IPKKND SS:Sins Thread 2 *COMPLETED*

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anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Juhi that was simply brilliant !!!!! I was grinning like an idiot through the 2nd half of the update . One of the best emotional updates EVER !!!! That was a fabulous fabulous epilogue . Loved their journal entry chit chats . Loved khushi when she asked if Arnav was having an affair before going to the hospital . The look on Arnav's face was simply adorable !!! Hahahhahh ... Kinda guessed that they might have opened a helpline to help abuse victims . The best part was khushi's declaration of love in the hospital and her dargah visit . It had more punch and more meaningful than any other I Love You's said before 😊

Pls do continue writing . Do not waste such a great talent Juhi !!!!!!! Will be eagerly waiting for a new story from you 😃

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hk16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Wonderful ! Looking forward to your next FF.

rabba Ve!!!

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

This was so cute. Their silent war, the journal entries, her interrogation over Anjali's assistant, even her labour. I was a little scared when I read the first part, cos the same situation could be applied to Khushi, but then I realized that Arnav couldn't have assaulted her, anything but that.

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fffan123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Oh Wow Juhi. That was such wonderful part 2 of the epilogue. Had tears in my eyes. It was truly emotional. Loved it. Waiting to read more SS/FF/OS from you.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

i knew it he wouldnt do something like this again
no more committing of sins like that anyway
some other minor sins and all perhaps but not that
so she was the operator and the woman was someone else
am glad she did this as in open a centre for those women who had worse experience than her
this helpline and the centre sure must help
but arnie doesnt want her to talk to them as it makes her worry and stress out
and especially as you find out she is pregnant
and just because these two are married dont mean they will stop with their fighting and what not
thats not what makes them arhi if they dont do that
awww they are now parents as well
things have worked out with them just fine
and i just loved them talking thrugh the journal reminds me of school and university days when i used to talk to friends if the lecture or the teacher was too boring
man she is pagal and he is a LG
and hope they shall never change
see you soon again with new stories again soon
cheers for pm

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

oh wow!!!!! amazing

all the love and happiness they found together portrayed so brilliantly

their fights and their make-up so cute

I will miss this story

PM me when you start another (I am confident that you will) happy writing!!!

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gata

@gata

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

loved it .Truly ISS PYAR KO KYA NAAM DOON

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Beautiful ending! Hope you write soon again.

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smile1412

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Oye.. I told u!!! Amazing ...fantastic, superb, excellent !!!! I luv this one! It's been your best , best story ever!!!!!!!!!!!

Beauuutiful Juhi!!!!!!! Congrats girl for writing this one... Speaks volumes about your talent!!!!!!!!! Thnx for giving us such a beautiful, heart warming n a touching story!!!!!!

I'm stunned!!!!!! Kudos !!

Ps: n now u r caught girl!!!!! Don't think people will leave u alone... Hope you hv already started on ur next one !!!!!! Good luck!!!

Edited by smile1412 - 12 years ago