virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014

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hninhayman

@hninhayman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

it is very very very good
heads off to u naina
plzzz continue soon and pm me... don't forget plzzz
thx 4 the pm

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Nikethana Taran

@..nikki_vijay..

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

wow it was awesome!

sorry for the late comment!

actually i am gettin very lazy now a days!

i am too lazy to even open IF site too...

but finally i used every ounce of energy in my body and opened it and then i found ur stories updated!

coming to the update it was awesome!

i loved every part of it!

that storeroom scene

ahem ahem so many double meaning dialouges! haan

i just loved it!

hayee mera virat!

kitna cute hay!

this swamini bua is toh gaya!

virman use pagal karke choodenge!

and that restaurent scene was superb

manvi is cho chweet!

her asking everytime if it was non veg and bla...

they were funny!

manvi : humare rishikesh mein pavitra ganga hai.. tumhare chandigarh mein hain...?? mere mein dimag hai, tumhe hai...?? dono ka answer NAHI hai... (there is pure n pious ganga in our rishikesh... isnt there one in your chandigarh...?? i have brain, do u have...?? answer to both the questions is NO...)
virat : humare chandigarh mein rock garden hai, rose garden hai... tumhare rishikesh mein hai...?? main smart hoon, intelligent hoon, dashing aur handsome hoon... tum ho...??? dono ka answer NAHI hai... (we have rock garden, rose garden in our chandigarh... isnt there one in your rishikesh...?? i am smart, intelligent, dashing, handsome... are you...?? answer to both the questions is NO...)

that dialouge was supeb!

and not to forget the pics u added were exact matching!

super update totally cool and

i will comment on ur story PMKK

tomorrow!

because my hands are paining after writing so much!

continue soon and thnx for pm and update soon!

will be waiting!

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Nice update...

Loved the virman convo.. There nokejhoke
Wich i really miss these days... 😊

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preetipc

@preetipc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Loved the update. Loved the store room part and Sb dialogues afterwards.Seems Viren too does not know about kabir and Manvi.Only seems Jeevika knows.Love this caring and Sweet Virat.And the restaurant part was so virmanish. Loved the whole update.Sorry for commenting late and thanks for the pm😊

Edited by preetipc - 12 years ago

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shona9

@shona9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Arey waah meri hazaaro vali
Mst tha...
Hatke h...
Tnx 4 d pm...

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: shona9
Arey waah meri hazaaro vali
Mst tha...
Hatke h...
Tnx 4 d pm...

thanks shona... 😊

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: preetipc
Loved the update. Loved the store room part and Sb dialogues afterwards.Seems Viren too does not know about kabir and Manvi.Only seems Jeevika knows.Love this caring and Sweet Virat.And the restaurant part was so virmanish. Loved the whole update.Sorry for commenting late and thanks for the pm😊

preeti ji dnt be soory n i am glad u liked it... 😊

only chaudharys know abt kabir... its a secret u see... shhh...!!!!

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: ..nikki_vijay..
wow it was awesome!
sorry for the late comment!

actually i am gettin very lazy now a days!

i am too lazy to even open IF site too...

but finally i used every ounce of energy in my body and opened it and then i found ur stories updated!

coming to the update it was awesome!

i loved every part of it!

that storeroom scene

ahem ahem so many double meaning dialouges! haan

i just loved it!

hayee mera virat!

kitna cute hay!

this swamini bua is toh gaya!

virman use pagal karke choodenge!

and that restaurent scene was superb

manvi is cho chweet!

her asking everytime if it was non veg and bla...

they were funny!

manvi : humare rishikesh mein pavitra ganga hai.. tumhare chandigarh mein hain...?? mere mein dimag hai, tumhe hai...?? dono ka answer NAHI hai... (there is pure n pious ganga in our rishikesh... isnt there one in your chandigarh...?? i have brain, do u have...?? answer to both the questions is NO...)
virat : humare chandigarh mein rock garden hai, rose garden hai... tumhare rishikesh mein hai...?? main smart hoon, intelligent hoon, dashing aur handsome hoon... tum ho...??? dono ka answer NAHI hai... (we have rock garden, rose garden in our chandigarh... isnt there one in your rishikesh...?? i am smart, intelligent, dashing, handsome... are you...?? answer to both the questions is NO...)

that dialouge was supeb!

and not to forget the pics u added were exact matching!

super update totally cool and

i will comment on ur story PMKK

tomorrow!

because my hands are paining after writing so much!

continue soon and thnx for pm and update soon!

will be waiting!

hey niks partner dont be sorry...

i can understand...

i am glad you liked it and caught that double meaning dialogue thing... 😉

i am working on it for months partner... why wouldnt it be perfeact...

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

CHAPTER 4 a

virat and manvi spent whole day together without thinking about others... they were really not concerned what others thought about them and their friendship... no one could understand what they felt for each other... how could anybody give their friendship or relationship a name when they both themselves didnt know about the changing equations...

virat who once felt irritated on seeing manvi and her tantrums, drama and childish acts has now started enjoying manvi's company... he really started liking manvi and whatever she did... yes he had found someone for whose company he started yearning.. not that he was in love with manvi but it was a much stronger emotion that he felt towards his ded futiya... he started feeling her happiness, her sadness, her laughter... every single tear that flowed from her eye hurted him direct on his heart... he didnt know why how and when he started being affected by manvi... but that feeling was also giving him peace and a ray of light in his life... he has started knowing manvi really well and also the fact that she has a heart made of gold...

manvi found a very good friend in virat... her best friend ever but after ofcourse her di and kabir... manvi never missed kabir whenever she was with virat but there was always a hollow whole in her heart that was desperately waiting for her kabir to return... she just wanted her love to come back to her and fill her life with all the happiness in the world... she somewhere down has even figure out that virat was very different from the persona he displays to his family and the whole world... she had a doubt whether her partner had ever been in love... and if he has been in love, has he been betrayed... because she could sometimes relate to the pain, emptiness and loneliness that she saw in his eyes long back... but nowadays his eyes were always cheerful and held a kind of shining that always made manvi happy... she was happy thinking that her partner was happy... she always prayed to god for her di's happiness but now she prayed for virat's happiness as well...

days passed by with many incidents happening...

* manvi asking virat to join office and he surprisingly joining it...

* the laptop incident...

* growing interaction of virat and manvi...

* positive changes coming in virat...

vanshika was really happy nowadays because her son was more than happy these days... and the only reason was manvi... vanshika noticed that virat was altogether very different whenever with manvi... she had even found virat staring at manvi twice... she know believed that manvi was like an angel that has come to lighten up the dull and dark life of her son...

but swamini was really not liking all this and was still not convinced by what jeevika told her.. she couldnt believe that there was only friendship between virat and manvi... she really just couldnt get that thought out of her mind... she just didnt wanted manvi to be the daughter-in-law of the vadera's... no... not in any case... so she came up with a plan... a plan that wouuld sought out everything and would also clear all her doubts... but for to accomplish the plan she wanted manvi... so swamini decided to take manvi in her confidence and then execute her plan...

next day
in afternoon...
tarun : manvi didi... swamini madam aapko bula rahi hai...

(manvi didi... swamini madam is calling you...)
manvi : tarun bhaiya mujhe... i think buaji di ko bula rahi hongi... (tarun bhaiya... me...?? i think bua ji might be calling di...)
tarun : nahi didi... she is calling you only...!!
manvi : par wo mujhe kyun bula rahi hain... tumhe pta hai kya...?? (but why is she calling me... do u know...???)
tarun : nahi manvi didi (no manvi didi...)
manvi : bta do na tarun bhaiya... (tell me na tarun bhaiya...)

tarun : didi... mujhe sach mein nahi pta warna aapse kya chupana... (didi... i really dont know.. and if i knew why would i hide it from you...)
manvi : hmmm... waise hitler ka mood kaisa hai...?? (by the way how is hitler's mood...??)
tarun : aaj toh bahut sahi lag raha hai... mera matlab hai wo khush lag rahi hai... (today it seems very good... she is looking happy...)
manvi : accha... god virat... i need you... kaash tum yahan hote mere paas... (virat i need you... wish u were here...)

scene shifts
swamini's room...

manvi : bua ji... aapne bulaya...??
swamini : haan manvi... andar aao... (manvi come inside...)
manvi (saying to herself) : ab yeh hitler mera shikar karegi kya...?? (will this lady hitler hunt me...??)
swamini : kuch kaha...??? (did u say something...??)
manvi : nahi bua ji... aap kuch keh rahi thi...?? (no bua ji... u were saying something...??)
swamini : haan manvi... humein tumse kuch puchna tha...??
(yes manvi... i want to ask u something...??)

manvi : puchie na bua ji... (ask bua ji...)
swamini : jeevika ne humein btaya tha k tum aur virat sirf dost ho... kya ye sach hai...?? (jeevika told me that u n virat are just friends... is it true...??)
manvi : jee bua ji... 100% sure... 100 kya 1000% sure hoon main... (bua ji i am 1000% sure...)
swamini : theek hai... kya tumhari ek aur help karogi...?? (ok... will you help me manvi...???)
manvi : why not bua ji... aap btaie toh sahi, main sab kar dungi... (why not bua ji... you tell what i have to do...)

to be continued...

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Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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preetipc

@preetipc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Happy to be here first and comment

Loved the update.Loved the way u explained the changing equations between Virat and Manvi and how happy he feels wen he is happy with her, how clearly she understands him and how much she wants him to be happy, how happy she is when he is happy.Loved the growing relationship[ between them.now waiting to watch wat is brewing in SB's mind and how does it affect Virman relationship. Loved the whole update naina😊

Edited by preetipc - 12 years ago

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