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sonakshigupta

@sonakshigupta

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Gr8 job dear!! Very diff!! Bt awesum!! :D

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desigirl_VD

@desigirl_VD

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

unres

wow this was truly something different

something unique

and i honestly liked it alot

the plot the characters everything was very well written

i loved it! amazing job 👏

Edited by desigirl_taarey - 12 years ago

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Akshata

@aksha2812

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

wow superb story
ur story is Unique
love it

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Shivangi

@peraltagasm

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

O M G!

I have no words! I seriously don't have any.. I mean.. How.. just how did u get sucha freakin AWESOME IDEA?!

I loved it to the core dii.. I mean.. IT WAS SOO DIFFERENT!! IT WAS OUT OF THE WORLD!! I mean.. I dont have words to express how much I loved it.. Every line was soo magical..

I seriously CANNOT exaplain how much I loved it!! I am amzed!

This part was bang on..

No, Your kiss gives me life." I paused to see her face. She shied in front of my intense eyes. "Now let me shower you with kisses till the end of this night, till the end of this life." She closed her eyes in submission and I kissed her again and again, I kissed her madly, passionately, I kissed her everywhere, I kissed her whole night, I kissed her till she didn't start kissing me back. Tonight my journey of immortal life ended with the beginning of my immortal love.

Specially the last line.. Gosh! BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!! Please please write more on TR.. Nd please please please pm me about them.. M sending u a buddy request.. please accept it!!

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abhinaya

@Abhipyaarhua

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Lovely os...u r a really gud writer...!

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Mimi wow, it was super amazing, love the concept. Kisses from hell lovely title. Mimi it was beautifully written, your writing skills is flawless. Plz continue to write for awesome OS

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Zara

@Zara_92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

I'm at a loss of words !!

Its just BEAUTIFUL !

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dh19

@dh19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

totally different concept and very well written.
wonderful job dear.
keep writing more.

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Zuna4Taarey

@Zuna4Taarey

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

somethng very very difff...top of the world😛...wowww👏

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sreelu094

@sreelu094

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

u left me speechless yaar...i so loved ur os mimi.from beginning to end it had a great flow...i wasn't able to cut a single line in btw.just read it completely in a go😳...i should say marvelous job dear👏...ur os was so different and i loved the way u wrote it...but at the end i was like 'oh it finished'...really nice yaar👏 ...great job👏

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