Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 3)

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CRAZY4CARTOON

@CRAZY4CARTOON

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#391

oh
he proposd wow but laad governor style ufff dats k
she hs 2 say yes yeh yeh

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Russell

@russelskhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

wow..finally arnav told her... i liked how he handled the topic... its going to be a long night for both for sure...

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saarah96

@saarah96

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#393

amazing updatee
lol funny when she didnt realise he want to marry her
wonder what will happen with Aakash?
and what will khushi reply?
arnav is really shrewd=]

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9424976

@9424976

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Posted: 12 years ago

#394

This was a really interesting update. I love how you stayed true to Arnav's character. He's insecure and he's not going to come right out and tell Khushi that he loves her. He wants to make sure that their relationship is stable, that she won't ever leave him for Akash or anybody else. He's becoming restless and so he made this horrible decision, in my opinion. A relationship starts out with the truth, I feel like the way he was describing things, by saying that Akash had it all and he only had Khushi to hold on to..made it seem like the reason why he wanted Khushi was not because he loved her but also because he was quite alone and knew that Khushi was an advantage for the kids and himself. Now I know that is true and whatnot but I would have liked a more romantic Arnav, one who takes the risk for his love. But alas Arnav is not like that!! And I don't know why but I feel like this marriage will be problematic, I don't want Khushi to feel like she's marrying him just for the children's sake, he has to prove to her that he is marrying her for Love as well, I hope that he does that before the marriage starts. Khushi should know about his love because she too is insecure about where she stands, and I would like it if she took some risks as well! Really great update and a lot to think about!

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nivii

@nivii

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#395

Sooo he finally asked her! And what is very important he told her it will be a real marriage!! That is big!! Now lets see what khushi s decision will be :)

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bluetaj

@bluetaj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#396

Oh what a chapter...a man of few words indeed. Can't wait to see him confess...beautiful piece...presented a practical solution with an underlying' in all sense' relationship...nice.

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Ashg

@Ashg

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#397

Finally we are getting somewhere

Beautiful update

KHUSHI say yes

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rupzloveu

@rupzloveu

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#398

awesomee updatee..

loved it..

finally arnavv proposed to khushi...

fabulous...

thanx for the pm... :)

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.ProperPatola

@.ProperPatola

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#399

I saw this SS a month back or so and saved the link to read when I have time after reading the prologue!

and Today, I remembered this SS, and when i started reading it, I read all the chapters in one go!

Your story telling skills are amazing! The way you have built up the characters and especially the relationship between Arnav and Khushi is beautiful and stable and very clear!

Another thing I adored were the description of Arnav and Khushi's feelings, expressions, gestures and thoughts throughout, were so realistic! And also showing their respective thoughts on the same matters from their perspective! Arnav's surprised, jealous monologues and expressions were worth giggling, grinning and Loling!

There were so many touching moments in these 19 chapters! It was kinda a shock when I suddenly read about Nani's death and Arnav again closing himself in shell! But you showed, their relationship moving when Arnav reacted or gave in to Khushi's threat! It was heartening!

It was so saddening! painful to read Arnav thinking about that he does not have a family to give to khushi but Akash does, but the next moment, I had a smile reading the next paragraph after that!

These two moments had me in tears!

Thankfully Arnav proposed straight away! Arnav is sure of his feeling towards her but Khushi is not!

Overall, A beautiful story, beautifully written!👏 Waiting to read the next update soon!

Edited by Arshi.K. - 12 years ago