Dekha Ek Khwaab - Their Dream Continues -BK 2-UPDATED Chap 35 - Pg 138

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Prerna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1051

superb update.loved it.it was beautiful.fianlly manveer were back.the kiss was so hot and their emotions during the kiss was beautifully written.hope manyata will remember uday in these ten days.but i am sure uday will make it...happy to see old uday back.thanks for pm..i know i am commenting so late.sorry for that

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1052

Hey... Shahi...

Sorry for the late comment...

Both the chappys were awesome...

Just add every good adjective here...

I would comment chappy wise...

Chappy 34

I was crying throughout the chappy...

I am not complaining though...

Because it was worth it...

As it shows that how much brilliant of a writer you are...

When Uday was in so much pain...

I was feeling it too...

Manyata remembers her family even Karan but doen not remember Uday or anybody of his family...

And now I think that she would want to go to Karan...

I hope it does not happen...

So her body wants him but her mind rejects him...

The last scene was so intense...

And now that Manyata has gone in the rain to take care of Uday..

I hope to see some romance...

And yes when I was reading the chappy even I was thinking of The Vow and even Jab Tak Hai Jaan for matter...

Chappy 35

Oohhh... This is getting so much more interesting...

So first they have a wonderful kiss...

And then Manyata declines to have any feelings for him..

Bad bad girl I must say...

But its not her fault too...

Ohh god... I missed this Uday so much...

And now he is back with a bang...

So they would have a beautiful love making now...

Last line of Uday's was just so naughty...

So it is the end of Book 2...

A big congo for Book 3...

Update soon...

And thanx for the PMs..

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ricna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1053

Sha

please please. please update

Don't make go get out a search party

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shristy

@anaghasinha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1054

pls pls pls update
when are you going to update ?
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eagerly waiting to read more
pls update. ...

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ricna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1055

Sha where are you??

Please update... please 😭

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Iris Zain Ibrahim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1056

Hey

One of ur guilty silent reader

I loved this

So awesome 😳

Yuvraaj udayverr is back

Yay

Update soon

PM me plzz

Edited by Ashey99 - 10 years ago

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SaraloveAshiyal

@SaraloveAshiyal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1057

shahi bht hogaya hai. Ab kardona Updateee. Yrrr ;(

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SaraloveAshiyal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1058

mujhse ab bardash nae horaha. Plz do upload na. Kitna rolahoge Aap. Itni dafa parh chuki aur rona bhi bht ata hai. Kardo update Book 3. Plzzz

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jagz11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1059

Hey friend I hoped that U were going to update this . The story seems incomplete . My fb friend Alisha is so frustrated that most of the stories on here are unfinished. What do you think... ❓ 😒

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SaraloveAshiyal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1060

Dear Writter Im Silent Reader. Maybe I Like Some Parts. And Rest Not. Due To I Want to Read Next Parts. Reallyyy I Love Ur Story To The Core. I didnt Press Like Button But it doesnt Seems that I didnt love it. Infact I Love Ur Story Alot. So Thats Why Want To Read all the Parts In One Go. Dear I Really Love Ur Plot. Really Love it At Book 1. But at Book 2 I felt disheartened that Manyata Lost her Child. Carry Her Baby and then... Cant say. And she forced Uday to Believe that she is A Culprit. And Now When Uday knows Every thing U Snatched Manyata Away from him. She Even doesnt remeber him. Her Pure love. For Which She Sacrifised. Fight In Bad Times with Destiny and Remain Herself Strong Infront of Her Family. But She was Weakest. And Now She didnt remeber him her Uday. Her Love. Her Life. And how Come she remeber Karan in 2009.

And Now in the Last Part U Mentioned through Uday's Dialogue that old Yuvraaj UdayVeer Singh is back. From whom Manyata Loved. Reallyyy Im getting Desperate What Tricks will Uday will Play to Remeber their Love. And Does 10 Days will Be Enough. Ahhh There are many Questions im my Mind and Book 3 is the Only answer. Hope U r getting My Point..

And Now Plzz Let ManVeer be Happy Forever as we do read in Story Tales... Plzzz Yrrr Now ManVeer Live Happy. And Not Separate Them. And do some Magic That Manyata will give Heir to Jaigarh according to Jaigarh People and Royals. But for ManVeer their Child will be ''Pyaar ki Nishani'' Symbol of Their Love... Plzzz Posttt Book 3. Kab karhoge Aap Haan. Kitna Aur Time loge... Plzzz... Aap Bht Late karhe ho Aur Apne Readers Ka Dill Break karhe ho for noT Posting It. Kardooo na.. Plzzz...

Jaldiii naaa... Plzzz. Im Sad and Crying becox Aap nae karhe Post abhi tak. :( ;(... Aur agar Aap chate ho that I'll be Happy more Happy like this :) :D then do post Book 3 soon. Plzzz... Its Wish Of Ur Readerss. Plzzz...