UPDATE FF MAR K BHI part 52 pg 109 14-08-13

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#551

nice really loved it.. Thanks for pms.. continue soon..

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#552

*Unres*

whoah...
Tht was a great update...
Ariya romance were too good...
Arrrggghhh...
Yeh Roshni khud ko kya samjhti hai...
Jeeteji Arjun ko khush nahi rakh payi,aur,ab dava karti hai ki,Arjun uski hai????
Feel like throttling her...
Such a shocking revelation as well...
Whattt??????
Roshni and Sikander made a plan to kill Riya...
OMG...
Riya is hurt...
Finally,she is ok...
Thank God...
Arjun and Sameer bhai doing something right for the first time...
Roshni ko toh saza milni chahiye,kari se kari sazaa...
ACP Arjun Rawte ki biwi ke upar attempt to murder kia hai,that too infront of everyone...
Finally,Roshni ki Mom bhi usse chutkara pana chahti hai.
Shalini aunty ne sahi kaha,Riya is her daughter...
Great and emotional update,as well...
Starting was really beautiful,especially,when Arjun Riya taking seven rounds around the fire on the terrace,keeping the Moon,as their Witness...
That sequence was really lovely...
I was literally picturising it.
I loved that scene a lot.

Thanks for writing such beautiful story.
Feeling proud and great to be a part of this story...

Agla jo update dogi na,make that second last update.
Fir,last update,then epilogue.

Ek chota demand:
epilogue mein mujhe Ariya,Sameer Simar,Shiza aur Chotu Ruby ke kids' chahiye...

Haha...
Main bhi kitni pagal hu...

Loved it...
Hats off...
Big claps for you...
Thumbs Up.

Edited by zebbie0504 - 12 years ago

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

I don't know mai kya kahun??
Ek taraf saccha pyaa aur dusri taraf kisi ko hasil karne ki junoon..
But i really can't forget ki roshni ne arjun ko bachane ke liye sikander ka saath diya..
Kuch toh hoga uske dil mai..par wo pyaar sayad nahi.
And riya, so selfless girl.
Last part was very emotional..
And riya pe roshni ne attack karwaya tha..
Pagalpan hai uske..
Really feeling bad for both riya and roshni ..

Very nicely written..
Thanks for pm.

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#554

wow what relevations

feeling very bad for all ...roshni insulted the love affection from all f them

thanks for the PM ...pls continue soon

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#555

wow what a update
love it
super dear
continue soon
plz pm me

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#556

WAOO DR READ BOTH PART TOGETHER...always awesome update
part=48
waooo me blushing blushinggg arjunek bhi moka nahi chodata...
lolll...
naughty shree..
locked ariya in room..
how dare that rosh talk to riya...
nicly n beautifuly written...
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part=49
that was awesome mind blowing ...
i m speechless after reading this...
wooo arjun memrised in riya's beauti...
he he heee he think sam talking about riya..
lvd sam n arjun convo...
Ohh hoye..ye arjun bhi naaa..
lift her n goes tarries..
seven rounddd...
how so sweet..
what the helll that roshaniii...
how dare she talk with riya..
achha kiya jo arjun ne use thapad mara..
omggg riya got hurt..
mujhe to laga kahin memory lose vala prog na ho jaye..
but thank god ehsa kuch nahi huya..
N the way arjun handle all this lvd it..
Finaly rosh knew that she is arjun's wife..
Riya ne rosh ko maaf ker diya..she is grate..
Now rosh ko pata chalega risten kya hoten haiiin...
N their kiss in front of alll...
i feel shyyy...totaly bold
update soon ..
n thanks for the pm...
lv u dr For such a beautiful update...
now me back after my exam...