UPDATE FF MAR K BHI part 52 pg 109 14-08-13 - Page 58

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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update :) loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
So sorry for my late comment...
It was a fantastic update.
What the?????
Roshni was behind all this...
She should rot in hell...
A sudden revelation and a big jhatka for us.
Fantastic update.
Loved how each and everybody is supporting Arjun and Riya.
Waiting for the next update.
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PART 50

Arjun: chalo Riya Doctor nay tumhain discharge kar diya hai aab hum ghar ja saktay hai.

" itni bhi jaldi kiya hai Arjun, Riya tumharay sath nahi jaey gi", a voice disturb him from back, he turned his face to see who is saying him , he find Mr. Mukherjee infront of him.

Arjun: Why ? uncle

Riya's father: mei nay kaha na Riya tumharay sath nahi balkay apnay baba aur Bua k sath Kolkatta jaey gi .

Riya: baba mei apnay pati ko chor k kaisay ja sakti hun.

Shalini enters in Riya's ward room: Tumharay baba sahi keh rhay hai Riya tumhain in k sath kolkatta lot jaana chaheay.

Arjun: maa ye aap keh rhen hain.

Shalini: ha beta.

Arjun: par kyun maa?

Shalini: Riya ka tum say dour jana hi behtar hai.

Arjun: mei apni Riyu ko itnay duaon k bad hasil kiya hai mei usay is tarha khud say alag nahi kar sakta.

Shalini: usay jana hi hoga.

Sameer: Shalini Aunty theek hi keh rhe hai Arjun.

Arjun: saam tub hi inka sath day rha hai aakhir kiya ho gaya hai tum logon ko aaisay kyun bol rhay ho, dekho mei ab apni Riya say ek pal bhi dour nahi reh sakta samjha tu?

Tanvi ( Sameer's mom): Ye mera faisala hai Arjun, Riya ko tum say dour jana hi hoga. It's my final decision.

Arjun: mom ye nahi ho sakta. Aap aaisa kyun kar rhi hai?

Tanvi: aaisa hi hoga Arjun ?

Arjun: par kyun mom?

Tanvi: aagar aaisa nahi kiya toh Riya ko apna ghar bahu bana k kaisay laungi.

Arjun: What?

Shalini: Abhi bhi nahi samjha tu? Teri mom teri aur Riya ki dobara shadi karnay ki baat kar rhen hain.

Arjun: mom iski kiya zarorat hai.

Tanvi: shaid tum bhool rhay ho dunya ki nazaron mei tum pati patni nahi ho. Aur har larki ki ek apni shadi ko lay k kuch kahwab hotay hai jo Riya nay bhi dekhay hun gay, ab unhen pora karnay ka waqt aa gaya hai, wo bhi shadi koi shadi thi Arjun na nach na gana , na mehindi na choori, na dhool bajay na barati kuch bhi toh nahi thay, itni sadgi say shadi nahi ab meri bahu k har arman poray hun gay, mei poori reeti riwajon k sath apni dono bahuon ko ghar laun gi.Kyun shalini.

Shalini: bilkul , magar Tanvi pehlay tujhay aur tere betay ko meray ghar aana hoga meri beti ka hath mangnay k liay mei aaisay apni Beti nahi dungi.

Tanvi: hum larkay walay hain utha k lay jaen gay.

Sameer: mama. Shaid aap bhool rhen hain.

Tanvi: kiya ?

Sameer: riya aap ki bahu bad mei hai pehlay meri behan hai.

Tanvi: yani tumlarki walon ki taraf say hai.

Sameer: ha .

Arjun: oey tum unki taraf kyun ja rha hai tu mera chaddi buddy friend hai na, phir tu kaisay unki taraf ja sakta hai. Phir mera koi friend nahi hoga meri shadi me mere sath.

" mei hun na tumharay sath , tum nay aaisa kaisay soch liya k mei tumhara sath itni aasani say chor dungi" She is Roshni.

Arjun: tum yahan kiya kar rhi ho.

Roshni: apnay gunahon ki saza bhugatnay aai hun Arjun.

Arjun: chali joa.

Roshni: nahi , tum mujhe saza nahi dena chahtay beshak mat do magar mei khud ko saza zaror dungi, meri saza ye hai k mei apnay hathon say tumhain Riya ko sounp dun, meri Saza yahi hai Arjun, mei tumhain kisi aur ka hotay huay nahi dekh sakti thi, magar ab mujhay saza bhugatni hai mei tumhari shadi ka hissa ban k pal pal khud ko saza dena chahti hun , please Arjun Mujhay bhaly phansi day do magar mujh say dosti nahi toru mei apnay doston ko nahi kho sakti Arjun mei tumhain aur saam ko nahi kho sakti mana mujh say ghalti hui hai, shaid mera gunah maafi k kabil bhi nahi hai magar tum log mujhaay jeetay jee maut na do , please Arjun please saam mujhay meri dosti ka haq day do, mei tum logon say apni Dosti bheek mei mangti hun please.

Arjun sees towards Riya, Waiting for her Response , Riya puts her hand on Arjun shoulder and nodded her head in positive Who is waiting for her Reply. Sameer is still stand quite his face is blank he doesn't know what he do? Arjun move towards him and hold his hand and they both walks towards Roshni and hold her hand . A smiles spread on Roshni's face She smiles and hug them both at the same time. Riya is smiling by standing back, but Roshni sees her clearly, she apart from Samjun and takes steps towards her.

Roshni: Thanks Riya, Thanks for everything, mei nay Sirf Arjun say suna tha k jab usay pyar hoga tab dunya dekhay gi us k pyar ko waqai aaj mei nay dekh liya us k pyar ko kitna khalis hai uska pyar intehai sacha , koi toh hai jis nay is pathar dil Arjun k dil ko moam kiya hai, mere pyar ki barish jis chatan ki pighla nahi paai tumhari bezaban ankahi mohabat nay aaisa kar dekhaya kaisay Riya , sach mei tum dono ek dosray k liay hi banay ho, mei any tumhain buhat dard diya hai mujhe maaf kar do Riya.

Riya keep her finger on her lips and hug her .

Riya: nahi aap apnay jahgha bilkul sahi thi, aap nay jo kiya apnay pyar k liay kiya aur mei nay jo kiya wo apnay pyar k liay kiya?

Roshni: ha Riya sahi kaha tum nay mei nay apnay pyar ki jang lari aur tum any apnay , par Arjun kisi ek ko milna tha na yahan jeet tumhari hui Riya, meri zid meri aana har gai, Roshni jo hamesha yahi socha karti thi k wo jisay chahay hasil kar sakti hai uski ye soch har gaya, kyun k wo bejaan chezon ka soda kartay kartay na janay kab jeetay jagtay Shaks ki keemat laga bethi wo nahi janti thi k pyar bikao nahi hota, mei haar gai Riya mei apna pyar har gai mei apna Arjun har gae.

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Tanvi: Arjun jab tak tumhari aur Riya ki shadi nahi ho jati tum us say nahi mil saktay aur na hi shadi honay tak Riya ETF jaey gi.

Arjun: mom wo meri patni hai aapn meri patni ko mujh say dour nahi rakh sakti.

Sameer: mom bilkul theek keh rhi hai Arjun , jab tak teri aur riyu ki dobara shadi nahi ho jati tab tak no milna julna, I am right mom.

Tanvi: Right Sameer , but ye rule ap par bhi lagu hota hai, Simar say dour hi rehna.

Sameer: no way mom, aaisa kaisay ho sakta I mean Riya aur simar ek sath chutiyun par nahi ja sakti, simar ko wahan ETF mei Riya ki jagha cover dena ho ga.

Arjun: jab apnay par baat aai toh kaisay cheekh nikli, meri biwi ko mujh say dour kar k kitna khush ho thay na. Mom kisi ek ki ETf ko zarorat hai na Riya Simar ki jagh cover day day di after all she is married…

Tanvi: Arjun no means no.

Arjun: mom ye zulaum hai.

Sameer: ha mom hum bhook hartal Karen gay aap k khilaf…

Arjun: Dharna dalen gay .

Sameer: aanduland Karen gay.

Arjun: Sarak block kar dyn gay.

Sameer: Hum par hatyachar band karo .

Tanvi puts cotton piece on her both ears and Say them: " chilatay raho"

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Riya and her father and Buaji stays in shalini home along with Roshni.

Riya and Roshni shares same room at night. In Arjun home he is impatiently waiting to see her Riya , to meet her wife so he decided to go Shalini home, he reaches Riya and Roshni's room through ladder, Roshni opens her eyes by hearing some noise in balcony she stands and went to see who is outside their room, she opens the door to sees who is there, she become surprise by seeing Arjun.

Roshni: Arjun tum is waqt yahan.

Arjun: riya kahan hai.

Roshni: wo soo rhi hai.

Arjun: I want to meet her.

Roshni: tum Riya say nahi mil saktay.

Arjun: kyun nahi mil sakta , apni wife say milnay k liay mujhe tumhari permission ki zarorat nahi.

Roshni charms fade up, but she reply him.

Roshni: ha ..

Arjun: please ek baar mujhe meri Riyu say mila do please Roshni mei apni riyu ko dekhnay k liay betab hun.

Roshni: wo toh dikh hi rha hai, jabhi toh tum sehriyun k sath itni raat ko us ssay milnay aaey ho.

Arjun: hatto na mujhe andar janay do.

Roshni: nahi.

Arjun: kyun?

Roshni: mom nay pabandi lagai hai tum par k tum shadi tak riyu say nahi mil sakttay..

Arjun: isi liay mei chori chupkay aaya hun ab aagay say hatto bhi.

Roshni: kaha na tum nahi mil satkay jar hay ho ya mom ko bulaun.

Arjun: kyun meri jaan ki dushman bani hoi meri sansein udhar hai please mujhe janay do na. kaisi dost ho tu mere liay itna nhai kar sakti.

Roshni: theek hai sirf 15 minute hain tumharay pass jao mil lo, apni Riya say.

He come inside the room. Riya is still sleeping.

Arjun: meri nendein ura k madam kitnay sakoon say so rhi hain. But he stands there.

Roshni: go Arjun jao milo apni Riya.

Arjun: tum pehlay jao na.

Roshni: mei yahe rahu gi .

Arjun: mujhe akelay mei kuch batein karni hai apni Riyu say.

Roshni: toh karo na mei yahe hun na. I promise mei tum dono ko disturb nahi karun gi.

Arjun: no please tum room say bahir jao.

Roshni: nahi mei nahi jaun gi.

Arjun: please.

Roshni: Arjun tum nay behas mei hi 3 minute nikal diay hai now you have only 12 minute in yiur hand agar is k bad tum yahan say nahi gay toh mei mom ko bula lungi.

Arjun: marwao gi kya, ok please Roshni , I want to spend some moment with my wife please..

Roshni: ok mei jati hun par sirf 12 minute ok.

Arjun: ok.

She leave the room and Arjun sits beside Riya.

Arjun put his hand on her hair and brushing her hair.

Arjun: Riya.

Riya become shocked after hearing his voice she suddently sits.

Riya: aap yahan , yahan kaisay aur Roshni ji kahan hai please aap chaley jaey mom nay dekh liya toh please Arjun aap jaey na.

Arjun put his plam on her mouth .

Arjun: sshhh Relax chill Riyu. Roshni ko me nay room say bahir bheja hai ttak kay apni wife k sath thora romance kar sakun.

Riya: par Arjun.

Arjun: sshhh kuch na kaho sirf pyar karo ..

Arjun bent his head and kiss on her forhead. She hugs him.

Arjun: Riyu pata hai tumhain kab say nahi dekha meri betab tha tum say milnay k liay.

Riya: toh aap aa gay na.

Arjun: ha aa gaya, agar abhi tum say nhai milta toh shaid kal subha tak meizinda nahi rehta kyun k meri sansein toh yahan hain na.

He kisses on her lips softly.

Riya: Arjun..

Arjun and Riya chatting with eachother and 12 minute passed , Arjun is on the way to kiss Riya but Roshni opens the room door and enter in Rooms. Roshni put her plam on her eyes .

Roshni: mei any kuch nahi dekha.

Arjun: tumhain bhi abhi hi aana tha.

Roshni: sorry arjun sorry riya mei nay tum dono ka kissing movement kharab kar diya.

Arjun: ab bolo bhi kyun aai ho.

Roshni: aap k 12 minute poray ho gay hai now please you leave.

Arjun: itni jaldi ..

Roshni: ha .

Arjun: par mei nay toh abhi sahi tarha say apni Riyu ko dekha bhi nahi.

Roshni: tum kiss karnay mei itna busy thay k Riya ko niharna hi bhool gay,

Riya is blushing after hearing such compliment.

Arjun: ok fine I am going ek bar meri shadi ho janay do mei tum say aur sameer say gin gin k badla lunga.

Roshini: Arjun tum chaho toh kuch dyar aur ruk saktay ho

Arjun: ok .

Arjun and Riya sits on couch and chatting with each other Riya put her head on his shoulder and his strong arms cover her as her protection , her head slide on his chest when he tightend his grip around her, she hides her face on his broad chest and Roshni is lying on the bed and sees both of them romancing and chatting of love.

Roshni ( in mind): waqai Arjun Riya hi tumhara sacha pyar hai , mei kitni pagal thi jo tumhain Riya say dour karnay chali thi, bhool gait hi k jis Arjun k liay mei Riya ki jan lena chahti hun us Arjun ki jaan toh riya mei basti hai, ye pyar mera nahi tha na hi kabhi ho paey ga, sach kaha that um any Arjun jab Tumhain pyar hoga toh dunya dekhay gi, aaj tumhara pyar dunya dekh rahi hai, Riya tum buhat lucky ho kash mei tumharay jagha aoti kash Arjun bhi kabhi mujhe isi tarha apnay seenay say lagata kash mujhe Arjun ka pyar mila hota kash Riya ki kismet ki rekhaen mere hathon mei hoten KASH?

as i told you before i am going to ends this FF , i divided Last part into three to four part, First part is above and i try to update second part as soon as possible, Sorry for any mistake
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Posted: 12 years ago
super awesome
everyone is so funny
I was scared at first
but then it's there marriage
super duper
ROSHNI' s pov is also great
love it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update... Ariya getting married again cool... finally Roshini realised...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hope roshni has really changed ...worried
lets hope for all the rasams of the wedding
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Posted: 12 years ago
really loved it dear.. Thanks for pms.. Continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome upate.
Jab shuru hua,i was shocked.
I went,WTH????
But,asli shock aaya baad mein,jab Riya and Arjun are going to get married again.
Phheewww...
Arjun ki jaan nikal di...
Finally,Roshni ko akal aya...
It was lovely.
Ariya moments were too good.
Arjun went to meet Riya,Chori Chori Chupke Chupke...
Hehe...
That was really good...
Loved it a lot.
2nd part jaldi update karna,please...
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
šŸ‘BEAUTIFL UPDATE M FEELING SAD AS ITS GOING TO END STILL HAPPI AS THEY WLL BE TOGETHER AT THE END HAPPY ENDING LOVE ARIYA SO MUCH UPDATE SOON WAITING FOR THEIR MARRIAGE AND OTHER RITUALWAITING FOR MORE ARIYA FF FROM U DEAR PLZ WRITE SOMETHING ON ARIYA SOON PLZ PLZšŸ‘L THNX FOR THE PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Realy nice part dr...
arjun first shocked ..
akhir ye ho kya raha haiii...
lv the way they plane their marriege..
n arjun iis so despooo...
je heee heee kitana betab ho raha tha riya se milane ke liye...
so finaly rosha realised..
lvly part update soon..

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