Kriyansh SS: Love Changes you (Link to thread 2 added)

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

woww new kr ss👏

awesome start mannu and loved d cs😃

waiting for d update😳

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Hey guys I'm here...no not completely back...I was just getting bored studying so thought of wirting the prologue. Its a small one... Enjoy... :)

PROLOGUE:

A girl was running on the road from the past few hours. She lost the count on time. Her heart was racing fast and her breathing was heavy. Her legs were aching a lot but she knew stopping now would cause her trouble. THEY would catch her immediately. Sweat was flowing all over her body. She was wearing a white churidar which had turned brownish due to dust and every thing. She was thirsty so much, but there was no one to help her out. There were a few bruises on her body. Some people or better to say a few appointed goons were following her. A car from the other side was coming towards her. She was lost in her own thoughts that she didn't notice it. Luckily on the correct time the driver applied the brakes and prevented an accident from occuring. But the girl had fainted.

On seeing this the driver as well as the lady sitting at the back came out. The lady was kind hearted. On seeing the girl in such a bad condition she bent down to check her. The lady asked the drvier to get a water bottle from thhr car aand sprinkled a few drops on the girl's face. The girl opened her eyes spoke with difficulty "plzz help me". With the help of the driver the lady took the girl in the car. She was sitting on the back seat and laid the girl on the seat with her head in the lady's lap. The lady made her drink some water. After having some water the girl relaxed a bit. Her breathing was normal and was able to sit. "Thank you aunty" she said. The lady smiled at her and said "beta can I ask you some thing".
"Yes aunty puchiye na"
"Beta aapke saath kya huya?? I mean aapke clothes gande hai...aapko chot lagi...kya huya aapke saath??"

The girl turned a little upset and tears started flowing down her cheeks. The lady wiped her tears and said "beta agar tum bataana chaho toh hi bataana". The girl hugged her and the lady reciprocated the hug. She was patting her hair like a mother would do. The girl felt soothing at her touch. She pulled back and said "actually aunty ---------------------"
The lady felt concerned for the girl after hearing her story. She spoke "tumhare parents ka naam kya tha??
"Mere mummy-papa ka naam -------- ---------- hai"
"Kya tum -------- ki beti ho??"
"Ji...aap unhe jaanti thi???"
"Bahut ache se...hum dono bachpan ke friends the...but fir shaadi ke baad hum..we lost contact and ab pata chal raha hai she's no more..."
The girl smiled weakly at her. And again the lady spoke "tum kahan rehne wali ho...its very unsafe for you to stay here"
"Pata nahi aunty...lekin yahan toh nhi rahungi"
"Tum mere saath mere ghar chalogi and mujhe koi excuses nahi chahiye"
She tried protesting but no use. Finally she agreed and both of them left the place

So hows it???
Hope you liked it.
Hit the like tab and leave your reviews.

P.S I'm updating through my phone so PMS will be sent later.

P.P.S For PMS buddy me...

Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

interesting prologue...

good job

waiting for chapter😃

Edited by -Vaish- - 12 years ago

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Nishtha

@Jade_Precious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Yr toh harr story suspense ke saath kyu start karti hai
over despirate ho jaate hain log aage padhne ke liye ;-) :-P

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.....pujan.....

@.....pujan.....

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

amazing n interesting prologue...

update soon...

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Awsome proluge. . . .
4 sure d gal is kriya and tat lady is payal. . . .
Chalo di,
jaldi se jaldi 1st chap bhi update krdo. . . .

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

nice start...waiting 4 next chap...

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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Lovely update shOrt hai toh kya huya👏👏

plz UPdate soon 😃

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Amrutha

@only_kriyansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Prologue madt hai re...vo ladki kria n aunty payal hogi..if its true..kriyaansh ek hi ghar mai maza ayega... kab tumhara exams hoga..taki tum updte karo jaldi jaldi...hehehe