#5 Guzarish [D3 Revisited] Parts 23-26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007
Fabulous Update😃
Loved the 6th dancer tension, ReYam ki jhalak😉 and Kriya's changed behaviour...One request..Please can you add a bit more on SwaRon😳

Thank you!

I'm glad you loved that!

Yeah sure. They are coming up in next update! I just had to get this KR thing running and now back to SS 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: cookie_arsha
Amaing updte 👏
naina nd kriya gud to see their bonding friendship nd kriya's changed behaviour
hope sharon becums da 6th dancer nd nt sum1 else
rey agn misunderstood kriya 😔
woh jst listeneing to the one sided convo...😒
updte soon

Thank you!! 🤗

I'm glad you liked NK part.

Sharon... we shall see 😳

He did...

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Araina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: deetha
ye galat baat hai update first part mei honi chahiye na

I never was going to update on 1st page 😳 I miss you

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
NS ...

zara mil toh mereko kone... *adjusting my sleeves to_________*

i mean...

NS...

why???

WHY?????????

maine aisa kya kiya tha???

jo tune aisa kiya haan... R-o-F-L Tu kitni dramatic hai re 🤗

matlab rey inne din se fokati move on nhi kar rha tha... i mean thoda toh soch ki kria kya hai kaisi hai... bas avayein... judgement pass kar diya You'll know why I did this soon re. Chillax 😃

ek call kara...

khallas...

idiot kahin ka...

vaise usse phone no. kahan se mila??? ye bhi update mai hi padh liyo ;)

i mean batao toh mujhe...

abhi khabar leti hn...

jaldi se next update kar...

haan so loved the update... writing wise... baaki ka upar se samajh aa gaya hoga...

i want the update...

asap...

coz i want my KR asap...

plljjhhh jaldi jaldi...milengre re

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Posted: 12 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: rubykriyansh
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Thanks 4 d pm ..!

Thanks dear! I'm so happy to know!!

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Araina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha
wohoww...kya baat... 5th Thread... 😃 ... Congrats Khushi... 🤗Thank you!!! ... Now cmng to d update... I think u knw wat i want to say ryt nw aftr reading the last part... 😛 .. LOL! You bet i do 😛 And i dnt wanna abuse much b4 i get kicked out.. 😆 ...Smart choice ;) Just one thing...dey r already apart nd nw a misunderstanding...grrr... Huh... Chdo.. cmng to d rest part...i loved dat lil Reyam convo...i've alwaz loved them...and sharon being d 6th dancer...hope she agrees... And taani full shocked seeing kria n kriyaansh dance...haha...shock laga laga laga shock 😆 ... N she's in a mood to milaofy them...haila... Nxt update se aur bhi zyada maza aane wala hai... Loved it... 😊 Yup, it's getting more interesting. I'm glad you loved the overall update :p

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Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: deetha
kal aake mera gussa nikalti hun

Tu nai aayi 😭

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Araina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: asmaju
Unressed my comment in Page 2!!

Originally posted by: asmaju
Co9ngrats for thread 5 dear!!!

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Unres!1

Hello ji..5 threads up..
Not a slow speed but I wish for more..See I'm lot greedy.. Hahaha! Maybe we will have..
With the update
I'm stuck up with words..
I dont know how to react..
The Start of Kria and Naina was superb.. Glad!!
The way she felt free to tell about herself and the gang to Naina was all cute. Yes.. someone was needed in person.
Taani surfing net and finding out about Kria was superb too..
Hope this moves in positive front. Let's see :D
The talk v between Kria and Smritti I loved it..I seriously do untill I read the end of the update..
Tab maine sachii mai socho In dono ne baat hi kyu ki.. haha right! Waise bhi, Idon't put anything unless it has an affect ;)
Hey wait tell me how did Rey get the number.. Rey himself will tell 😉
And one more I'll slap Rey Kitne baar usse yeah mistake karta rahega..Rey hai na
First he did with regard to letter phir jab muskil se problem dur hua tho aur ek misunderstanding..
Will he ever stop misunderstanding my sweet Kria..
Agar nahi tho sachi mai pitega woh..

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Araina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: Madhukumari
Congrats 4 d new thread. . . . . . .
Update was awsome. . .
Bt,i hated the end part. . . , . . . .
Yaar wat is going on?
I mean i knw u r introducing twists and turn in the story,and i m also excitd 4 it. . . .
Bt,dnt u thnk this twist and turns r getting more and more complicatd!!. . . . .this is my view. . . . . .
M sorry if u got hurt. .
Bt i wrote wat i felt. . .
I realy love this ff,and wil always do,so pls dnt take me wrong. . . . .

Thank you !

I'm glad you loved the rest except ending 😳 You will know why very soon :D In a way, I agree. They are getting complicated. But needed to keept the story moving in long term 😳 I would never take you wrong re. I'm glad you voiced your opinion. Helps me shape it in a better way 🤗