In My Heart. An AR ff. Last Chap + Epilogue on pg 118. - Page 60

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Posted: 11 years ago
Why you think it was not a good update and think people will throw eggs at u is beyond me.
It was a brilliant update Sis, full of masti an cute romance.

I could really imagine her drunk, and the way he kissed her to shut her up😳

The way he walked in and lifted her up I wanted to whistle too 😆

The last scene was really good, the way he teased her with his soft kisses...and him humming that song lol

Totally loved it

Please update the las half soon

Love u lots
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeah its the last one. You should be happy, I'll be sparing you with my crap. I'll wait for your comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Why you think it was not a good update and think people will throw eggs at u is beyond me.

It was a brilliant update Sis, full of masti an cute romance.

I could really imagine her drunk, and the way he kissed her to shut her up😳

The way he walked in and lifted her up I wanted to whistle too 😆

The last scene was really good, the way he teased her with his soft kisses...and him humming that song lol

Totally loved it

Please update the las half soon

Love u lots

Hey Sis,
I'm just glad you could go through it all without pulling your hair, cause I sort of was frustrated at the outcome.
Thank you for your comment. It means a lot to me.
Love lots..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww i soo loved the part yaar...
and who tol u that this was a boring part ...
and who is the idioti who will trough tamatar on u ...after reading suuch a cute part yaar...

and par rose jarur phek sakti hun... hahahhaa

anyway i m said ki this is gonna bhe last part yaar...
abhi toh ff shuru hua hain aand aabhi khatam ho gaya ... pout... ye achi baat nahi hain ...


btw about the part...

i adore it.. hahaha armaan ridhima ko bina bataye party karna nahi chahata and is liya upset hain and hahahhah armaan ne us ladki se kaise picha chudaya ahahhahahaha...

and then ridhima awww she was sso cute yaar i can imagin talli and innoccent ridhima hugging armaan and confeessing her love again and again... and telling her di ssaid her to be angry on armaan ahhahaha loved her soo much yaar...


adn then armaan the way he walked in adn took ridhima in and make her lost in talks and then pull away her ghungatha and last ka ridhima ko torture hai yaar... pehle pyaar mein gum karo phir back of when she was loving it... pout... ahhahaa waise maaza bahut aaya... aahhahaah loved it...

do update the other half super soon and ek epilogues bhi dena.. plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
i dnt know abt others bt for me this is d sadest day.. It was one of my AR fav FF and u wanmt to finish it coz u think its crap.. Nooo its bst.. Well written it is dear.. And i m js sugesting u nvr s urself from others eyes then u wil c wat they want to c u.. D bst judge is our soul.. If u r geting 1 lyk by me or 1 cmnt by me dat is olso deserving point for u.. I olways wait for dis FF coz it was difrnt ff wid ol my fav charcters Sujal Kashis Anurag Prerna Arman Ridhema and my Fav PREM..
Think wisely pls dont tk desicion in haste.. Think abt me..
Regarding todays part it as indeed AR n hard guts Dulhan ko uthaa liyaa ye khali Arman kr sakta hai..
Mjhey toh teri latt lagg gayi.. Haaay kinaa acha dance krti hai..
And finaly Mehndi b gayi ab shaadi..

Bt one question ab mere Prem k lye koi ntry nhi huwi toh khtm kaese krogi...?
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing part
the way riddhima behaved in club is very cute
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsume part dear...
loved everybit of it
but y u ending dis ff so soon :(
u know i really like dis ff

achha ab cmplt ho hi gayi hai toh kya main tumhaari ff
ko apne facebook pg "expressive wordas" pe post kar sakti hoonn...
plllzzz
:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm gonna miss this ff soo much
N haan y do u think this part was boring n crappy? It was amazing as all the other parts.. So lady remove that thought from ur brain
Wish this ff never ends
Anyhow.. Would love to read something new from u after this :)

Love
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

awww i soo loved the part yaar...

and who tol u that this was a boring part ...
and who is the idioti who will trough tamatar on u ...after reading suuch a cute part yaar...

and par rose jarur phek sakti hun... hahahhaa

anyway i m said ki this is gonna bhe last part yaar...
abhi toh ff shuru hua hain aand aabhi khatam ho gaya ... pout... ye achi baat nahi hain ...


btw about the part...

i adore it.. hahaha armaan ridhima ko bina bataye party karna nahi chahata and is liya upset hain and hahahhah armaan ne us ladki se kaise picha chudaya ahahhahahaha...

and then ridhima awww she was sso cute yaar i can imagin talli and innoccent ridhima hugging armaan and confeessing her love again and again... and telling her di ssaid her to be angry on armaan ahhahaha loved her soo much yaar...

adn then armaan the way he walked in adn took ridhima in and make her lost in talks and then pull away her ghungatha and last ka ridhima ko torture hai yaar... pehle pyaar mein gum karo phir back of when she wasloving it... pout... ahhahaa waise maaza bahut aaya... aahhahaah loved it...

do update the other half super soon and ek epilogues bhi dena.. plzzz

Hey Aayu,

I'm soo glad tumhien part acha laga. Mujhe lag raha tha ke acha nahin hai is liye maine bola ke mere ooper tomatoes or eggs mat phenkna.
Really mujhe tou laga ff bohat lamba ho gaya hai is liye I wanted to end it soon.
I'll try updating soon but epilogue ka promise nahin kar sakti.
Love..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

i dnt know abt others bt for me this is d sadest day.. It was one of my AR fav FF and u wanmt to finish it coz u think its crap.. Nooo its bst.. Well written it is dear.. And i m js sugesting u nvr s urself from others eyes then u wil c wat they want to c u.. D bst judge is our soul.. If u r geting 1 lyk by me or 1 cmnt by me dat is olso deserving point for u.. I olways wait for dis FF coz it was difrnt ff wid ol my fav charcters Sujal Kashis Anurag Prerna Arman Ridhema and my Fav PREM..
Think wisely pls dont tk desicion in haste.. Think abt me..
Regarding todays part it as indeed AR n hard guts Dulhan ko uthaa liyaa ye khali Arman kr sakta hai..
Mjhey toh teri latt lagg gayi.. Haaay kinaa acha dance krti hai..
And finaly Mehndi b gayi ab shaadi..

Bt one question ab mere Prem k lye koi ntry nhi huwi toh khtm kaese krogi...?

Hey ShahSair,
I am sooo glad to know you liked the update.
I want to thank you for your message. your words mean a lot to me. I am obliged to have someone as sweet as you as my reader. I think the story has reached its end, issey agay sirf drag hoga.
Don't worry, I'm going to write more on AR too in a new story. I hope you'll join me there too.
Love..

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