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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣 i came across this story last night lol and since then havnt stopped laughing...🤣 i have to admit esp Arnav and his conversation to himself and Shyam were the highlights for me...😆 i seriously cant stop laughing...

ps i have taken a sabbatical of india forums but randomly i came so i dont know if i would comment again or get to finish reading it but i must say this is one hilariously interestingly well wriiten SS...well done

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashi12

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i got both 1st and 2nd positions.!
Yipppe..! Dhinkchika..!;)..

And the update ! Di, it was as if someone suddenly showed me all those crazzy thoughts that crossed khushi's mind ever, and all those times when Arnav had planned somethng for his Khushi!

The most spcl and craziest yet the most entertaining scenes of IPk, all put up together in this one update!

As usual khushi, being tru to her name, fighting her heartbreak wid a smile! Putting up her facade of Khushism!

And the phone call part, that was awesme! She knew it from his breathing that it was him..! And when arnav said 'khushi' she got breathless!

Just a beautifuk bond that they share! She, not letting hi0 speak! Just showing all the way dat he doesn't matter!
Its not lie he'll tell KkG THAT WANNA MEET HER AND SHE'LL CUM RUNNING AROUND!

AND arnav knows that! He's done all the planning already!
Wid Anjali helping him out, how can he hide his grin, his happiness when he has got it,, experinced the tru feelings of his heart after such long!

And then our original 'kamlesh khabri' i wonder sometimes if him and khushi had a connection relating them!

His advices are always such weird and khushi's belied in him almost the same!

No wonder that elivery boy was scared out of wits! Carrying a gift from ASr and dealing wid KKG's antics, two forces together to make him miserable!

Aww.., he sent her roses, just those she loves!

Waiting to know of his surprises..!

P.S.: di, were those roses from his own garden??:)




Finally you are back with your awesome comments darling...😊
I so missed your comments ...Happy you got 1st n 2nd positions...😛

Khushi's craziness is all which makes this pair out of the world...I can't even imagine Arshi without Khushi's craziness and Arnav's arrogance...

And Kamlesh Khabari...I guess Devi maiyya specially created this creature to satiate Khushi's need for partner in crazy crimes 🤣 I just love their partnership...

And yes Arnav needs to work harder to get Khushi back...Hope his Harvard degree comes in handy

Roses are not from his garden...you would soon know why ...Age age dekho ka ka howat hai 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Divyahet

Dear,
update is amazing starts with morning mantras...😊
As usual khushi easily hide her pain with her extra bright Smile.
The phone conversation between Arshi..first she was confuse and then she knew who is the person by very familiar breathing that create acidity and dhak dhak.😆
(the entire scene reminds of the show when Arnav tries to say sorry after knowing the truth of Khushi's parents)😊

Again tring tring and Crazy KKG as usual starts with her antics.
The plan's first part was done.
Khushi will be alone for the day..(home alone!)
And lo she is with her all time favorite Kamalesh Khabariji. someone knock the door, as usual Khushi was under spell of Mr.KK and the action starts.😆
Poor Delivery Boy na jaane kiska chehra dekha tha subah subah toh Sankadevi ke ghar aana pada
woh bhi uss waqt jab woh KKji ke saath masroof thi!😊

Crazy KKG and Mr.KKJi a perfect combo that always ended with the funny side effect this time too.
"Delivery boy was now more than confident that the lady is totally crazy."and he left hurridly swearing
that"Teri galiyon main na rakheinge kadam aaj ke baad."😆

The guldasta was form Arnav Singh Raizada who is now Ashiq Singh Raizada with the mission Patao KKG with support of his sister Anjali..
what will be the next step?
really, eagerly waiting for next part.
Please continue soon dear.

The deal is going to be seal after 2-3 updates!😲



That was another awesome comment from you. Your every comment leaves a satisfying smile on my lips. There is no words to describe how a writer feels when a reader enjoys her writing.
I guess Devi Maiyya ki krupa he hum par jo itane acche acche readers diye...😳

The call scene was totally inspired by the scene from the show you mentioned . It is one of my favorites scenes. Just imagine The Arnav Singh Raizada practicing to say "SORRY" and poor he after all his hard trials ...she does not even show up...gayi na bhais pani mein...And then the call...ufff...Now I am being nostalgic 😭

Khuch khas jodiya uparase banake ati hai..like KKG and KKji 😆

Teri galiyon main na rakheinge kadam aaj ke baad. 🤣🤣 Poor bwoyyy


Arnav Singh Raizada who is now Ashiq Singh Raizada ...LOl...rightly said 👍🏼


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: De4light

Hey just today came across this lovely story on my favorite Jodi. I must say I could not stop reading it all in one go.

You are good and thanks for making it so real, interesting and funny.
Keep it up. Hope there are few more chapters coming in.

Waiting to read next...lots of .❤️ From new fan of your writing.


Thank you so much for your admiring words
I am glad that you like my style of writing...

Readers' love is all that which inspires me to keep writing...Thank you so much dear 😛


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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you bolti rehna...par saath mein update dogi toh mazaa aayega😳
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh ho...toh yeh googly thi!👏

I hadn't and I mean I hadn't expected the chapter to include 37 bouquets of roses. I hadn't known that Arnav would come back to Laxminagar. But most importantly what I hadn't expected was for him to say those four golden words (yes its four after IPK...five if you add 'becaus'e to it as well)

I'm glad that his heart finallly held the reins over his head making him say those words. Aur asar bhi toh accha hua! It made him feel free and that's what matters right?

I loved their usual banter...Mars, Venus, Yugoslavia...aise shabd na ho toh Arnav-Khushi conversation khatam hi nahi hota!😆

I don't know about you Praja but I think I know what Khushi wants from Arnav.
Clue: it is a four letter word that starts with a 'k' and ends with 's'...if you could form a six letter word as well with the same beginning and ending. And Khushi ki tamanna toh tum poori karogi hi na?😳

Update soon!😊
Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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jaane ye kya hua?.. Kaise hua, jab hua tab hua! But seriously i literally squealed un joy for when he said those 4 magical words!

And seriously i thought she wud kiss him that instant, forbidding him to say any further! But usne to demand kar li? What does our khushi wwants now? He's already opened his heart in front of her !

And this salman khan song dedicated to them:

dil kahe kya raaz hai,
jaane kya kar gaye,
jaise andheron mein tum,
chandni bhar gaye..

Kahe chaand taaron ko
mashur itna kyun
kambakt inse bhi khoobsurat hai tu,
I LOVE YOU...:)

and seriously she thot that delivery company has sent ASR to deliver roses? She surely belongs to Mars:D..

U know even i was wondering wat wud khushi tell to her family abt the presense of these lovely roses? That some old Aashiq of Buaji has sent them;)..

And Arnav's sorry! His words, that u write are soo hearfelt, the way he first struggles wid words, but just gans his strnght by watching her face, huRt, and bares his soul to her! Dats immensely beautiful!

Shows just how much of a World, she means to him!
Edited by aashi12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant work swet heart...

From the start till the end I felt like I was riding on roller coaster...of
Emotion,eagerness,confession...what not..?

Really enjoyed the update...I will come with long comment...
A very long...and type of torture too...

Well *tuje haq hai...tera haq hai...long comment maangana.*to
Edited by Divyahet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
was that for real girl
he actually said i love you
with the dammit as well
gosh and about time too
but of course she wants more than that
and hopefully he will get it slowly
well i dont think he shall figure it out himself will he
will have to ask his interpreters like he said
looks like di and jiju will have to help him again
pyaar ka izhaar toh karr liya but why on earth did he go so mad
man love changes people but not this man
well at least not that easily anyway
after all he took this long to say one thing
that was funny when she thought he is delivery boy
and then when he asked her are ya from this planet
was that for real
wow his confession sure had her thinking its a dream
chalo all that and at least a confession
now how about a proposal my man
and what she gonna tell her parents and bua when they come back to the mini florist that has become their house
man i was thinking dont tell me he is gonna ruin things again
but luckily he didnt
was what now

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