Arhi OS: The Other Side of The Coin: A true story

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Smita

@..Smita..

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Hey Priyo!

Thanks for the PM invite!

This shot was beautiful! U've written it so well that I could imagine everything!

How I loved the Arnav Khushi silent bonding,the blush & secret smiles!

There r disgusting people like that everywhere.

I'm glad Khushi came out of the bus after him.The last part was the icing on the cake.

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Priyo, was waiting for you to post this...Really to imagine such a situation is sickening then I don't even know what all would have passed through that boy who was in this position...Through this u've shown that its not only girls but men too(maybe the number is less) face such situations... Indeed these filthy minded people need to be taken to task

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

That was a brilliant OS! truly amazing. Depicted the disgusting reality of today. ShamefulGreat job on the OS! You handled the topic well :)

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AbdulloveIPKKND

@AbdulloveIPKKND

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

What kind of a disgusting man is that. Feel like slapping this man and cutting him into two pieces. I feel like kicking him in nuts. Grr I am having goose bumps just by thinking how Arnav must have felt.

Awesome OS. I loved it and it was epic.

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

"For Khushi it was the newest and pleasant experience of her life. She felt warmth accumulating near her heart at the thought of someone anticipating of her arrival, looking at her with adore and blushing lightly at her sight."-----i loved these lines...it made me smile in happiness...its a cool feel right???

"His eyes grew soft as she passed him a smile and he smiled at her in return. They were having their staring- smiling-blushing session when that man again butts in."----nosy uncle spoiling a beautiful moment! beautifully painted :-)

oh! its a disgusting situation arnav got into..but it happens..I dunno why people behave in such puking manner...but this was the first time i was hearing about a guy having such an experience, its always the girls who are subjected to such situations..how pathetic attitude people have...

But loved when Khushi got down and checked him and consoled him

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Lovd this OS...
Beautifully writtn...
Lovd d way u describd that situatn nd their emotions...
That OLD man... Aargh... wat kind of human r they...😡

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Hiii...awesome os...loved it...i love da way u write...poor arnav...khushi sooo sweet...thanks 4 da pm

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

that sick bastard when will the eyes of justice open up and realized pedophiles should be killed along with rapist and murderers poor kid did not understand glad he ran awesome os thanks for the email