Kriyansh FF~Rabb Mera Tu-Thd2! chp24- pg127 updated! pms l8r

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deepshakriya

@deepshakriya

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

amazing update...

luved it so so so much yaar..

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#612

hmmm nyccc fidaaa di... hayee update sooon...

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Shreya

@krasforever

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#613

awesome update fidu...

i really really really love this possessiveness of Rey for Kria😃

Swayam ko bhi Kria ke paas ni dekh sakta😆 show mein bhi toh yahi haal tha sigh...i miss them so much...😭

aww Kria was upset coz everyone was treating her like a damsel in distress n not coz of wat happended few hours before😆...shooo shweet...

so camping ki tayari... wahan toh khoob maza ayega...that too without taani...

uff phir gussa dila diya Rey ko Kria ne, n upar se chilla bhi rahi hai uspe...

bt uske baad manaya bhi toh...she must be looking super cute...bechara Rey kho jata hai apni Kria mein

Kria ke hote hue Rey kisi ko kyun miss karega...😎

oops!!! gals ne toh achi khaasi planning kar li, ab kya hoga boys ka...

lekin agr Rey ko pehle jaisa gussa aa gya toh kya hoga Kria ka😲...

plzzz continue soon fidzi😛

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#614

*phew* let me take a breathe.. finally I am done with the updates till date..

I loved the way you portrayed a highly possesive and outrageous Rey.. who can not stand any one else laying their eyes on his girl, his Kria

but he murdered a few.. was indigestable.. I agree those men deserve each and every bit of but.. as per the law.. and by the officials of Law rather.. anyways thats your story your way to carry things.. but it really works 😉 atleast it did for me.. a bit later 😆

I really was in love with the track till the appointment with the psychatrist.. like was that all for real.. It was going on so good.. so smooth.. was a bliss.. but then why on earth did u have to ruin that all😡 and then introduction of Tani and she being Rey's current GF.. I once thought you probably have lost it after watching D3 🤣 and its poor tatics to make viewers go insane.. but anysaya he still is possessive and protective about Kria the way he was earlier.. assuring they would unite.. one day.. *haye* *dreamimg*

that is something that makes me stick to this peice of work till you kick that GF of Rey's out..

and yes last but not the least one last question..initially we had KriYansh and ArSh together in you FF.. like cousins and best friends respectively.. than what has happened all of a sudden that the story came up with versions..

Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago

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Fida

@aTTiTude_dIvA

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: -shenz-
*phew* let me take a breathe.. finally I am done with the updates till date..

I loved the way you portrayed a highly possesive and outrageous Rey.. who can not stand any one else laying their eyes on his girl, his Kria

but he murdered a few.. was indigestable.. I agree those men deserve each and every bit of but.. as per the law.. and by the officials of Law rather.. anyways thats your story your way to carry things.. but it really works 😉 atleast it did for me.. a bit later 😆

I really was in love with the track till the appointment with the psychatrist.. like was that all for real.. It was going on so good.. so smooth.. was a bliss.. but then why on earth did u have to ruin that all😡 and then introduction of Tani and she being Rey's current GF.. I once thought you probably have lost it after watching D3 🤣 and its poor tatics to make viewers go insane.. but anysaya he still is possessive and protective about Kria the way he was earlier.. assuring they would unite.. one day.. *haye* *dreamimg*

that is something that makes me stick to this peice of work till you kick that GF of Rey's out..

and yes last but not the least one last question..initially we had KriYansh and ArSh together in you FF.. like cousins and best friends respectively.. than what has happened all of a sudden that the story came up with versions..

first of all thanks a tonn for your frank review...

yess now that i think about it...i feel all the murder thing was a little too much and not something we can relate to..atleast not in ff's, movies mein chalta hai😆

and yess...the whole memory loss thing was when i had no idea where i was heading...u see this is my first FF ever..so pardon please😳

jo bhi ho...d3 se accha hi hai..i mean for us KR fans 😊

yea..was supposed to be a single version...with both arsh n KR as parallel leads, but... the readers themselves asked for 2 versions and that's why...just parted shilpa and kriya's ways.

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#616

ofcourse D3 se better hai.. infact far better.. 👍🏼

n that memory loss isnt that bad.. n writers at times do loose the track of what to write.. anyways.. that was all my perception..

but that all doesnt really matters infact KriYansh does.. for all KriYanshians 😉

Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago