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Adeeba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

pls pls update it. i know me again but pls update it.

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rini_kat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

When will u update...Pls update...

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lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Waiting for your next update...Impatient

😃

Would love to read your other work. Please give me a list. Thanks

Edited by lara3110 - 12 years ago

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Hira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Banner mande by harhem
thankz for wonderfull banner dude:)

Author's note:"I condemn indirect bashing in the name of constructive critisism, if u really feel like being constructive... pm me, i wont eat u".If you have any problem with the story you are free to express your thoughts with me on the thread. but if you have anything else to discus other than the story such as grammar, spelling mistakes, tense problems, structure PLEASE PM ME.

~TEASER~

Khushi was walking on the roads of Delhi...

She was not in her sense after hearing the news of her pregnancy...What if Arnav disowned their unborn child???What if he ask her to abort their child???What will Arnav do after hearing this news...All this questions were

running in her mind,tears were continusley running from her eyes she was lost in her thought...She doesn't

wanted to lose her unborn child...But she know if Arnav

come to know about her pregnancy he will

force her to abort this child...

She was walking on the road lost in her own thoughts when a car in full speed coming towards her and in no time

khushi was lying unconscious on the same road...

when the person saw someone lying on middle of the road...came out from the car...and the only word which came from the person's mouth was khushiii...

ok guys thankz for the lovely commantz...

sorry for late update i am hell busy now a day...

plz hit like button and commant...

your commantz inspired me to write more...

thankz alot

love

HIRA

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Mysa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Yipee i think i m d first 1 to comment ^_^,nice continue soon...plz we want a long update,plz plz and ya 1 more thing plz update as soon as possible:)

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clairvoyance

@clairvoyance

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

nice teaser Heera

the format of updating is like that of appy indy

i suddenly felt as if came to her link

Edited by MrsSanayaBSobti - 12 years ago

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834074

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

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after edit...

YAY!!!! I am the second one to comment!!!

I am sure tht the guy will be Arnav!!!!

waiting for the nxt update!!!!

Plzzz continue soon nd thx for the PM!!!!😊

Edited by HeBarun21 - 12 years ago

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Sasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

INTRESTING TEASER.

MAY BE ITS KHUSHI'S DISTANT COUSIN!!

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Pavin

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Only teaser hira 😭
i want more
accident!!!
Oh god what is going to happen now
and who will be that person
is der any chances it might be Arnav
i want him to pay hard for torturing khushi
i hate ur arnav
ur teaser was making me want more n more
but u r busy then take ur time in updating
will wait honey 😉

Edited by arnavkhushi1991 - 12 years ago