DI, U ARE DOING A LOVELY SHOVELY WRK..CLAPS CLAPS N CLAPS…U R JUST MINDBLOWINGLY GUD HERE IN THIS STRY…
Em enjoying dis u , u knw the way u r manipulating the scenes and dialogue to minimum…feeling are beautifully depicted…magical surrounding are brought automatically by ur language…simple n accurate…
The speed…god lovin the speed of ur story…not too fast not too slow…just masstt….
Imagination is going hand in hand here…
Thrilling present n romantic past….complete update just rocking..
Chalo abhi thodi stry ki baat-…
Stry mei most apparent line for me was- jannat has lost her voice…o noo!!!...
And dat accident..god aise kaise koi bhi jannat ka accident ker diya…I hate that car, sue the driver..do pyaar karne wale ko milne bhi nhi diya…
Connecting link- eshaan saw edha…kuch ho iss connection ka later I feel….
Tej n edha ka dare- god…issqzaade ki yaad aa gyi…-daringbaaz ishqzaade…
But they were not like dis in past- chup chup, samhme sahme the dono….dare had been communicated to them by their resp. friends- jannat n eshaan….
Eshaan n jannat- both drowning in bellow of new romantic feelings….
Di the way u write romantic scns na- that's one of its kind…
Bike ride- uffooo!!!..duper super sc n tha vo tho…magical…
And den two filthy boys panga-ing wid jannat – vaise muje pata h ki jannat akele hi nipat leti unn dono se…but I liked ki humara hero aaya …afterall hero ka bhi koi kaam hota h na….
That valentine day hall entrance per jo janu eshu ka convo than a..- that ws simply sweet…
N tej n edha coffee n icecream….tej edha ki kiss hoi…but janu n eshu ki kab hogi//??? :'(
Di hum tho ussi k liye wait karing…
Jaldi dena plz..
But that is most painful prt- janu lost her voice…
And pata nhi kaun kaun piche pade h edha n tej ke…
Di, I loved loved ur idea of writing dis story in fast pace- aise hi dheer saari stories likhna…mei bhi evergreen love 10-13 updates mei khatam ker dungi…shyd usese bhi kamm…
Really luking forward for story…specially janu n eshu ki….
Fav dialogue-(eshaan's) actually POV- wow man! Whats happening to me..(while seeing jannat's through rare view. :D
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
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