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Posted: 12 years ago

AMAZING..👏

kriyaansh talk..vicky threatening shivam..lovely..
punishment..hehe
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovd it...
osm written n going greatt
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nyc update
But itna theory
Coll me roj pak jate hai teacher ke assignement and hod ke project boring ho jata hai
Aur gest lecture hota hai tho aur pak jate hai
Update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
shivam ...😡...wats the mystery
behind...?

vicky is too possessive towards kriya.. luv their bonding.

luvd kriyansh's convo
punishment for vi,sh,ne,bh and amar lol..😆


updte soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesome update
kriyaansh in one room bt wht thy doing only work
reyam ke ragging ki sazza mil gayi
shivam ko kya hua hai bar bar tang lada raha hai
love d update
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you...thanks a lot for all ur lovely comments...n I am getting long long comments now so very happy...feel like writing more n more bt I am a very lazy person... 😭 ...n on top of that vl not be able to write for next 8-10 days... bt today vl give 1 update n vl try giving 1 update on my another ss kriyaansh swaron also...bt vl not promise ...I vl try...so enjoy reading...hope u guys vl like...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum plz cont
soon
n do pm me dear

loved it...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 5: (continuation)

All dispersed after the announcement...all left for home though it was just afternoon bcoz all had to prepare for the next day...sh ri viha bh were busy in preperation for thr next day seminars...kriya went home n started preparing for her 1st n 2nd yr seminars...swarey busy in unpacking thr luggage n setting up thr rooms..actually they are staying with vi in his home only..after 3 hrs of preperatn vi comes to sw room whr swarey were just chatting...

Rey : hogayi kal ki seminar preparation??

Vi : finally...bt still toda slides ready karna baki hai ...vl do it at nyt...n u guys settled down now?

Sw : yeah...finally...n now tu bata ab sare tere frnds ke barein mein...I m eager to know them..very interesting frnds hai tumhare...

Rey : yeah...bt vi pehle ye bata ki sh n kr sisters hai tho dono ka last name kaise diff hai?? I mean sh ka rai prakash n kr ka gai...

Vi : wo actually unke parents separate hue hai...actually sh n kr twins hai..han dono dikne mein diff hai bt they are twins..n jab wo 8 yrs old the thr parents got separated...n un dono ko kaha gaya that unke mom I mean aunty ko job mili hai tho ghar se bahot door hai unka company so she z moving near to her work place along with kr...n till they were 13 yrs old thr parents managed somehow hiding the truth from them...n till then sh used to go n meet her mom n kr, her dad...bt 1 day they came to know abt the truth that thr parents actually got separated...kr n sh tried all ways to patch up between thr parents bt nothing worked out..after 3 yrs of trying sh lost hopes n stoped trying...bt kr still fights with her mom abt this matter..aftr knowing the truth, sh stoped going to kriyas home n kr to her dads house...kriya feels bad bcoz they know that thr parents still love each other...its thr parents ego that stopping them to accept it...kr is very angry on her parents...now she treats sh as her mom n dad...even sh takes care of kr like she z her baby...huh thr are so many things to tell abt them bt batadunga dheere dheere badme..

Vi : now coming to other frnds, bh has his own work shop whr he customiZEs bikes n small cars according to customers reqirements...he z very good in that...he has got this talent n knowledge from his dad bt his dad z no more now...he manages everything by himself n he earns good money from all kinds of vehicle servicing...he has 4 people working under him...

Ri - she z a baby doll of her parents...uske parents ka own designer outfit n artificial jewelry ka show room hai bahot bada...whr they design outfits n matching jewelry for diff occasions..they design outfits for marrages n even spl functions also..city ka famous show rooms mein se 1 hai inka boutique...so even rinni has developed this talent...she too designs dresses for our age girls n boys...she has her own collection section for youth...sh too works for it...

Ne - wo ek simple princess hai apne parents ka...her father owns a financial company...she z the only daughter for her parents...usse dance ke sath sath acting ka bahot shok hai..she wants to do something in that area bt her father has strictly told her that if she completes her bcom with distinction then only he will allows her to do whatever she wants for her future...otherwise she has to help her father in his company...she has managed to get distinction in 1st yr...this yr also working hard...lets c...

Vi : so ye raha sabka intro...

Sw : hmm impressive...har koi talented hai matlab...bt muje ek cheez samajmein nahi araha hai...ki who z this shivam...?? N y he z so possessive abt kriya?? N aap sab log aise q behave karte ho uske sath ??

Vi : swayams last qun was enough for vi to get hyper...he literally shouts - bcoz he deserves such reaction from us...mera bass chale na tho uss saale ki hath pair(leg) thod du...bt mazboor hoon...darta hoon...kahin iska bhi ulta asar kriya pe na pade...she has already suffered a lot bcoz of that blody moron...I dnt want to risk her mental status any more...

Rey : what do u mean ?? I mean usko kuch karne se kriya q hurt hogi ?? Y she vl get affected...??

Vi : bcoz uss saale shi ki mhu (mouth) knife ki tarah chalthi hai...uske baatein...I just hate him for that...uski baatone hi tho kriya ko kya se kya bana dia hai...she was a very bubbly girl ...no1 prankster thi...sabkuch mitha dia iss bloody shi ki baaton ne...aaj bhi wo day yaad karta hoon na tho I...I just...I just feel like...kill that basterd...kriya ke life mein kya kam probs the jo iss shi ne aur bada dia...probs tho fir bhi teek hai yaar...kr z a fighter she can manage any kind of probs in her life bt isne jo kia na...uske lie saale ko shayad god bhi maaf na kare...kriya tho usse apna accha dost manti thi...bt
He..?? Backstabber...

Rey : par kiya kya hai usne...??

Vi : throws the pillow which was next to him on the bed...takes a vase near by to throw bt swarey stops him n takes vase from his hand...vi controls himself...sits on the floor closing his face with hands...after few secs takes deep breath n says - leave it guys...jab wo sab aapke saamne aana hoga ajayega...dnt even want to remember that incident...n plz clg mein kisi se bhi hammre frnds mein se ye bat mat pucho...specially kriya ya sh se...plz

Sw : hugs vi from side way n says - teek hai...u relax...

Rey : moving his hand on vi head - u ok ?? U dnt wry hum aise kuch b bat nahi karenge iske barein mein...

Vi : just gives a forceful smile n says thanks to them...

Evening all 3 were just having tea in leaving room n relaxing...the door bell rings...rey opens the door...kr was standing infront of him...bt before he could say something kr enters the house ...goes n sits next to Vicky silently...vicky understands the matter..bt the other 2 did nt...kr takes the tea cup from the table n starts taking sips silently..without looking at any1..

Rey : arre kr wo mera cup tha...

Its then..kr looks at him..

Kr : haan tho...?? I needed badly tho bas lelia...agn taking a sip, speaks slowly...waise bhi half cup hi hai isme tea...that means u already had half cup...so chill..

Rey : exactly...wo mera pia hua cup tha...u knw...

Kr : so what..? Tum apne frnds ke sath ek cup mein tea ya ek plate mein food share nahi karte kya? ?

Rey : smiles...okay okay sry mam...u have it...

Kr : smiles...tum mana bhi karte tho bhi main ye tea peethi...

Vi : lagta hai some1 is in good mood...jagada karke aane ke baad bhi..

Kr : han...nahi...I mean haan I am in good mood bt maine kisi se jagada nahi ki aaj...

Vi : accha ...aunty ke sath argument nahi hui aaj tumhari ..??

Kr : finishes her tea n keeps it back on the table...n then snatches Vicky s cup n says - nahi...aaj argue karne ka mood nahi tha tho nahi ki...mom ko bola vi ke ghar ja rahi hu n agayi yhan...

Vi : smiles...good improvements..

Kr : I knw...keeps the cup on table..folds her leg n sits comfortably on the couch...so whats up...kya kar rahe the aap log..??

Sw : kuch nahi bas gappe maar rahe the...u tell me...preparations hogaye kal ki seminars ki??

Kr : yeah...bas 1-2 examples add karne hai 2 presentations mein...I vl do it at nyt if I get time..otherwise I vl manage without adding them in slides...

Rey: impressive..if u dnt mind can I do it for u..?? I mean bht tired n frustrated lag rahe ho...

Kr : haan...seminars ke sath sath chat room mein sabko reply bhi karna was lil bit frustrating bt duty hai...I have to do it...

Rey : ya saw ur suggestions...manna padega...sabko unke lie jo jada tuff subject hai uspe seminar dene advice kar rahe the...taki they vl get grace marks in that...good idea to make them work on thr tuffest subject...

Kr : smiless...good observation...

Rey : smiles...thanks...waise tum kaunse subject mein seminar dene wale ho. Kal??

Vi : accounts..

Sw : hmm tho its a diff subject for kr...??

Vi : no ...she z the topper in accounts..

Swarey gets confused..

Kr : I dnt have tym to think abt my tuffest subject n work on that...so I am giving seminars on most easiest subject for me..during exams tym I vl utilize more tym to work on other subjects than accounts..

Rey : cheating...sabko kuch aur advice karo n khud kuch aur karo...not fair..

Kr : mr ags...kal se apna post sambhaalo den u vl understand how difficult it z to manage everything along wid managing ur studies..

Rey : okay okay sry...I was just kidding..

Kr : I knw...its ok...vicky bhook lagi hai...

Vi : no way kriya...

Kr : plzzz...making baby face..

Vi : no...aise shakal mat banao ..i am not going to prepare anything for u...order karta hoon kuch...

Kr : plz na Vicky...bas Maggie hi tho mang rahi hoon...2 min tho lagte hai banane mein...plz banado na...

Vi : bt kriya kuch order karte hai na...plzz

Kr : nahi chalo utho...I vl help u...she pushes vi into the kitchen...the other 2 also follows them...smiling at the bonding kr n vi shares..

Kr sits on the slab...n vicky starts preparing Maggie for every1..

Rey : wah kya help kar rahi ho vicky ki ??

Kr : yahan par kitchen mein aake baiti hoon yahi bahot bada help hai...q Vicky..??

Vi gives her angry look on which kr keeps her finger on her lip saying sry...

Sw : waise kr how did u say abt me only by seeing at me. For the 1st tym only .? ?

Kr : I have this habbit of studying on face reading...I research on it all the tym...I studied so many articles on it...so bol lethi hoon ..

Rey : waise mere bare mein nahi bataya...he was standing next to kr whr she was sitting on the slab..

Kr : tumare barein mein..smiles...moves her hand on reys hair, chabilaal...

Rey : chabilal ...?? Ye kaun hai..??

Kr : tum ..?? Tumhi ne tho kaha tha tumhare bare mein batane kelie...

Rey : oh tho my new nick name...miss ramaira se..??

By listening this both sw n vi gets shocked n looks at rey ...who was busy in staring at kr...they understood every thing...

Sw puts his hand on Rey s shoulder to stop him staring at kr..

Vi : kr tune aaj bittu ko q daanta...?? Bechara ro raha tha..

Kr : Maine usse manners sikhaya bas...bado se aise baat karte hai..??aise majak udhate hai.??

Vi : bado se ya mujse..??

Kr : silent for few secs then - w whatever...waise bhi clg ke boys kya usse kam bhigaad rahe hai..?? Apne love letters uske thru dilwate haI..n tumhe kya lagta hai ki bittu un letters ko bina pade de deta hai..?? Aise hi ??

Vi : tho thume pata hai ki bittu wo love letters padta hai.??

Kr : u mean wo sachme padta hai ?? Muje tho doubt tha..chodungi nahi mein uss sale ko..

Vi : kriya language..

Kr : sry...

Vi : chodo..n han uss shi ke saamne kab tak aise silent rahoge..?? He z misusing it..

Kr : arre haan...rey plz b careful...abse tum mere sath kam karoge tho u have to face shivam...wo tumhe kuch na kuch jaroor kahega hamesha...u plz handle him carefully...uske baathe bahot hurtful hote hai...dnt take them seriously...otherwise thumhare identity ko hi badal denge uske baatein..

Rey was about to reply bt kr continues agn..

Kr : usse na...obsession hai kriya naam ka...ek ajeeb si paagalpan...wo kisi ko b kr ke kareeb nahi dhek sakta ...he vl definitely try to hurt u rey...she was almost in tears...remembering all those bitter words which shi said to her in past..

Vi was hell shocked bcoz after that dark incident, kr never talked abt that with any1..not even with him or with sh...even kr stopped talking abt shi completely...she became a serious person after that incident..she stoped crying completely...yes after that nyt, kr did not cry till now..bt today she spoke abt that incident with rey...not completely bt atleast said something...

Rey understood the situation of both vi. N kr...

Rey : dnt wry...I vl handle him..

Kr smiles n says : I know...which gives another shock to vi ..bcoz after speaking abt that incident, vi expected kr vl bcome sad remembering all those things bt here she z smiling with rey...

Done for now...I know its lil bit boring bt I am trying to express the bondings in this ss n as well as the character sketch also...next update also vl b the continuation of the same part...sry...




Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing updte
luvd kriya nd vicky's bonding
updte soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
first to comment yes its really amazing update you foccussed mainly on all characters intro and its was nice

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