SwaRon OS- a perfect evening ^_^

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guys...
after long me writing something on SwaRon..nw dey r back on screen...soo I m again get inspirtation...n here is d result...OS hmmm I think after 4 months...it's long tym...I hope u guys like dis...
njoy reading...
WROTE FRM CELL SOO IT MIGHT B POSSIBLE TO HAVE SPELLING OR GRAMMATICAL ERRORS..MY AUTO CORRECT SUCKS BIG TYM >.<

it was our last f graduation..n 2 yrs dat me n swayam r together...he always use to make dis day special bt dis is it's nt possible this tym as Der is party today..it's like last get together...though me n swayam gonna b together whole evening bt nt alone...I was little sad thing dis...
n just den my cell start ringing its swayam's call..i picked it up n try to b as normal as possible...
hello I replied in normal tone...
hello shona...y wat happened u nt sounding good...
hmm noo I m all f9 just tired f thinking wat I should wear today in d party..I said...
he laughed...n said watever u will wear u gonna look the bst...
dat statement made me blush...bt he was sounding over enthusiastic...I was shocked...n I asked...u sounding happy...something special...
hmmm..noo nuthing special...y u think like dat...he said..
I knw Der is sumthing which swayam is hiding n my cell again start ringing n it's rinni on d line dis tym..
ok swayam rinni on d line..I will talk to u later
ok he replied bt listen I m cuming to pick u up at 6 pm..sooo dont b late..
ok I replied n smiled...n cut d call...

3pm.
my doorbell rang n wen I opened d door Der was no1 bt Der was one parcel wid orchid bouquet..n dats enough for me to think who send dis...
I took d parcel in d room n enthusiastically open it..it has one beautiful dress wid a letter in it...
"wear dis in party tonite...u look angelic in white"

ur swayam
I knw dat he is planing something..dat dress is actually really beautiful..it's a short dress inch above d knee..I was really happy..I didnt call him coz I knw he must b waiting for d call n I just love irritating him...

I got ready n d moment I went down...doorbell rang again...its 6pm n I knw swayam is here...he is really punctual about tym...I opened d door n just cnt take my eyes off frm him...he is wearing a white shirt with black trouser n black court...after 2 mins me back into my senses...n speechless..wat to say...
hmmm.come in naa swayam...
he laughed...noo lets go v r getting late...btw I m impressed u r on tym...n he laughed again..
I hit him playfully on his chest n he acted as if dat hit him hard...n gave me his hand n walked wer his car was parked...
btw u r looking gorgeous...ur dress is beautiful...
yaa someone special gifted me today...I said...
n v both laughed...
he started d car n one more surprise...slow romantic song start playing...yaa it's 2 yrs f togetherness today bt it's strange...he hates romantic song..though he is very romantic...
wat?r u f9 Swayam I asked...
he looked me wid a shocked expression..yes I m f9...y u r asking dat
slow romantic songs??frm wen...
he laughed..its for u Sharon...e evening has just started its gonna b special one for u...
I m shocked by dat statement...swayam wat??u planned something...wer??I means its party...I just hope u nt gonna do nything in frnt f everyone..I said...
he laughed n winked n said just wait n watch miss.raiprakash..
n v reached d collage...v entered as a couple Der...n whole gang were just waiting for us...v met everyone n den v hit d dance floor...everyone was dancing n suddenly swayam drag me out of d dance floor holding my hands...n den before I ask nything...he said...its tym to go sharon..n winked...n added promise me u won't ask nything...
I just nodded my head...I felt butterflies in my stomach..wid d thought only...n after 5 min v both r out of d collage...he opened d door for me...n den walk towards his seat...he sat...n before starting d car he said...r u ready miss.raiprakash...he winked n drove d car...


hahaha...Lou cliffhangers...I just love wen ppl give gaalis to me for stoping OS like dis...I will update part 2 soon...
tb tk njoying reading...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oye sory yar for editing dis so late! Kal rat ke 3 baje yeh pada maine nd at d end itna gussa aya kyunki i was hoping it wud b a complete OS bt u had to do dis to me dnt u??? Newayz its a very sweet OS yar nd i m very eager to read d nxt part so update soon, pretty please :)
Edited by shreyasi28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pm me next part purvi! I loved it.. such a bad cliff hanger i must say. Please update fast! and please update always you too! eagerly waiting for that..! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was wonderful . I was enjoying it . Iam waiting for next update please do it fast dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res. :) Will unres at night

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Oh God di why did u stop there yaar?? I cant wait to know what happens next!
This part was super romantic n sweet.
Waiting for the next update.
Please updste soon
U wrote this entire thing on ur celll?? :O Wow
Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ab u like galis then how can i not give them to you???...kamini kutti kahinki...😳
you had to stop there??? ab jaldi update kariyo pooh warna m killing u...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was nice update
swayam planning to take sharon on date
i love d update
plz update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS 😊
Swayam planned a surprise for Sharon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved d update it was nice...
a cliffy plz update soon loved d cute swaron
i want to know wat has swayam planned for sharon..
pm me d next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Pooh di...yaaay...!!
I m glad u didnt stop writing...:)
U really r an amazing writer...!!
Now cuming to the OS..
It was as usual AWESUM
But yeh kya y did u stop der...:/
Now Update the next part ASAP...!!
N ya dont forget to pm me...:))

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