JEET- a murat-karnika ff - Page 12

Originally posted by: ridzzi

sorry but I don't have any other option, I never wanted to end it like this but just 1-2 chapters left...
but don't be sad, their is still chapters left, ;-)

Originally posted by: murataru

what yaar .. aisa nai karte ..!!
update to dedeti ... to be continue... ab aur wait karna padega.. :(
but we will wait but take much time .. !!

Originally posted by: tejjo

read all parts...

it was fantastic story...n sorry for late comment

waiting for the next update eagerly

update soon

Originally posted by: 16lvkkk

Hii dii..:)

U didn't got my PM?? I got your every single pm, why are you asking that? 😆

Thank U so much for updating Jeet,dii.. Glad i did thanks to you all...😊

U had started it on 13th June..but I saw it almost 2 & half months later :/

Part 5 A-

Edha's father was aksing the doctor to kill Tej..how disgusting!! He is such a

Honour killings r present in our society just because of these persons who value their ego more than their children!!

The relevations r extremely shocking in case of Jannat-Eshaan too!!

People like Jannat's father think about their status only,they feel ashamed to talk to middle class & lower class people,but what they forget is,its time which makes as well clears the differences.."waqt badalte der nahi lagti"

All misunderstandings got cleared finally b/w them..but they suffered a lot!! Jannat lost her voice,Eshaan lost his father & the time when they should have been together being each other's strength :/

But the positive part is they would b together now & no one can create a rift b/w them :) :D

Part 5 B-

I really feel very bad for Jannat's mother as well,she too beared a lot of seeing her daughter's condition :(

Arghhh...I hate Edha's father like hell..he did only because Tej's father was a criminal :/..ye zaroori to nhi na ki criminal ka beta criminal hi hoga :p but that's the irony, people do have mindset like that, even today

Thank God Edha's mother told her everything regarding her father's actions,lekin bahut der ho gyi..:(

Jannat was looking for Eshaan,isn't it?? no doubt

And Edha,what did she write about..??

Tej is dead..& d police misunderstood that he removed his mask to kill him,arey at least listen to him :/ :p

The climax was good..JaShan r finally going to start a new life,going to get engaged & not only that..her mother is also free from his husband (Y)

I'm surprised I read it sooo late :/..thank U for d PM di,warna kabhi pta nhi chalta!! It was really a roller coster ride reading Jeet,one of my favourite stories in RTMC forum :) happy to know you liked it...Thank You for making me feel that it was worth writing 😊

PS- I guess maine aapko bht tang kiya h updates k lye..so sorry for that :/ please don't be sorry, if it was not you i have never finished it 😆 lazy ass, you know 😉

Love U..*hugs* luv u too 😊

Originally posted by: ridzzi