ARSHI SS: ~PAWN cr~(BFTW3)#3 ch 08 pg 93 25/01 EXT

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kushi81

@kushi81

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1001

Love ur post plz pm me when u upload the next part 😛

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Divyanshi Vineet Malaviya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1002

I'm loving thos story ! Sory for not commenting even once but then i have my papers ! Well i just loved

Poor soul khushi ! Anjali is seriously a big Bit-h ! And then she added all the women of the house on her side ! And Arnav is totally a diiferent case !

A very dark and interesting story

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Jennifer Burman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1003

OMG anjali is such a jalad! I mean that woman seriously have some issues. She is so greedy and take advantage of everyone possible. Gazal gupta is so low. Both anjali and gazal are same. Both wants complete dominance on something and thinks only about themselves. I hope Khushi realizes the truth and i hope she would be capable of handling it because she has immense faith in Arnav. I hope he mends his ways and does not break khushi's trust. Awesome job! 👏👏⭐️

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1004

Hey... Have read all the Chapters till now. It's really well-written. My heart goes out to poor Khushi. Tagged as a sl*t because of a mother she barely knows. It's heart-wrending to see how Arnav's mind works. I really, really hope and pray that all is well in the end. If not, may the culprits be severly punished. That means Anjali should be hung to death. Not literally, of course, it's not possible. But she disgusts me, actually more than Gazal does. A woman with a name that is one of the purest forms of music and such a character! But it's actually Arnav that freaks me out, though I feel a little hopeful when I small instances when he unconsciously thinks of Khushi as an actual human being and not a toy. I also like the way you portray Khushi's innocence and naivete. Also, is Payal dating Akash or something? Waiting to see how she figures in the story.

My prayers are with the woman you are writing about. May God be with her.

Oh. I found the other threads. How silly of me. I didn't even notice!

Love

Mav

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1005

awesome update:-)) poor khushi:-(( can't wait to read the next part .

Take care and please add me I wam still waiting:(

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athiruma

@athiruma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1006

Waiting for the update. Please update soon.

Thanks

anu

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malniy

@malniy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1007

hiii

i just started reading this story

its extremely well written and i can tell thats it is a highly sensitive topic

arnav is very different in this story a womanizer , insensitive , horrible

i dread the day when khushi finds out about him and her mother 😭

i hope she stays strong

brilliant work , i have no words

love,

malniy

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Jyothsna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1008

Im a reader of ur story. It is a new theme & i liked it. But really felt bad 4 khushi. Even if arnav abandon her,dont make her weak. Make her strong to face the odds. When wil arnav realize the innocence of khushi? Eagerly waiting 4 it.