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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fair I was planning to leave you a longish comment. for ever para of this update. Not for you. But for me. To appreciate the detailing you incorporate in your characters, emotions, thoughts and the setting.

But Fari I am not saying anything.

I can't. I just want more. And I want more now.

Will I get the next update soonish if I throw a tantrum?

PS: I want an ASR in white. Bas!
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahh.. Farah, I am so glad to be proved wrong.
You let the date happen!! Oh.. that red dress and Arnav in white shirt! All tables reserved, candle -light dinner , golgappe.. Haye.. what more could one ask for??
I hope you keep their characters as well as romance in the air intact for the date ahead.

Looking forward to Monday.. My boss is gonna be happy seeing me so cheerful on Monday!!!

Edited by shree10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Disco deewaane... Grinning like an idiot through out the update... Sheeesh...beauty in red...hottiee bowled... ooopsss...oh i loved Khushi's outburst through the phone... Bachhi...like really... Gol gappaa...how sweet i mean thoughtful...so he knws her likes n dislikes ...awww...night is still young...date just began...waiting for the spark...gleee...
Edited by shijinareneesh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vow! Loved this part!

He could have called her too, the night after the texting session! He didn't.

She was waiting for his call too! Trust Khushi to start talking nonstop as soon as he calls!

Loved their little banter on thinking and calling stupid!

Khushi says Arnav talks too much! 🤣

Khushi and her jam- packed schedule! 😆

Red clothes were expected!

I can totally understand how Khushi must be feeling to lie to her parents and friends about her going out.

You found the right pics! 👏 Would love to see Sobti like in that pic! 😉

I am actually imagining how the both are looking from each other's eyes, such a wonderful description you have given!👏

Khushi is a child at heart! She wanted to swing and eat! Awww'!😊

Aman arranged everything so nicely as per ASR's instructions! He definitely deserves the perks for this!

Khushi thinks they need to eat whatever the restaurant serves them! She is so innocent!😊

He paid attention to her likes and dislikes! He knew they will come handy some day!😉

Gol gappe? Yummy!

Precap: Yeah, night is quite young!

Perffecct update!

Waiting for more!

Thanks for the pm!😊

Edited by Nexus_13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edit: Hayyyeee! Cuteness ki hadd hoti hai, yaar!
The date is going f**king-fantastically. 😃
Very very first-datish I must say. Loved both their outfits.
I'm sure Khushi would get to sit in that love seat she so wanted to sit in 😃, right?

Also, obviously you know how I enjoy when you mention places of Delhi. Somehow it's super exciting. I've never been to Magique, despite living in the same part of Delhi. But it seems wonderful. And Garden of Five sense is love <3 I want them to get lost there. LoL. Possible?
Edited by blahblah16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow wow superb superb
farah hamara hath bhi math chodna
''Adayein bhi hein
Mohabbath bhi hein
Shararath bhi hein
Mere mehboob mein
Woh deewanapan
woh masoomiyath
Nazakath bhi hein
mere mehboob mein"
Dunno i feel like khushi singing this song now
hugs farah
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved this part.. but the precap looks interesting.. waiting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting update as well as the precap
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was brilliant...and after reafing the precap im not sure if i can wait two days!!!
That was freaking awsome girrrlll!!!!
It gives you those weird feelings in the stomach like its not khushi but you there wen you read it...you write just sooo well!
Great update! Absolutely amazing!!!!

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