Kriyaansh FF Aisa hai hamara pyaar...last part pge 23 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
awesome...loved rey confusions...confused b/w love or hate????pls update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Superb ff..
Luving d storyline..
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
superb
kriya samne ho rey apne ap ko control kar
impossible hai
.precap is super interesting. . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. . . . .
And do pm me wen u update. . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Hey guys im back...Thank U sooo much for your appreciation...luv u guys...Here is the Update...
Chapter 6...
Kriya:bye Mom...
Mom:beta apna ghayal rakna..nd jaldi aana...
Kriya:teek hai...
Singhania constructions...
Receptionist:hey mam good afternoon..aap yaham?
Kriya:good afternoon..actually Rey forgot his lunch...soo bas wohi dene aaya hoom.
Receptionist:awww...how sweet...Reyaansh sir abhi meeting mein hai...
Kriya:i will wait...
After the Meeting...
Rey saw his Wife with a bag...
Rey's thought...
Aare kriya yaham aur uski haat mein kya hai...and Goshhh shes looking Beautiful that tooo Saaree...no Rey control ye tera office hai...bt suddenly he become shocked...
WTH...ye log kriya ko aise kyun dek rhe ho jaise ladki ko pehli baar dekh raha hai...Rey got angry..inn logom ko pata hai ki she is my wife then WTH they staring her...
Receptionist:yup...sir...,mam aaapko Reyaansh sir bhula raha hai..
Kriya:Teek hai...
Meanwhile Rey's cabin...he still in Angry...
Rey:Tum yaham
kriya:haan woh, aap apna lunch lana hi bhul ghaya toh meine socha ki le aawom?
Rey:what...ye lunch laane kelie tum yaham aayi hun?rey shouted..
Kriya scared..
Kriya:woh aap hamesha ghar ka ghana ghate ho na islie...
Rey:agar ek din ghar ka nahi ghawoge toh mar nahi jaawoge...
Kriya:lekin Rey...
Rey:what Rey...Tumhein kya zaroorat dhi yaham aane ki tumne dehka nahi woh log tumhein ghur ghur ke dek rhe hai...
Kriya:kya...aap,sirf islie chilla rhe ho...itni choti si baat..
She was cut
Rey:choti si baat,muje ye choti si baat nahi hai...Tum sirf meri ho.you get that...
Kriya had Teares in her eyes...
Rey:ab ro kyun rahi ho
kriya:kuch nahi Rey...
Rey:hmmm Tumne ghana ghaya?
Kriya:nahi..mein ghar jaake..
Rey:ghar jaake kyun.and itna dher ho ghaya,tumne kuch nahi ghaya meine tumse kya kaha dha kriya
kriya:woh...
Rey:ab aawo yaham baito...ghana ghwo...
Rey feeded her...they completed their lunch...
Kriya:rey ab men chalti hoom...
Rey mindtalk
itni jaldi kya hai...koi intezaar toh nahi kar rhe naa...kya karoom...idea
Rey:ha ouchhh...
Kriya:Rey kya hua...aap teek toh ho naa..
Rey:haan woh bas table se takraayi...
Kriya:dighawoo..she caressed his head...
Rey mindtalk...
Woww it works..
Kriya:aapko dard ho rha hai?
Rey:nahi bilkul nahi...
Actually Rey abhi kriyaland mein hai...bt suddenly he cameout from his dreamland...coz of teares..
Rey:kya hua kriya ;he cupped her face...aaare im fine...dnt cry..
She immidiatley hugged him...as he responded equally...
Kriya:aap sach mein teek toh hona...
Rey:haan Battcutter mein sach mein teek hoom...
Then he kissed her forehead then her cheeks...
Ab smile karo...
Kriya smiled...
Suddenly her phone started ringing...
Kriya:rey maa ka phone hai...muje jaana hoga..
Rey:jaldi kya hai...
Kriya:aaare itne dher ho chuki hai..muje jaana padega...bye ...
Rey:bye...
Awww kitni cute hai ye...but mein kya kar rha hoom...meine toh isse badla lene kelie ye shaadi ki par ab...but kriya meri itni care karti hai itna pyaar karti hai i dnt think uss Raat jo kuch bhi hua uske peeche koi aur reason hai..mein woh pata karke hi rahooga...
Precap:sach kya hai kriya...muje Bhatawooo...
Cmnts pls...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Awww. Suc a cute part. I loved d jealous rey a lot. Do update soon. Cnt wait fr d truth 2 b revealed.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
soo sweet update is
hope rey jaldi truth find out karle
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
nice update...loved the jealous rey...pls update next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
wow..i lvd it...!!!
v.cute part
plz update soon..
lvd jealous rey...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
The possessive Rey was a treat to read! :) I am so glad finally you knocked some sense into him and he realized all that happened that day was a lie, itself. Can't wait for the truth to be out and Rey's reaction! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
awesome update...
luved it...❤️

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