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SARA

@saara76

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Posted: 12 years ago

#831

Wow finaly ... i cant wait for next plase make it soon

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InkyCupid

@InkyCupid

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#832

Awesome update, loved Arnav's apology and Khushi giving him a very hard time... SO HE FINALLY CONFESSED, but it's awesome how he will have to wooo Khush before her gets an answer in return...seriously, really enjoyed reading the story, keep it up!

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#833

hey

I found this SS and as soon as I finished its prologue and first chapter, I couldn't stop myself reading till its last update.

WELL DONE with the story.

This SS is very funny with brilliant concept.

You truely have put your heart and hardwork in this SS.

I hope arnav would soon understand what really khushi wants from him, pretty sure in the next update. So

PLZ UPDATE SOON

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#834

Read your all chapters of your ss in one go and it's awesome and I love it

pls pm me when
U update

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harshita vyas

@chinnuvyas

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

nice ... uff ab ye khushi kya chahti h ???

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sspoorthy

@sspoorthy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#836

ha ha ha amazing update

yeh arnav khushi ke books aur films dekhna chahiye uski baasha samajnekeliye

amazing update

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

well dear..another round of comment ho jaaye?

the update starts with...
"One two chachcha..
Three four chachcha...
let's do chachcha..."( doing exercise to reduce calories)

oh ab woh guldastawala delivery boy hai toh kasam DM ki mein uese nahi chhodungi..uski himmat kaise hui muje bina naam bataye ki aakhir woh kaun hai jo hamein yeh bhej rahaa hai...?..aur dhamki bhi di ki ham na le toh woh varndah mein rakh ke chala jaayega?😡 this time the no. of bouquets was 37th...

par iss guldaste ki sajaavat dekh ke aadha toh gussa shaant ho gaya...
and Mr.Monster said HI from behind...with his trade mark SMIRK and with those beautiful chocolaty eyes...maasha allaah...ab kare bhi kya...?
"saamne yeh kaun aaya dil mein hui halchal..
dekhke bas ek hi nazar ho gaye ham paagal."

lekin, kintu, parantu...aapan Khushi ki aisan jabaan lablabbyi ki jaisan mooh mein ho Center Fruit. ...shooru ho gayi uski jabaan se goliyon ki dhaay dhaay...ufff...

"Did your company suffer a huge loss because of your haughty head?"(pyaare tere pyaar mein loot gaye hum bazzar mein.)

"horn bajaake aa bagiyan ,mein,
thoda aage gati rodhak hai..."

poor lover boy...socha tha kya kya ho gaya...bilkul sahi farmaaya janaab ne..ki mann mein guththi pyar ki suljaana aasan hai.par agar aamne saame koshish karna kitna mushakil hai...aree janaab jab saamne KKG khadi ho tab toh aur bhi mushakil hai...😆

and finally mooh se kuchh shabda nikle...
"Khushi are you even from this Planet?"</font>
well sawaal la jawaab toh jawaab bhi lajawaab...
"How can I even think of belonging of this Planet if YOU do belong to this planet?"( Jaadu, Jaadu...)
again his voice came out "I thought so..."

and round two of goliyon ki...ab conferm ho gaya na ham iss duniya se nahi hai ..toh ab aap jaayiye aur keh dijiye iss guldaste ki dukan ke malik ko ab hamein na bheje...

par Khushi meine yeh saare guldaste bhaije hai tumhaare liye...Q ? q ki tumhe Laal gulaab pasand hai!( well Gulaab ko chaand pe bhejne ka achchha tarika hai..Gulaab maani Mr.Monster aur Chaand maani KKG.)
aur apni KKG ki Rajdhani express phir se shooru ho gayi...
between all fighting and Sorry session...the magical words were finally took place by none other than Mr.Monster to Ms.Alien...

Yahi ki I LOVE YOU DAMMIT...

aur apni KKG jaise ki achaanak Muk-Badhir ho gayi...woh kahi sapno ki duniya mein toh nahi haina yahi conferm karne ke liye apne aap ko chutki bhi kanti...ouchhh yeh to sahi hai...khush toh hui par aise kaise maan le aapan Jansi ki Rani? tabiyat phir bhadki...shabdo ke baan phir se chalaye gaye lekin usse pehle aapan hero ke hosh ood gaye the..kuchh iss tarah ka vichaar chal raha tha...

"she is NOT ALLOWED TO HATE HIM.she has come to this </font><font color="#0000FF">arth with a single purpose;to love him and to be loved by him." wah ji Majanu miyaan...

He wants to listen those beautiful words from her beautiful mouth, from those sweet,red and perfect lips...par naah...Yeh ishq nahi aasan...poor Ashiq...not now baby you have to wait...and those lines by KKG..."aapne ham par apna haq toh jataaya par abhi tak hamaare dil par apna haq nahi jata paaye aap... here aapan Haridwar return ASR ko interpreter ki jaroorat mehsus hui...😆" aap jo sunana chahte hai woh ham kahenge lekin uss waqt jis din aap hamare dil ko jitenge...!

yeh baazi haar jit ki nahi hai..dil ko khush karne ki hai..lekin abhi bhi Mr. Monster ko pyar ka class lene ki zaroorat hai..HOW to conquer KKG's heart.?

and final touch of the fight/war of love by KKG.."Then listen Mr.Raizada I want you to leave me alone.I want you to go away from me, my life and never ever cross my path again..." it,s difficult for him , it's like to live without breath...what will he do now? well actually I guess he will return for her though he said GOOD BYE KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA..the only person who is honoured by multiple sorries...

" tum bin jaau kahaan iss duniya mein aake , kuchh na phir chaaha sanam tumko chaah ke..."(a song for ASR)

after all this is the deal between Mr. Monster.inc and Ms.Alien from Mars/venus..who can even fight with the President of Yugoslavia if she decide..toh phir the mighty ASR kya chiz hai...?😆
Mr. Monster and Ms. Alien ...Rab ne bana di jodi...haaye...

the entire update as usual superb and an awesome...
there are some parts that's remind of the particular scenes from the show...

1) NK's advise for breathing to control his anger while talking with Khushi on her Birthday...

2)Khushi pinched herself, in their roka rasam.

3) The bouquet itself reminds me of the preparation by Arnav with the help of NK (a very beautiful scene).

4) khushi listen kal ghar pe jo bhi..that reminds me of the scene after the cocktail party night..next morning he tries to apologize her.

and last but not the least...the update ends with a thought how will she convince her Buaji for the newly found garden in their leaving room..kyon ki mali toh chal diya...

I think she will call(well actually in her mind only)...Mr.LG...and will start to talk like this..."Mr.Raizada yeh aapki hi galti hai! aap hamesha galat waqt pe galat kaam karte ho!(what the...?) yeh aap apna what the toh reh ne hi dijiye aap hamein yeh bataayiye ki ham Buaji ko kya Jawaab denge? boliye ab aap chup kyo hai?huh pata nahi aap apne aap ko kya samjte hai LG kahi ke! nahi aap hamare liye itne saare guldaste bhejte aur nahi ham yoo ghabharaatein...Hey DM raksha karna. ab ham phone rakhte hai."

thanks for the beautiful update dear.
take care.
waiting for next part eagerly..
love.

Edited by Divyahet - 12 years ago

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Cute6

@Cute6

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#838

37 rose ki bouquets,soorry and i love you...

aapne hamare arnavji se itna kaam karvaya and phir dil bhi tod diya...

yeh kya baat hui...

atleast shortcut mein to boldete ILUD...

ab phir gussa hoke chale gaye arnavji...

i know d reason y arnavji failed buisness ki bhasha nai boli na isliye khushi kumari gupta nai mani...

vo isi ka intezaar kar rahi hai...

agle update mein presentation please😆🤣

d starting of d part wen khushi was cursing d person sending her flowers my mind automatically switched to a scene from the movie RHTDM...

toh diya mirza ke place mein maine khushi kumari gupta to rakhdiya nad imagination pura hogaya😃

den khushi thinking arnav as a delivery boy omg dat was epic🤣🤣

No ... She can't hate him. 'she is NOT ALLOWED TO HATE HIM. She has come to this earth with a single purpose ; to love him and to be loved only by him.

dis dialg ne hamara dil jeet liya👏

"Pyaar mein haq jataana our dil jatana ye dono alag batein hoti hai , Arnavaji! Apane apana haq to jata diya hum par ; lekin abhi tak apana dil nahi jata paye aap.."

hahaha khushi itni hindi mat bolo arnavji ko itni hindi samajh nai aati...🤣

prajakta ji hame bana dijiye translator...

and confessoin of d millenium is over and confesor ko gusssa bhi dila diya...

chalo dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...

thoda jaldi de dijiye update...

dis was after almost 15 days...😒

vaiting...

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#839

Oh poor Arnav. It was indeed a very difficult day for him. First, to apologise, then confess his love to Khushi, after that waiting patiently for Khushi's reaction which never came and try and solve Khushi's puzzle. All were extremely difficult for Arnav. He had shown a lot of patience I must say as he didn't utter a single what the even after all that happened. Nice update :)

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#840

Arnav apologized and then confessed his love for her?!?!? was not expecting that so soon... Par ab kya??? Kinda felt bad for him... Poor soul already doesnt understand much about pyaar etc... Hopefully Khushi will help him figure out whatever she wants...

Btw Mars, Venus , Yugoslavia?!?!?!🤣