IPKKND OS - The Ache [Romance]

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maria29

@maria29

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

tooo hot..thx 4 the pm..

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Loved how Arnav takes care of her. Wish there were more men like him. Waiting for the next installment.

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loca

@loca

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

I cant even describe hw wonderful ur writing is. It is truly amazing :)

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shanon

@shanon

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Awesome update.
Sensual and hot.

Waiting for your next update.
Thnx for the pm.

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Nkayani

@Nkayani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Too HOT 😳 😳
Cant wait for the other updates. 😊

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

wow this was damn hot ☺️
loved it
waiting for the next part
do continue soon
thanks for the pm

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

That was some heat! I just loved how you approached the whole idea of this track. It was so bizarre the way this husband treated his wife in the show, especially some of the tracks, one of them being Mrs. India. But you very cleverly showed his support to her. Although this is a very foreign concept to me - (because how can you separate your soul from your being, and wasn't that what their love was all about!) - a husband treating his wife in a degrading and demeaning manner the way he did in the show, (well this show was bizarre to begin with anyway, and I doubt it would have been so successful were it not for Sanaya and Barun - but that's a post for another day!) - you captured their love beautifully. It is just too bad that they could not do this in reel life.
Thanks for this bliss!