Arhi FF: Rules - Superhit Love Formulas- ch 7 updt - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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khushi is totally crazy😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omh that was so freak and enjoyed it reading .. yarr ehkhushi bhi na so pagal .. khoyi khoyi se nahi unconsciouslly hai ...lol
yarr control ur emotions
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Loved it !!
It is super awesome
I just came across and read both parts in a go and all the time I was smiling and laughing
It's a very very good attempt can't believe it's the first time you are writing a FF.

Continue soon
Please PM me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshiar8

omh that was so freak and enjoyed it reading .. yarr ehkhushi bhi na so pagal .. khoyi khoyi se nahi unconsciouslly hai ...lol

yarr control ur emotions

Thank you soo much! Glad you enjoyed it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: fan123GUNJ

Loved it !!
It is super awesome
I just came across and read both parts in a go and all the time I was smiling and laughing
It's a very very good attempt can't believe it's the first time you are writing a FF.

Continue soon
Please PM me when you update
:)

Aww !! Thanks a ton for the appreciation, yeah it's my first ever try at writing😳
Glad you liked it, buddy me for pms.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

nice update, khushi is crazy and funny

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Originally posted by: arhi_fan1

nice update, khushi is crazy and funny

Yeah she is.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Hi, Sweethearts, thanks for showering me with your love and appreciations, it is so heart warming and makes me happy to read each and every comment, keep it coming 😊.Here's a long Update, as i would not be updating till next week.
Chapter -3 :
"Aman, have you talked to Singhania? ", Arnav asked Aman motioning him to sit.

"Yes sir, I've met with him, he seems to be thoroughly satisfied with our proposal, I'm sure he's going to sign the deal", Aman said in affirmation.

"Fine, fix me a meeting with him tomorrow, we'll seal the deal tomorrow", he said looking back into his laptop.

Their conversation was cut short by a ring of his phone, it was call from home, he had to pick it up.

"Chotey, come home, Nani's not feeling well", said a voice from the other end of the phone.

Arnav rolled his eyes and sighed, "Not again Di! I know Nani is perfectly alright "

"Nevermind, I'm coming home anyway" he said cutting the call.

Aman nodded understanding the situation, and they both got out of their office, but stopped dead right in their tracks in front of Khushi's cabin as something caught their highly amused eyes.

"Devi Maiyya thank you for ruining my first impression on him" she complained, as she plonked herself on the desk.

"I'm sure he thinks I'm freak!", she said dejectedly, chewing on the back of the pencil, considering all the prospects of her love life were doomed.

"Why give this slow torturous death Devi Maiyya? Kill me and settle it once and for all!"

"Kill me, Kill me now!" as she tried to stab her chest repeatedly with the pencil, in a very mock dramatic way.

And as luck would have it, Arnav who was walking out of his office followed by Aman, saw Khushi performing her wild antics.

"What the!.", he uttered loudly enough to make Khushi notice him.

Khushi who was busy trying to kill herself with the pencil, stopped dead right in her action, the pencil still pointed towards her chest in her hands, as she froze hearing his voice. Her eyes wide as saucers darted from the pencil to Arnav and then back to the pencil in her hand.

She suddenly let go of the pencil rather deliberately, and bent down hiding under the table and from his eyes too, as she closed her eyes and cringed.

Shitf**kshitf**kshitf**k!

"What do you think she is doing?" Arnav asked, totally bewildered at her actions.

"Probably, attempting suicide..." came Aman's quick reply who was equally amused at her.

"You sure she's normal!?" asked Arnav raising an eyebrow.

To which Aman nodded in confirmation.

Meanwhile Khushi, who was hiding under the table thoroughly embarrassed at her actions, started chewing on the pencil, which was by now reduced to half its size.

"Devi Maiyya not again!" she said looking up pleading with her eyes, in baited breath, cursing her bad luck, this was the worst day in the history of worst.

"Failed suicide attempt?" asked a voice with a laugh.

Startled at the sudden voice, Khushi jerked her head up, and knocked her head to the table, she winced a little, rubbing her head.

"You can get up now, he's gone already" Aman said with a chuckle, peeking at her from the other side of her desk.

Khushi sighed, as his voice brought a wave of relief to her, finally ASR had gone, she started breathing again.

"I bet; I messed up big time, isn't it?" Khushi asked pouting a little.

"It's okay Khushi, it's not that bad either, it happens, and it's your first day at office, we understand you are quite nervous"

"And, take it positively; at least you managed to grab his attention, in a very different way..." Aman joked trying to cheer her up,

To which Khushi rolled her eyes, and laughed without humour.

"Yeah I guess I panicked a little in front of him, should've acted calmly" she said reflecting on the events.

"By the way Khushi, ASR's not going to come to office tomorrow, so you can take a leave as well and relax", he smiled, walking off.

"Okay, thank you", she smiled back at him.

"Arnav Bhaiya has come home!" Hari Prakash came running towards the Nani's room.

Arnav's Nani quickly got into her bed, as Anjali and Mami sat next her holding her hand.

"A-Anjali bitiya I think my time has finally c-come, don't worry, I'll become a s-star, the third one from the r-right, next to the moon, and I'll be watching over y-you", Nani said in a very dramatic way, drawing deep breath, as if lying on her deathbed, counting her last few hours.

"Nani no!", Anjali said, choking out on her fake sobs, tears spilling on its own accord.

Watching Arnav from the corner of her eye, Mami broke down and boohooed loudly.

"If only Arnav bitwa got married..., I-I could die p-peacefully without being stressed about anything", Nani said in a very low weak voice, with great difficulty in breathing.

Arnav watched with a smirk as he stood by the door, and saw the drama unfold, his crazy family giving an award winning performance, they could easily give any Oscar winning actor a run for their money.

"Done with your Nautanki (drama)? Or something more is left to do?" Arnav asked sarcastically, rolling his eyes.

Arnav called out for the doctor, as the doctor walked in and started checking Nani Ji.

After a thorough check up, the doctor declared that his Nani was perfectly alright.

"Thank you doctor", Arnav said with a smirk, as the doctor excused himself, and left.

Arnav took a step forward, and narrowed his eyes towards his Nani and Di, "Why this drama Nani?"

"Chotey we want you to get settled, is that too much to ask for?" Nani said sort of sharply.

"I've already made it clear a number of times, I don't believe in marriages, besides it's not possible for me to spend my entire life with a same person"

"But Chotey, look at me, I'm happily married, so can you be" Anjali protested, to which she was glared upon by Arnav.

"Di and Nani any of your plans are not going to work, so quit wasting your energies on me" he said as a matter of fact.

"And Di I can totally empathize with Jeejaji, I know why he dumped you here, after all one can only take so much of drama", he smirked and winked at his Di, to which he got nudged lightly by her.

**

Khushi came back home that evening from the office, all tired and disappointed, as she kicked off her shoes, threw her bag on the bed, and fell flat on her bed face downwards, ignoring her sister who was watching her surprised.

"So Khushi, when is the wedding of the year?", Payal asked deliberately trying to rile her sister up.

"Not happening in this lifetime! ", Khushi exclaimed hiding her face in the pillow.

"Khushi, I have to say, I told you so", Payal laughed at her ridiculous plight.

"Jiji, I'm doomed, my love life is ruined, I'm going to die single just like you"

"I messed everything up, I'm a person beyond recovery...", Khushi drawled, complaining.

"Khushi..." Payal tried to say something, which was cut short as a pillow came flying towards her.

"Just shut up Jiji, not now", Khushi said hiding her face back into her pillow.

Payal just laughed at her and walked away.

**

Next morning Anjali and Nani decided to go the temple, as Payal along with Khushi too decided to visit the temple, as it was Khushi's off today.

"According to the pandit ji, if I offer this sacred mannat ka Nariyal (coconut), Shyam Ji's business will flourish tenfold", Anjali said cheerfully, walking towards the mandir steps along with Nani.

Khushi whose eyes are most of the times fixed to the sky, did not see Anjali coming and bumped into her. She quickly apologized for her mistake, as Anjali smiled back at her.

A thief, who was watching them slyly from a distance, plunged forward at the distraction and snatched Nani Ji's purse and started running away.

"Chor! Somebody, stop him" Nani exclaimed in complete horror.

Khushi on high alert, instinctively grabbed the Nariyal (coconut) from Anjali's thal, and hurled it towards the thief. The Nariyal squarely hit him on the back of his head, and knocked him down, breaking into two pieces, making him see stars in the day.

"Bullseye!" Khushi said a loud, as she fist pumped in the air.

As Anjali , Nani and Payal's mouths were hung open in shock, Khushi beamed with happiness, jumping up and down, she then ran towards the thief who was practically reeling in pain from the strike as he tried to get up, but Khushi held him by his collar and kneed him in the nuts.

The poor chap crumbled up in excruciating pain, rolling on the floor, Khushi snatched the bag from his hands and walked away smugly.

Anjali and Nani's mouths were still hung open in perfect 'O' shaped expression, they blinked not believing their eyes.

Khushi handed them their bag, and as they tried to gather their wits.

"Thank you so much bitiya, that was very brave of you", Nani said smiling gratefully at her.

"Oh that was nothing!", Khushi said rubbing her neck with her palm, as she tried to downplay her act.

" By the way, I'm Khushi Kumari Gupta, and this is my sister Payal" Khushi smiled and introduced herself and her sister.

"I'm Devyani, you can call me Nani, and this is Anjali, my granddaughter"

"Thanks again Khushi Ji", Anjali said smiling at her.

"Khushi what was the need to hit him so hard, what if something would have happened to you", Payal smacked her head lightly, completely annoyed with her heroic act.

"Jeeji..." Khushi drawled rubbing her head, pouting a little.

Liked it or not? do let me know, as it takes lot of effort to type this long updates 😆.Keep showering me with your lovely comments as all your comments are cherished equally😳.
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Edited by sweetly_sour - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Awesome
Loved it !!
Reading This chapter also made me laugh and smile and it's not easy to write funny things that can easily make people laughter I know you are an awesome writer
I loved khushi's crazy antics and arnav's dramatic family
My god what first impression does Khushi make in front of arnav's family
Well but they liked her right!!
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM
:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww...I love this khushi...she's funny , brave and everything i want her to be...

Loved the chapter...

Thnx for the pm...

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