Dekha Ek Khwaab - Their Dream Continues -BK 2-UPDATED Chap 35 - Pg 138 - Page 63

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Hi Guys, my dearest and sweetest apologies for the delay. I was meant to update yesterday but had to rework the whole update due to the many ideas running around in my head'.lol. But rest assured I will make up for it yes that's right not a DOUBLE but TRIPLE UPDATE' just for you GARGI AND ANU and all my loyal readers lol, get ready for some serious reading'.As the leap has progressed so to has there been many twists in the story.. major one being manveer separation and manyata illness. This chapter is solely to clear a lot confusion. As it shows the family coming to know and the sacrifices they will make accordingly. Also bear in mind if I clear everything in one update lol' then it will be pointless reading right so just sit back and and enjoy and yes next update will totally manveer as this one didn't include them. As you guys know I give individual attention to each of my characters who are the backdrop of my story'and this one plays a pivotal role is showing that'

Ok guys once again my tagline

The couples ''that are truly meant to be'' are the ones who go through everything that is meant to tear them apart and come out even stronger than they were before'

'' So lose not heart, nor fall into despair,

For you will be superior if you are true in faith''

THERE IS NOTHING MORE BEAUTIFUL THAN FALLING IN LOVE'

LIKE THEY SAY FALLING IN LOVE IS EASY. KEEPING THAT LOVE ALIVE EVERYDAY IS DIFFICULT'..IT WILL MAKE MAKE YOU, BREAK YOU, TEST YOU, BRING OUT THE BEST OR WORSE IN YOU.

THERE IS NO PERFECT PERSON' YOU JUST HAVE TO FIND THE RIGHT ONE AND MAKE HIM PERFECT WITH YOUR LOVE!!!

HERE IS CHAPTER 28

Begins with a flashback

Manyata had been feeling unwell since the morning, while it was normal to experience the nausea and light headedness. The pain was getting overwhelming and she could feel that something was wrong' as she held her stomach. Even her doctor was running tests back and forth ever since her last check up and kept asking her to take plenty rest. The look in his eyes however was saying something else. She didn't want to trouble uday now. He barely gave her break with his constant fussing over her and making sure she eats and rests all the time, at times all she needed was just a few minutes to herself. She was so grateful when he was called in for the meeting urgently' unnathi was out with jai. She had insisted they go out shopping for all they do is babysit her when uday is not there.

She lay on the bed holding her tummy, the pain had subsided and she just felt extremely weak.

' You know you are quiet the little rascal hey, just like your father. Gave me quiet a fright earlier, I am just happy you are ok my angel'

Dr Khuranna was briefed in my manyata's doctor after receiving her blood results and he just confirmed what was suspected. They both watched her talking to her baby unknown as to how to break the news to her.

Manyata looked up as both doctors walked in.

' Doctor can I go now, yuvraj will be home soon and I don't want him to worry about me'

'Yuvrani Manyata.. this is Dr Khuranna a renowned specialist in autoimmune diseases from the UK'

Manyata looked at him confused wondering why is she being introduced to him, none the less she smiled and greeted him

'Nice to meet you Dr Khuranna, but I really need to be going now. '

As she was moving to get up from the bed, a sharp pain twinged in her stomach causing her to scream

While both doctors rushed to her and put her back on virals, she blacked out screaming

'please save my baby .. doctor..

End of Flashback

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I cant believe this dadisaab, bhabhi made such a big sacrifice for dada, for her people' for her life, how could we have not seen that?'

Tears rolled down unnathi's cheek as she read the report'..

'I became suspicious when Dr Khuranna sent the invite for the research centre, when I contacted him, he told me how Manyata had become the private trustee of the much needed Center for Auto Immune Diseases, and slowly the puzzle started to fit but when we met her at the temple it was Vidya Asam who confirmed our worst fear and only she can help her'

Unnathi wiped her tears looking at both komal and Rajmata confused as the name seemed vaguely familiar to her.

'Dadi Saab' wasn't Vidya Asam from the tantric bengali Kamakhya Temple that was destroyed during the Mongol invasion?'

Rajmata looked up and was surprised that unnathi was so well informed considering the royal youngsters of today don't believe in or acknowledge that they exist

'Haan beta she is the very same one, she and a few like her with the same capabilities have survived and have been wandering ever since as you know many don't believe in them and consider their powers to be evil which is untrue as not all tantrics are evil there are good tantrics who use their gifts to help like there are bad who use it to promote and spread evil, I must say rajpurohitji has thought you well'

'Dadi Saab history and culture has always fascinated me, unlike dada who doesn't believe in or acknowledge their powers and capabilities. I know and believe that they exist and form an integral part of Indian history and culture. How is she going to help bhabhi?

Unnathi listened as rajmata explained everything. She was overcome with emotion hearing the condition. Whilst she was happy that manyata will get better and not be in any pain, she was sad that things will never be the same'.. she wiped away her tears

' Is that the only way dadisaab?'

' Haan beta, it is the only way' and please your dada can never know about this'

Unnathi nodded her head slowly knowing full well this was going to be the hardest for her to keep this away from him. She turned to walk away and stopped at the door

' Dadisaab when you all are going I want to see her' for the last time as my bhabhi and Yuvrani'

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Komal was uncontrollable after knowing the truth, she couldn't believe how her daughter had sacrificed everything for her riyasat for her love, she touched manyata and jai's picture. She missed them terribly and wanted nothing more than to hug them both. She couldn't imagine what manyata must have gone through after losing her baby.

The doctor had told her how the disease started'.

Flashback 2 days ago on receiving invite from Dr Khuranna for the new Auto Immune Diseases and Research Centre

'Dr Khuranna.. unfortunately Yuvrani Manyata'does

'I am so sorry for your loss Rajmata ji, I didn't expect her to go so soon. She was so enthusiastic when sponsoring the research centre but refused treatment after her miscarriage, its such a shame she was a great women'.'

Rajmata was speechless' as was komal who stood there looking at him

'Dr Khuranna, what I meant to say was unfortunately Yuvrani Manyata does not live here anymore, nothing has happened to her and what treatment and since when was she funding this research centre?'

Dr gulped nervously, he realized he had spoken to much and clearly her family still didn't know the truth, he had sworn to her that he would never let anyone know about her sickness and funding the research centre but he thought she had passed away and surely by now her family would know the truth, where is she now? He wondered'

'Dr Khuranna meh tumse baath kar rahe hoon?'

'I am sorry Rajmata ji I just realized I have another urgent appointment to get to and I should be leaving now''

Rajmata knew he was deliberately trying to get out of there'

'Dekhiye Dr Khuranna, we need to know if something is wrong with Yuvrani and how we can help her' tell me I am pleading with you what do you know?'

After much hesitation and he finally let it out when seeing the pain and turmoil her family was in.

'I was called in after by Dr Astana to confirm and diagnose that Yuvrani Manyata had lupus'.

Lupis is in many ways the most fundamental of betrayals in autoimmune diseases. The body's immune system, schooled to identify and purge outside invaders like bacteria and viruses, mistakenly turns its force instead on healthy organs. The result is inflammation and often lasting damage to the heart, lungs, joints, brain, kidneys, blood and skin.. (Dr khuranna explained everything how she had fainted while at the surgery and that was when they broke the news to her and asked to abort the baby but she refused) We had informed her that there was no way she could carry the baby to full term as her body was not strong enough, she was well aware that the treatment options for lupus were very limited and also very harmful when pregnant. The surprising thing is Yuvrani Manyata never shed a tear when hearing any of this, however she had sworn us to confidentiality as to never tell anyone a word of her illness. As doctors we had no choice but both Dr Astana and I constantly checked in on her. We also quiet sure her family would have seen the changes in her but I guess not. I was so surprised to find out that she had reached her 6mth of pregnancy which was a miracle in itself and that was when it happened'. She was too late in her pregnancy to have a D&C and because of the lupus we could not risk surgery, she had to give birth to her stillborn baby boy' I will never forget the look in her face when she held him. I cant imagine any mother going through that pain' she also came to know she could never conceive again. After that we had persisted her to get treatment but she refused and instead gave me money to start up a research centre that can help find cures and early diagnosis for immune diseases like lupus, cancer and many such diseases that people are not aware off. We were asked to remove all records of her from of hospital but I had kept them with me for some reason'. Today I wanted to thank her and let her know that we have the best researchers all aboard who have been able to diagnose symptoms earlier thereby making treatment much more effective'.

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Unnathi was never good at keeping things least of all from her dada, she was an emotional wreck and the last thing she needed was see him now. She would break completely, how could she explain everything that she had just heard. She had promised dadisaab and '.

'Choti where are you coming from?'

She stopped in her tracks and didn't want to turn around'.

'I was just.. I went to visit dadisaab and' '

'Is something wrong choti?'

She gulped closing her eyes, she wanted so badly to tell him everything and almost would have had his phone not rang'. She breathed a sigh of relief.

She went up to her room and looked up Lupus as she switched on her laptop and began reading'.

Powerful yet imprecise medicines to control symptoms and complications, like the immune-suppressing steroid prednisone, are all that doctors have had to offer. Medicines to treat lupus are often as damaging as the disease itself. Which explains why bhabhi never went on any treatment she didn't want any risk to her baby''' stem cells were not guaranteed as her body could reject them anyway. Bhabhi, I wish I knew. Maybe I should have been around more often, I would always see you staring out and deep in thought or even when you fought with dada I assumed its just your hormones but instead you were battling to deal with your loss and the sacrifice you were about to take. I know why you refused treatment you lost your desire to live knowing you cant give dada and jaighar the heir they so badly needed and that what all the fighting and purposefull insults were aimed at dada to make him resent you but he loved you too much to fall for them that was when you played your final card knowing what it would do to him'. Oh bhabhi'.

She was relieved to hear her phone beep as she wiped her tears'as she received the text she had been waiting for from Karan. He and jagat had been helping her in trying to trace manyata and finally they found her.

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Brijraj had only just found out the truth and was overcome with grief as he listened to tantric Vidya Asam, he knew her very well, she had helped komal conceive for manyata and was a renowned tantric often used by the royals in ancient years. While he knew the capabilities of a tantric, he never thought he would see her again and presently tantrics were not given any importance or recognition'..but after Dr Khuranna he knew there was nothing that could be done medically.

'Maharaj I just want her back, healthy and safe. I don't want anything else. Our family is scattered and we are living like strangers in our own home, I am not going to let anything happen to her. I spent many years without her when murari had taken her away I will not let death take her away now, my rani betiya had to carry her dead baby in her arms, can you imagine how she must of felt, what she went through? And we didn't see a thing? We are terrible parents to have not known'.she loves us so much, loves uday so much.

She held on to his coat as she cried' her tears not stopping.

'Komal, please control yourself. We didn't know because she hid it so well, she didn't want to hurt us, that's why her visits to us slowly minimized and now that you think it, she would smile but a fake one that would never reach her eyes. We always assumed it's the tiredness of her pregnancy'.she did everything to push uday away and make him resent her and when that was not working she made it seem like she aborted the baby knowing that would shatter him completely that's why she asked Dr Khuranna and Astana to get rid of her information , except for those two nobody else had record of her giving birth to a stillborn.

Rajmata walked in as she listened to brijraj and komal wiping away tears as she had come to a decision'

'Komal no one is going to take her away. The happiness that she has given this family, her riyasat, her maharaj will never be forgotten by us and the biggest sacrifice was walking away. When she needed us most, we were not around for her. My time as Rajmata is over, I have spoken to mahasaaba. They were not surprised knowing full well to know that I handed everything over to udayveer, he has been taking care of this riyasat and this state and no one can do a better job than him. I have done all the legalities and the lawyer will be sending him the paperwork shortly'

'Par ma saheb uday will not like this and will get suspicious now'. How do we keep such a big truth from him?'

'Komal we have no choice, you know very well the conditions and if uday comes to know now he will walk out and lose everything, we cant let that happen. Manyata didn't want that to happen that's why she left, besides devghar is better off merged with jaighar and now soon raighar once he gets married, so we know our people will always be taken care off'.once born a royal your life is never yours'.destiny has played a cruel joke on uday and manyata'.

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Well guys that was a very long and insightful update into the history behind manyata's illness and much of the leap' I know lots are missing the possessive overbearing tumultuous yuvraj and his hungry appetite lol.. but remember he will be back very soon'. And with a vengeance.

Lets end with Teri Meri ' loved this lines fits in perfectly' and please don't forget to comment and like and yes don't forget next chapter and the next..' enjoy'.

Hugs

Shahi

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Ik dooje se huwe judaa, Jab ik dooje ke liye bane
Separated from each other when made for each other''

Tumse dil jo lagaya toh jahaan maine paaya
Kabhi socha na tha yoon meelon door hoga saaya
Kyun khuda tune mujhe aisa khwaab dikhaya
Jab haqeeqat mein use todna tha


When I loved you, I got the world,
but never thought (even) your shadow will be miles away,
O god why you gave me such a dream,
when you had to break it in reality..

OK GUYS I AM DOING MY BIT AND MAKING UP BY GIVING A TRIPLE UPDATE SO PLEASE HIT THE LIKE BUTTON ON EACH CHAPTER AND NOT JUST THE LAST ONE... WHICH IS WHAT USUALLY HAPPENS😆.. THANK YOU... SEE YOU SOON

Edited by Shahista01 - 12 years ago
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Yeyyy!!..Me first RES!!!😛😛😃

Edited****

Ok this chapter was amazing..You are superb in emotional scenes Shashi..i was waiting for today to get the updates but you are giving 3updates?!!!..Wow that goes for a party..I am a bit unwell today but ur news cheered me up!😃

The entire revelation was so touchy...I could visualize everything. Well Manyata leaving Uday needed such strong heart n she indeed had one.

Unnati crying n hoping to see her bhabi n yuvraani one last time before her daada gets married to someone else was very sad n emo again...Poor girl she is bound by duty...

The most tragic part was Manyata giving birth to a stillborn baby and holding it one last time...😭😭...Nothing could have been more sad than this n i almost burst out Shashi...Manyata still managed to hide it from her family n appear ruthless in front of everyone...

Rajmata did a good thing by handing over everything to jaigarh n leaving...For once she thought from her heart...bt ya one thing tht she did from her mind was not telling Uday as he would have given up his estate too n everything would have been in a loss..

fab chapter Shashi...👏..now will read the next chapter..yeee
Edited by sweet_gargi - 12 years ago
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😆yipee let us have party to
night.we r getting triple update.

hai shahi...😃
update was very emotional shahi.
well beautifully written very emotional
update.

now unnathi knows everything
about manyata.now she knows
y manyata left uday.even if she
know everything she cannot tell
to her dada.poor girl.

manyata giving birth to stillborn
was very emotional.i literally cried.
even iam a mother shahi.i know
wat it feels wen a child is born.den
here manyata taking still born in
her hand and having her last luk.
nooo.

unnathi wid help of jagat & karan
going to trace manyata.ie a good
news.if she is found may b udays
engmt stops and have a scope for
manveer union

devgarh merged wid jaigarh.daadi
saab d perfect ruler gave devgarh
in hands of another perfect ruler.
she knows devgarh is safe on his
hands

felt sad for komal.poor mother.her
two children away from her.

all in all chappy was amazing and
very emotional.loved every bit of
it.ur r an expert in writg emotional
scenes and today i learned abt a
new disease also.i google search
to know more abt it.

continue soon dear.

😃 anju
Edited by anjuroopak - 12 years ago
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Edited
First of Shah Didi
thank you for taking time from ur busy schedule to
update
and thanks so much for updating specially for me , gargi and a few othrs

It made me feel special
TRIPLE UPDATE ??? wonderful
i have just read chp - 28
2 more to go ...

Thanks a ton Shah Didi
As always loved the quotes

Chapter 28 was great
it was very insightful
Lot of things were finally revealed in this updated
Love the way You portrayed M
She is very strong
despite knwing abt her condition she didnt get treated
for fear that it vud harm her baby ...
Whn she knw that she vudnt b able to concieve ever again she
didnt want to live😭
M made so many sacrifices for her love, her family , and her Riyasat .
it is indeed true that a life of Royal is filled with sacrifices

But VJ and J too sacrificed their happiness
to stay with their sister
For their Queen even thought she never asked for it
Love the way U maintain the essence of Royalty Throughout Your FF
Rajmata is portrayed the way she is - brave , clever , sacrificing , a true royal

Good thing M 's family came to knw about the truth
i m not sure whethr its a good thing that UV is kept in the dark or not

Vidya Asam ...
seems interesting
Glad U decided to introduce a tantric

There Is Hope After All

Gonna read Chapters 29 , 30 and thn comment on them ...

Once Again ThankYou so much for the updates ...
Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Awsssmmm shahhh love it tooo the core update soonnn
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Sorry for editing it late
The update was great.👏
SO now we know why Manyata left Udayveer and also the reason why she was behaving so weirdly towards Udayveer.
and DS is thinking too much about her riyasat than Uday and Manyata's happiness😡
Heading 2 read the triple update now.😆
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UNRES YOU UPDATED

OMG SHA so you finally updated.. and that too a triple update. Do you have any idea how happy I am' but you forgot to pm. Anyways you are forgiven for giving us such a treat. Truly you are the queen of emotions

Chapter 28

Undoubtedly the most touching and heart rendering update. The emotion and feel in this update was superb. Jesus can you write girl.. your talent should really be recognized. What a way of expressing words and feelings. I could feel and relate to every thing in this chapter. Finally the family know, even though I suspected manyata's predicament you cleared all confusion and uncertainty.

Poor M, that was horrific what she went through. Lupus?? Something new I learnt, I cant even imagine what she must have felt holding her dead baby in her arms, her perfect life came crumbling down when she fell ill and to keep it away from her family. That could not have been easy but she was strong to have to sacrifice her life for the betterment of her people and husband. How difficult is it to put up a brave front and behave normally when inside you are dying and in grief. Makes sense why she was rude and kept pushing uday back. She couldn't risk him or anyone else knowing her condition and her not being able to give jaighar the heir. Truly tragic and once again you did total justice in making us feel that pain.

Unnathi after knowing the truth cant tell her brother. Its true what ds said 'the life of a royal is never your own' I like unnathi, even in the serial, she was one strong character and I am glad you kept that in tact. It was heart breaking for komal to miss her children and feel m's pain. Also she blamed herself for not knowing, brijraj really impressed me I must say. He stood up to the plate and consoled his wife, for once like a caring husband and feeling daughters pain like a father and not a king.

Tantric' Whooo this is a nice twist. I love how you get your point across while explaining their role at the same time. I have heard of these tantrics watching fear files.. lol and jesus they are capable of some serious stuff but like you said I suppose some are good and some bad. But I am very curious and have some what of an idea of the condition?? While I am happy that ds handed everything over to U, was that some kind of a condition and what sacrifice? Are they walking away from devghar?

So karan and jagat are helped unnathi trace manyata, good to know they are still in contact. I was supa excited when I read that hoping for a manveer union but something tells me you are not going to let that happen so easily are you sha? Well sha ds was wrong its not destiny that's playing the games?? Its you' and I personally love it.

And your quotes and thoughts are beautifully intact. I love it especially this part'.

THERE IS NO PERFECT PERSON'YOU JUST HAVE TO FIND THE RIGHT ONE AND MAKE HIM PERFECT WITH YOUR LOVE!!! Well sha I am on the look out for yuvraj udayveer , when you meet him next time tell him to look past manyata' lol

Truly supafantabolous update and very much needed. It was very emotional and truly missed some manveer'

Thank you sha

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Originally posted by: ricna

RESERVED😆 BUT WHEN EXACTLY ARE YOU PLANNING ON UPDATING😕😭


RICNA..Well thats our dream that continues.😆.as in exactly when will the Update for dream continues come..!
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Originally posted by: sweet_gargi


RICNA..Well thats our dream that continues.😆.as in exactly when will the Update for dream continues come..!

🤣 AWW GARGI.. YOU CRACKED EM UP WITH THAT ONE. I PROMISE I AM MAKING IT UP TO YOU GUYS.. IN THE NEXT FEW MINUTES...
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CHAPTER 29 - updating

Hi its me again.. and this is a full manveer update... pure bliss to all that missed the angry possesive yuvraj... . Take note it does contain adult scenes while its not hectic or totally xplicit, its just in my way of expressing their love and passion. Also please note it is in no way meant to upset or offend anyone. Stay away from reading if its not for you
Begins with Stevie B's When I Dream About You:
There was a time in my life
When I opened my eyes and there you are,
You were more than a dream,
I could reach out and touch you,
Girl that was long ago.
There are some things that I guess I'll never know,
When you love someone
You gotta learn to let them go.

When I dream about you,
That's when everything's all right,
You're in my arms
Here next to me, forever.
When I dream about you,
Girl you never go away,
Just close my eyes
Wait for my dreams
Cause I still love, loving you...

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Flashback...

'Princess I really don't think you should use that dress?'

'Kyu? Exactly what is wrong with it?'

'Nothing at all my love.. its just not you'

'Excuse me' not me?? I saw last night you were really enjoying these kind of dresses at dinner'

She was furious not to mention extremely jealous at all the attention her husband got whenever they went out and last night really got to her.

Uday looked up at her confused but saw her nose red flaming with anger. She looked adorable when she was angry. While she would never admit that she was jealous, he knew she was and he loved it'.

'Princess they were just friends, I lived here for many years while completing my studies you know and besides none can compare to my smoking hot wife' '

He leaned in pulling her closed to him while she pushed him away'

'Haan, haan anyone should learn how to charm from you.. MR SMOOTH OPERATER, now if you will excuse me I am going to shower now'

He looked at her naughtily.. eyes blazing while she walked away' 'Can I join'

'AND NO YOU ARE DEFINITELY NOT JOINING ME'.'

He smirked looking at her '.

'Princess do you really want to play that game?

She ran quickly while he took slow steps towards her, his eyes lighting up wickedly not breaking eye contact

'Kaunsa game yuvraj?'

She loved teasing him as she reached for her towel looking straight into his dark, penetrating eyes and gulped' she knew very well she didn't stand much of a chance but she had the upper hand as she smiled sticking out her tongue at him before running to the bathroom and locking the door. She laughed happily knowing there was no way he could enter' and decided to tease him about it standing behind the door ..

'Kya hua yuvraj'. Don't you want to play now?' she giggled

He loved the sound of her laughter and her innocence when running around, she brought out the child in him but when she denied him and teased him , she brought out the man in him' a man whose hunger is on overdrive now'

Uday smiled as his eyes lit up mischievously'. Listening to her

'Oh my love, I want to play.. I always want to play. And you seem to be over confident today.. are you forgetting that I invented the game'. You are not going to stay in there forever are you'the game is on princess, better be ready '

Manyata gulped and started to feel extremely nervous, sure their games were exhilarating and all new to her but he always won' OH TERI HE IS RIGHT I AM SO DEAD WHEN I GET OUT, NO RELAX MANYATA JUST TAKE A NICE LONG SHOWER AND HOPEFULLY HE WILL BE GONE TO HIS MEETING WHEN YOU GET OUT'

She stuck her tongue out at him as if he could see her MR INVENTOR, MY FOOT

'I heard that and stop sticking out your tongue at me'.'

Her eyes widened as she looked around for camera's

'Relax princess and enjoy your shower, stop looking around there are no camera's'

How does he do that? He reads my mind, invades my thoughts' She blew her fringe of her eyes and sighed. Oh well atleast he cant get in here now, that must be annoying him so badly' she smiled triumphantly placing the key on the washbasin

She turned on the taps and started undressing as she freed her hair from the hairband

Uday smiled as he heard the water running and headed out closing the room door


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The water felt great against her skin.. so refreshing. She squirted some of her favourite strawberry and vanilla flavoured shower gel and lathered it on' mmm love this smell

'Me to'.'

Her eyes opened instantly as she heard his voice and felt his hands tracing her back'.😲

'Tum yaha' I mean how ' she stammered as the water dripping down his perfectly chiseled body distracted her.

He loved getting that reaction from her, it added to her childlike innocence that he so badly wanted to rip right now, he marveled at her breathtaking body that left him wanting, yearning, needing'. This women will never know just how beautiful she is, and she is all mine

'Sshhh princess, you wanted to play right.. so game on'

Leaning in he squirted more of the shower gel on whilst not taking his eyes off her. It was intensely alluring as she was under his trance. She knew his game only to well and she was not going to let him win so easily' she looked away quickly

'Listen uday I am done with the shower now and I have to go for the massage so Umm you just '' she stammered as he made his way towards her, placing both his arms on either side of the steamy glass.

He knew the effect he was having on her..

'You were saying princess''

Her breathing hitched as he was just inches away from her lips, sexual allure and prowress in the air as his intoxicating eyes lustfully waiting'

'Uday I am .. I was only teasing, how ' did.. you get ' in.. I mean.. I locked.. the door and the key..' each word became harder for her as she tried to look anywhere but in those dark captivating eyes.

'My love'. You forget I have my ways besides the hotel staff were only to helpful when they found out yuvraj's wife was locked in the bathroom' he smirked wickedly

Manyata didn't how to react or what to say'..

'Princess I want you... now.. here...'

With no preamble whatsoever his lips were on hers, ravishing, demanding and claiming he pulled her forward placing her hands across his chest claiming her lips yet again taking full advantage, his tongue expertly exploring mouth. Sucking and biting her lower lip and manyata moans into his mouth' each kiss of his brought out something in her, he really was amazing. The way he looked at her, the way he caressed and touch her, she felt his love in everyway. His tongue tentatively strokes hers and joins in a slow erotic dance that's all about touch and sensation, all bump and grind as she runs her hand through his wet hair

His hands making way throughout her body as he gently squeezes her backside. He moves her closer against his hips, for her to feel his seething desire, which he languidly pushes against her. The skin on skin contact was electrifying'as her blood was racing rapidly leaving her breathless and intoxicated. Grabbing her wet hair forcefully at the base of her neck as his tongue did what they did so expertly well, biting and licking.

'Aarrhh' manyata screamed it was blissfully painfull. He tugged at her soft milky skin pulling it against his teeth

All over her neck and skim just below her ear, she threw her head back in pleasure. Eyes closed as her body was on fire from the sensations his mouth and hands were creating

He looks at her, sexy as hell. Eyes blazing and her heart is pounding like never before. They have been married for 11months and he has explored and worshipped her body in every way, teaching and showing her just how much he loves her yet he could never get enough of her, its often said after marriage men get distracted and bored but that's never happened with her and she prayed it never would. She couldn't imagine him like this with someone else, touching, feeling, loving' he was hers and she was his'.and everyday he found a new way of expressing his love. She couldn't deny him, she loved him more than life itself'.

Slowly' gently his lips close around her breasts and he sucks and licks around them.

Oh '.this feels so '.manyata was in a different state of intoxication as her fingers grabbed into his hair pulling.

'Arhhh'

Her legs felt like jelly, wobbly and weak from the indescribable pleasure she had just received, she wraps her arms around his neck holding him tightly as he takes his place in between her legs as the cool feel of the, smooth tiled wall against her back as he pushes himself against her so that she is sandwiched between his heat and the chill of the cold tiles

'Wrap your legs around me love..' breathless

He moves quickly and sharply, filling her completely. He grasps and holds on to her behind firmly, his fingers digging into her soft creamy skin as he begins to move, slowly at first deliberate, invading and all consuming.

'Ud..ay'

Manyata wasn't sure she could take much more, she was sore from her ever so active and never tiring husband who hardly ever gave her a moment to herself and now her eyes closed as she tips her head to one side.. the water running rapidly as his control unravels, speeding up.

He moans, and he pounds on'merciless, a relentless rhythm. He grasps her head between his hands and kisses her hard, his teeth pulling at her lower lip again. He shifts slightly, and she can feel something building deep inside her. She starts to stiffen as he moves on and on.

'Yesss, game on " he hisses close to her ear. He stills, then swivels his hips once, pushing deeper, making her groan.

He growls, his voice low and husky. He runs his teeth along her jaw, nipping and sucking knowing perfectly well what he is doing to her as her body begins to quiver. Her thoughts are scattering... there's only sensation... only him 'Listening to his harsh breathing, labored and fierce at her ear. Knowing that he's lost in her . . . she moans, panting. His mad passionate love for her driving her higher, overwhelming her, taking her, until she couldn't anymore' spiraling into intense all consuming pleasure and he joins her finding his release with a deep moan and buries his head in her neck and buries himself inside her groaning incoherently

'I love you'

His breathing is erratic and rapid as he kisses her tenderly not moving, still inside her

Open your eyes beautiful, I want to see them

His voice is urgent, implacable. Her eyes flicker open momentarily, and the sight of him in front of her me'his face taut with ardor, his eyes raw and glowing' as she catches her breathe finally coming into focus he gently pulls out of her, holding her steady while she places her wobbly feet on the floor. The bathroom is now cloudy with steam' and not from the hot water running'.

The pleasure and pain both were indescribable'

'So princess next time don't make the mistake of locking me out' when I say I want to shower with you, that's exactly what I intend on doing'.'

He smirked as he kissed her forehead and then the tip of her nose.

'You are one distracting master piece my love, now lets shower and get you in some clothes or we will never end up leaving the bathroom'

She smiled although weak from exertion but an extremely satisfied one' and playfully hit his chest.

' I love you'

' I love you too my princess'

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OK GUYS THATS FOR THIS CHAPTER... WHICH WAS THE MOST DIFFICULT TO WRITE... ESPECIALLY FOR YOU GARGI.. SO I HOPE ENJOYED... AND GUYS PLEASE DONT FORGET TO LIKE AND COMMENT... STAY TUNED FOR NEXT CHAPTER...
HUGS...
Edited by Shahista01 - 12 years ago

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