Dekha Ek Khwaab - Their Dream Continues -BK 2-UPDATED Chap 35 - Pg 138 - Page 97

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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful
Heartwarming
Sad
Happy
Too Good
Awesome and super long
didi i have no words for your writing and the emotions i felt when reading it.
i could feel udays pain, manyata's confusion, their powerful love.
you make me belive and hope for a love like this. love you didi.
thank you for this and the song was just too nice, i listened to it while reading. perfect.
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...loved it...finally manyata is fine and healthy but she forget uday and unnati how...?and remember that karan i hate this...manveer bed scene was so romantic...hopefully manyata regain her memory soon...i don't like when manveer stay apart...last scene was great...thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...loved it...finally manyata is fine and healthy but she forget uday and unnati how...?and remember that karan i hate this...manveer bed scene was so romantic...hopefully manyata regain her memory soon...i don't like when manveer stay apart...last scene was great...thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi


Yeyyy!!!...M the first one to comment!😃..let me read first...n then ill comment in detail..too excitedšŸ˜› lolšŸ˜‰

UNRES******

Don't get mistaken that i just left the forum after putting a RES board Shahi..šŸ˜†..I always get lost after reading your update..I read it for almost 2 hours...I know that's too much😲..But that's true. After that I got late and had to go for cooking n other stuff. I wanted to give the comments in details... aww no worries gargi, lol i know aur yeh update tho kuch zyada hi lamba thašŸ˜•

Fabulous update ShahišŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ Uday's love is so intense that it makes me get lost, thinking why am I so unlucky not to have such a lver in my life😭..Any ways now lets come to the update... thanks yaar, haiiye meh bhi yahi soch thi lol, reality meh tho there is no man like UVCry, so i decided lets enjoy the love in the storyšŸ˜‰

What an updateā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø...I mean the flash back cleared all my doubts..Uday's screaming on his family was quite justified😔..Poor guy the way he held his love in his arms thinking he would lose her again...That was too sadConfused... yes that was really needed, to express his fear and anguish more importantly his well deserved anger

ManVeer together far away from their family was lovely to watch.lol haan they definitely need sometime to themselves .But poor Uday i can't see him in so much pain. aap befiqar raheye gargi, hum hain usko sambalne keh liyešŸ˜† OMG Manyata rejecting him is tearing him apart.haan it was sad Not remembering anything yet she remembers Karan😔😔...I hate this. I know what's going to happen next. you do..šŸ˜•...She will want to go to Karan...šŸ˜” nahi yaar, she will not want to go but voh tho definitely is picture meh hehšŸ˜†

Uday kissing her was so romantic😳...That bed scene was so cute...😳He wants her too much..Awww...But after that what happened was scary.Confused kya kare he is a man after all, a man that has missed and yearned for so much... i had to include to show her dilemma

Uday may have kidney problem??..Ohh my God..I can't see that happening..Poor baby...I love this Uday of your as his love is too intense...But the way he is drinking will take him near his death😭...Manyata too is in a dilemna...Her body wants him but her mind doesn't...I lved the way she unconsciously kissed him back😳..DOnt worry gargi.. his intense love will only grow,and remember a hurt uv is a dangerous one, as for manyata she is in for many such dillema's... uv will have to watch his alcohol intake... lol i certainly dont want him drowning in alcohol like devdas...šŸ˜† i have plans for him...

The last scene was definitely the highlight!šŸ˜›..Now Uday is so weak n completely drunk that she will have to support him. Ohh my poor Uday in rain will be drenched😭..Plz Manyata be a bit fast in saving Uday...Hope she realizes something sooner... i dont know about her realising but she is there and watching observing him for a while even though she wont admit or herself know she cant help but wonder about his love for her and their marriage...maybe not as his wife but as a human being she wont let him hurt himself. she herself doesnt know why it troubles her when she is unable to understand the love in his eyes...


So that was all from my side and sporry for keeping it in RES mode for such a long time no need for sorries... THANK YOU for the lovely comment... enjoyed reading itšŸ¤—

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Afsana01

Woaw what an update. šŸ‘

Welcome back shahi or shoul di say Queen of Romance and Queen of Emotions and welcome back with a bang, that was such a long and emotional update. I dont even know where to start. i re read chapter 33 just so i could follow through on this one. this had bits of everything. I cant tell you how happy i am that you shared those emotions with us.
i felt them too, uday broken heart makes me so sad😭😭. H e really is going through a difficult time but lik eyour tagline says surely with every difficulty comes relief. I am so happy with this update you cant even imagine how i felt when i went through my inbox. You really write their feelings and thoughts so well. I love the song you chose, and it suited the update perfectly. Thats another thing i missed about you, the songs and quotes. Loved it. That kiss 😳 that was hott. and the rain in the end😭 with uday on his knees, heart breaking. I did see the vow and i know what retrograde amnesia is, manyata's confusion and battling with trying to remember written very well. Please dont let her go back to dadisaab i know he promised but i dont want her to go back. i think something should happen in the rain, i have a strong feeling manyata's memory is not just going to pop back so just make her fall in uv all over again. i would love to read a romantic hot update from you. 😳 i loved the dialogues the everything was so awesome. Very well written shahi. thanks for pm and please update soon. After reading this one im more eager for the next one.

AWW thanks afsoo, for your over flattering words😳😳
I am really glad you enjoyed reading and could feel the emotions they experienced, like i say nothing is more satisfying knowing those reading felt what you portrayed through the story.
You know me and my music... each situation in life has a song...lolšŸ˜‰
Yes i also enjoyed the chemistry and acting in the movie more so it was based on the true life story of a couple. hmmm this is uv we talking about i really dont think anything is going to happen there way dadisaab will want it to be...šŸ˜‰ lol everyone wants a romantic rain sequence truth be told so do i...😳 i love passionate intense uv... lets c if i can get him back after that kiss... lol
Thank you afsoo, i loved this comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Afsana01

yes i almost forgot i love siggie or collage of manveer. Really suits your story very well

thank you Afsoo... hugs
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saakhi01

Awesome update shahi... Loved it thanks saakhi, glad you did
U hv described uday's pain n emotions soo vividly that i felt like crying... aww 😭
Shahi i want my ferocious, fearless n lil arrogant, egoistic uday back šŸ˜‰ lol haan he will back
Who gets what he wants by hook or crook, this devdas wont do... no uv is in no way a devdas,, he just a passionately intense man that loves to deeply and hurts even worse...
Noew u r back wid updates, so this calls for a party 😃 šŸ˜†lol haan let me know when you having the party i will surely attend
Next update make it romantic...

kya baath hai sab keh dil meh romance.. lol lets see what i can došŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
Helllo0o0o0ow my dear Shahista...h0w are you ????? 😃 babe i missed you like hell, seriously i am very glad that u came back, i am jumping by happiness, and your surprise update increased my happiness even more...THANK YOU...THANK YOU...THANK YOU so0o0o0o much 4 updating 34th part. šŸ¤— i missed this FF, after reading it i am feeling great peace...šŸ˜†
well the chappy was so0o0o thrilling and marvelous, full of deep emotions...šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ and you wrote each and every word perfectly, no doubt. 😳 I am amazed by uday's harsh words towards manyata's family and his sister...he was totally hurt inside out... he was correct on his side that why they didnt tell HIM... and the moment of reliefe and worry was when manyata woke up... i was so0o0o happy but she has lost her pretty much memory 😭 😭 😭... poor uday, but he make a good decision by not sending her with her family and let her live with him...but that even not work, i felt like hugging uday, he is bearing alot, he really love her 😭 the kissing scene was really beautiful 😳 i loved the way he lose control over her and kissed her and she do respond, i thought that this will take the whole ni8 and uday will get what he want but then she pushed him and he went out...😭

but i think the game has now begins...šŸ˜† he is totally drunk and drenching in rain and manyata goes to help him...i just wish somethings to happen between them and she gain her memory back. well the story is going awsumly on ri8 track...i am loving it, and you also build the suspense for next update... seriously cant wait to read more... it was such a power pack update and i think next one will be romantic... finger crossed. šŸ˜† again thank you so0o0o much Shahista... you take your time and wrote it...it means to me alot...i enjoyed it,each word was clear and meaningful...the whole environment of the story felt real...and u make my day.😊 thanks 4 the p.m...love u and hugs.

i have a request for you that please please please update one day being cindrella also...i loved the story and read it again and again please when u got time do update it šŸ¤—

take care and be happy. šŸ¤—

Edited by mimi.maik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Shahi plz don't be sad that its long..On the other hand I was delighted that it was a long update..Your n Navi's updates are more enjoyable when they are long..I was scrolling the page to see that how long it was and when i realized the length I was happy like a child is for a chocolatešŸ˜†...

Also I want Uday to get back his Manyata at any cost with his fierce actionsšŸ˜‰...whether M wants that or not😔 i don't care...But that Karan should not...😔..I can see you have the best of abilities in long updates..Plz make the next one longer than this😳..n for this Chapter Thank You so much...



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi


Shahi plz don't be sad that its long..On the other hand I was delighted that it was a long update..Your n Navi's updates are more enjoyable when they are long..I was scrolling the page to see that how long it was and when i realized the length I was happy like a child is for a chocolatešŸ˜†...

Also I want Uday to get back his Manyata at any cost with his fierce actionsšŸ˜‰...whether M wants that or not😔 i don't care...But that Karan should not...😔..I can see you have the best of abilities in long updates..Plz make the next one longer than this😳..n for this Chapter Thank You so much...



AWW YOUR COMMENTS BRING THE BIGGEST SMILE TO MY FACE. THANK YOU GARGI, LOL LIKE A CHILD FOR HIS CHOCOLATE šŸ˜† HMMM GARGI I CAN SEE YOU DEFINITELY MISS THE VENGEFUL YUVRAJ LOL YOU ARE NOT WORRIED IF HIS PRINCESS WANTS IT OR NOT BUT WE BOTH KNOW HOW LONG CAN SHE BE IN DENIAL OF HER WHAT HER HEART SAYS? ALTHOUGH SHE WILL NOT MAKE THINGS EASY FOR HIM, AND YOU KNOW UV LOVES A CHALLENGE. AS FOR KARAN... LOLšŸ˜†šŸ˜† I BETTER NOT SAY MUCH AND NOT LET HIM UPSET YOU EVEN FURTHER...Confused PATA NAHI ABOUT HOW MAKING THE NEXT UPDATE LONGER BUT READING COMMENTS LIKE YOURS MAKES IT ALL WORTHWHILE... DIL SE THANK YOU...šŸ¤—

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