In My Heart. An AR ff. Last Chap + Epilogue on pg 118. - Page 66

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: seyacandyfloss

What do I comment?

I'm at loss of words..This is one of the BEST parts ever..👏
The descriptions about the situation is just splendid..I can't tell you how much I loved this part..this particular set of sentences and words form the Best ever part of your story..

Feelings of the main characters have been portrayed beautifully..beautiful is just not the best suited word here I guess.. Armaan's hard work to make everything perfect for his lady love is shown the way it had to be.. Riddhima is lucky to have him..

I'm at awe..how you write the parts this effectively is out of my thinking capability..will miss this FF ..truly..wish, it could be continued a bit more..but I know it'll ruin the beauty of it all..so won't whine to continue the story..A story, once started needs to have an ending too..sometimes that ending leads to a new beginning..but , whatever the circumstances, story ends in one or the other point.

This part, rendered me speechless.. Totally,
Loved it..gonna re read it..

Once again, this is an awesome part ..hope to get more stories of this kind in future..

Your (crazy) reader
-Seya

Seya,
You have left me speechless. I'm truly grateful to you for your kind words & appreciation. Thank you soo much.😃
Lots of love.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh

the wedding was so beautiful...:D

It makes me weak in my resolve to have a small intimate marriage.
trying hard to stay strong on my resolve :P


Hey Dear,
I hope you aren't angry at me for making your resolve weak? Thanks a lot.
Love..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gaurikajen

awesome part

the letters written both by armaan and riddhima beautifully described their feelings
and the way armaan was looking at the preprations and taking care everything s fine
loved it

waiting for last part:(
wish to see some AR moments in it
post soon

Thanks a lot Dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

This is really awesome dear...

Why u need to end this beautiful FF so soon :(
I really want to read more and more of this FF... but can understand...
Every story has to come to an end...
I hope u would be coming back without new FF...
I know I know one more part is there left...
eagerly waiting for it...
continue super duper soon...
take care :)

Hey Rihoo,
I had thought you left the story but its really nice to see you back.
Thank you for liking the part. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_sri

Amazing update..loved it..very beautifully written...

Thanks Sri.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: blessed4

Superb part. Please continue soon

Thank you Dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Am totally lost for words Sis

This chapter will definitely be one of my favourites, the emotions, the nervousness, the excitement you captured everything beautifully. The letters were just wow

You are a true romantic at heart, your vision of this fairy tale love story was just too good

Absolutely love it

🤗

Sis,
Now don't say this. What I write is nothing. I am really glad that you read it & found it good enough.
Thank you sooo much. 🤗
❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: karankajen

Lovely...
every thing was just perfect...
waiting 4 next part

Thank you. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nurshad.kajen

Kuch adhura adhura lag raha hai..i hope ke epilouge ho

Abhi part C remaining hai. May I know where you've been for the last few parts? I thought you weren't liking the story anymore, is liye left.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshiksg

so beautiful...

everything is described perfectly...
AR's letters are the most beautiful portion of the part...
finally AR are one...
miss this ff...
pls write an epilogue...

Thank you so much Dear.
I'm glad you liked the part. I'm writing part C now, dekhte hain how it goes. Cant say much about the epilogue now.

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