virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Nice update...! Loved Virat he is so adorable...he cant see his Sherni is pain...Maya drama is irritatin...but i guess u would spice up further by bringing Maanvi love interest...(: Thnks for the PM!

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Awesome update!!
Love virat, he is so sweet, he can't see manvi in pain!!
Hate maya, she's so irritating!!
Plz update soon!!!
Waiting to read more!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

Superb update... 😊
Loved it to the core...
Virman sharing pizza was so cute..virat is truely caring...
Will be eagerly waiting for next part...
Thank u so much for the pm... 😊

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preetipc

@preetipc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#304

Loved the update.Manvi is Manvi.Helps Maya still.And the pizza sharing and Virat promising to apologize to Maya for the sake of Manvi and to make her eat was so cute.Loved the update .Thanks for the pm😊

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

I also wish Viren's wish come true
loved the update

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

wow naina it was superb update👏👏

i love the scene when virat made her eat pizza with his own hands and then he promised her to apologize to maya for the sake of manvi,that's so sweet😊😊

thanks for the pm

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sreshta90

@sreshta90

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

hey this ff is just like im recalling evrything frm ehmmbh... its like refreshmnt fr me to read it... good job dear... grt going👍🏼...

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Great update Naina ⭐️.. Virat is so sweet and caring ❤️.. Loved the pizza sharing part.. I hope Manvi listens to him.. Maya is a liar 😡.. She should not help her.. Loved the way you are portraying each and every scene.. Hats off to you.. Thank you so much for the pm.. Take care 😊

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Anjali

@cutiepie2244

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Waoo the part was really awesome👍🏼👍🏼... virat will appologize to maya just 4 the sake of manvi...too good yr... PLZ make the entry of Kabir soon we all want to see the jeolous side of virat... continue ASAP...