte was reallyy..umm..uh..i dont know what to say..it just made me goo all red!!lol

Do write more in the future and PM ME!!!im gonna be waiting for the other ones k..

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Kavita

@CrazyBarunian

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Wow it was so hot n romantic i loved it 😳 ❤️ great job dear 👏 u r brilliant write plz write more 😊

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Nkayani

@Nkayani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Absolutly loved ur ss the help
It was amazing.
U definatly are a gifted person when it comes to writing. Cant wait to read some more of ur work.
Plz come up with another ss or even a fan fiction soon. 😃