virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
mind blowing update!!
that hug ☺️
kabir is a mystery yaar...
i hope he turns out to be a helpful character...
thanks ofr the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
well done!! its fantabulous!! 👏
update soon n pls pm me!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
naina it was awesome yar...
its nice story line ...
virat is not ready to accept the fact that manvi is already in love...
i loved this part...
continue soon...
and plz pm me tooo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg... i loved it... cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
THIS PART IS SPECIALLY FOR MY BFF... MY NIKS PARTNER...
PARTNER I HAVE UPDATED EARLIER SO PLS DONT EAT YOUR FINGERS NOW... 😉
THIS GOES FOR U... 😊 😊
CHAPTER 3

virat was sitting in the garden when viren joined him...
virat : bhai aap...
viren : kyun...??? main nai aa sakta
... (why...??cant i come here...)
virat : nahi... mera matlab wo nai tha... (no... i didnt mean that...)
viren : toh kahan hai aaj teri jodidaar... teri partner... (so where is your second half... your partner...)
virat : andar room mein... (in the room...)
viren : kyun phir tum dono ki fight ho gai kya...?? (did you both fight again...??)
virat : nahin bhai... kaash jhagda hi ho jata.. mujhe wo toh nai dekhna padhta jo maine dekha... (no bhai... wish we had a fight... then i wouldnt have to see what i saw today...)
viren : aisa kya dekh liya...??? shitt shitt... saali hai woh meri... (what did u see...?? shit shitt she is my sister-in-law...)
virat : bhai... manvi ki zindagi main koi tha (bhai... was there anybody in manvi's life...??)
viren : tha nai.. abhi bhi hai.. (not was... it is still there...)
virat : kaun...??? (who...??)
viren : teri bhabhi... aur kaun...?? (your bhabhi... who else...??)
virat : nahin bhai... mera matlab tha k... (no bhai... i meant...)
viren : par tu ye kyun puch raha hai... (but why are you asking this...??)
virat : aise hi... main chalta hoon... (nothing... i am leaving...)
viren : rukk virat... baith mere paas (wait virat... sit with me...)
virat : hmmm
viren : ab bta kyun laga tujhe k manvi kisise pyar karti hai...?? (now tell me why did u think that manvi loves someone...??? )
virat : main nai jaanta... maine uski aankhon mein wo dard dekha jo meri aankhon mein... (i dont know... i saw that similar pain in her eyes like what i can see in mine...)
viren : tu bhi na pagal hai ek no. ka... manvi aur pyaar... tujhe pta nai wo sirf aur sirf apni di se pyaar karti hai... i am sure dono behnon ke beech kuch hua hoga... (you are mad virat... manvi n love... dont u know that she only n only loves her di... i am sure something must have happened between these two soul sisters...)
virat : shayad aap theek keh rahe hai... aaj bhabhi thodi upset dikh rahi thi aur wo manvi ko apne saath bhi lekar gai thi kuch baat karne... (i think you are right... today bhabhi was also looking a little upset and she took manvi along with her to talk aboiut something...)
viren : pagal... ab chal andar... lets four of us go out for dinner tonight... (idiot... come lets go in...)
virat : dats great... done...!!

both brothers entered the house happily...
the moment manvi saw him, she signalled him to come to her.. virat was happy to see manvi happy... virat separated himself from the others and went upstairs.. as soon as he was abt to enter manvi's room.. manvi pulled him and took him to the storeroom...
virat : jungli billi... what are you upto...??
manvi : mujhe kuch baat karni hai private mein... (i want to talk in private...)
virat (smirking) : private mein... aur wo bhi storeroom mein... (privately... and that too in the storeroom...)
manvi : haan aur wo bhi band storeroom mein... (while locking the door) (yes and that too in a locked storeroom...)
virat : iraada toh nek hai na...???? (what are you upto...???)
manvi : tumhe kya lagta hai...??? (what do u think...???)
virat : i hope nek na ho...!!! and winks at her (i hope its not good...)
manvi : joke tha..??? mujhe hasi bhi nai aai... (was it a joke...?? its not funny...)
virat : achha ab point pe aao meri sherni... (ok sherni now come to the point...)
manvi : badi jaldi hai point pe aane ki... main kha jaungi kya tumhe... darr gae kya...??? (you are very eager to come to the point... i will not eat you up... are you scared of me...??)
virat : haan... mujhe bahut darr lagta hai tumhari muscles se... by god... (yes... i am very scared of your muscles... i swear...)
manvi : shh... dheere bolo koi aa jaega... (shh... speak slowly else somebody will come...)
virat : kyun darr lag raha hai...?? (whay are you scared...??)
manvi : haan chep... (yes chep...)
virat : hehe... tumko mujhse darr lag raha hai...??? (hehe... u are scared of me...??)
manvi : chep k chep hi rahoge... tumse nahi tumhare ghar ki lady hitler se... (you will always be a chep... i am not scared of you but of your hilter bua...)
virat : tumne phir buaji k saath kuch kaand kia kya...??? (did u again do something with bua ji...??)
manvi : haaww... kaand...??? aur wo bhi main...??? (haaww... i didnt do anything...)
virat : haan... tum karti thodi ho... woh toh apne aap hi ho jate hai.. i know.. (yes.. you dont do anything, things just happen...)
manvi : bakwaas band karo aur ab suno... aaj pta hai kya naya bomb blast hua hai ghar mein...?? (stop bickering... do u know wats the new bomb that blasted today in the house...???)
virat : nahi... !!! (nope...)
manvi : koi na... main btati hoon... hitler ne hum dono ko apple share karte hue dekha aur na jaane di ko kya kya keh dia... u know she even asked di to find out whether we have feelings for one another... (never mind... i will tell u... hitler saw us sharing the apple this morning and god knows what things she said to di...)
virat :hain...?? (what...??)
manvi : chup raho... aur meri suno bas... she asked di to make me understand that i should distance myself from u... bcos EK JAWAAN LADKA AUR LADKI KABHI DOST NAI HO SAKTE... (shut up...!! and listen to me... she asked di to make me understand that i should distance myself from u... bcos a gil n a guy can never be friends...)
virat : buaji ne aise kaha...?? i mean ye dialogue maara mpk ka... (bua ji said this...?? i mean did she stated this dialogue of MPK..)
manvi : dialogue toh maine maara hai par bua ji ke kehne ka matlab yahi tha partner... ( i stated the dialogue but bua ji meant exactly the same partner...)
viratc : omg... bua ji is just impossible...!!
manvi : yeah...!! and on the top maine di ko kitna samjhaya k its not a big deal to share an apple... (yeah n on the top i made di understand that sharing an apple is not a big deal...)
virat : aur kya...?? main toh tumhare saath sab share karne ko ready hoon... (exactly...?? i am ready to share everything with you...) saying the last sentence very slowly that it was almost inaudible...
manvi : kya bola...??? mujhe suna nai... (sorry..?? what did you say..??)
virat : i just said that u r ryt partner...
manvi : wohi toh... par di ko kaun samjhaega...??? (i know... but who will make di understand...??)
virat : bhai...
manvi : yes... when jiju is here, not to fear...
virat : ohh hello copy cat... ye line meri hai... (this is my line...)
manvi : aur tum mere partner ho... so its okk (n u r my partner... so its okk...)
virat : hmm... ab chale...?? (hmm... lets go now..??)
manvi : chalo... zindagi bhar thodi yahan rahenge... (yeah lets go... we wont live here for our whole life...)
virat opened the door and they walked out missing out swamini who was looking at them . whereas swamini was very shocked on seeing virat and manvi walking out of the dimely lighted storeroom...
swamini (holding her head and murmuring) : ye kya ho raha hai iss ghar mein...??? jab dekho ye dono pta nai kya karte rehte hain... aaj toh hadd ho gai hai... pichle 20 min se dono storeroom mein ek saath the... chiii... humein kuch karna hoga...!!! manvi virat ke liye theek nai hai... woh virat ko sambhal nai sakti ulta uska har harkat mein saath deti hai ye ladki... ye galat hai, par hum inhe ye kaise samjhae... (oh my god what is happening in this house... these two are always together and i wonder what do they do... but today is the limit... they both were in the storeroom from the last 20 minutes... i have to do something... manvi is not right for virat... she cant handle virat instead she supports him in almost everything... this is not right but how will i make them understand...)
that night all four - virat , manvi, viren and jeevika went for dinner to a chinese restaurant...
manvi : chii... ye hum kahan aa gaye hain...??? (where have we come...??)
virat : oh hello bandriya isse restaurant kehte hain... tumhare rishikesh mein nahi hai kya...??? (hello bandariya... this is called a restaurant... isnt there on ein your rishikesh...??)
manvi : humare rishikesh mein pavitra ganga hai.. tumhare chandigarh mein hain...?? mere mein dimag hai, tumhe hai...?? dono ka answer NAHI hai... (there is pure n pious ganga in our rishikesh... isnt there one in your chandigarh...?? i have brain, do u have...?? answer to both the questions is NO...)
virat : humare chandigarh mein rock garden hai, rose garden hai... tumhare rishikesh mein hai...?? main smart hoon, intelligent hoon, dashing aur handsome hoon... tum ho...??? dono ka answer NAHI hai... (we have rock garden, rose garden in our chandigarh... isnt there one in your rishikesh...?? i am smart, intelligent, dashing, handsome... are you...?? answer to both the questions is NO...)
viren : virat chod na yaar... kyun meri pyaari saali ke pichhe padh gaya hai..?? (leave it virat... why are you pestering my sweet sister in law...???)
jeevika : dekhiye viren ji... aap mere dewar ko kuch mat kahiye...?? (watch out viren ji... dont say anything to my devar...)
virat : chill bhabhi... its okk...
manvi : haan jiju... main is chep ko handle kar lungi... (i can handle this chep...) dont worry...!!
virika : okk.. ab khana order karein... (okk now order something...)
manvi : haan.. mujhe toh bahut bhook lag rahi hai... (yes... i am too hungry...)
virat : toh meri bhookhi sherni, what would you like to have...?? (so what would you have my bhookhi sherni...???)
manvi : virat mujhe toh iss menu card mein dishes ka naam bhi padhna nahi aa raha toh mangaungi kya... (virat when i am unable to read the name of the dishes in the menu card, how am i suppose to order something...)

virat : when virat is here not to fear... i will order for u...
manvi : veg order karna... (order something veg...)
virat : i know... aur bhabhi bhai aap... (i know.. what about u bhai n bhabhi...??)
viren : bhai tu hi order kar de sabke liye... (bhai why dont u order for all of us...)
virat orders the dishes and when the waiter comes with the dishes...
manvi : ye kya hai sab...??? (what is this...??)
virat : yahan ki famous dishes hai ded futiya... just try them they are simply awesome... (these are all the famous dishes of this restauranr ded futiya...)
manvi : maine kaha tha na veg order karna... (i told u na to order something veg)
virat : veg hi toh hai... pakka.. pure veg hai yaar... (arrey this is veg only... i promise... this is pure veg...)
manvi : nahi main ye nahi kha sakti... mera dharm bhrasht ho jaega... (no no i cant eat this...)
manvi sees jeevika was about to eat the food...
manvi : diii... dont eat this... ye veg nahi lag raha... (it doesnt seem to be veg...)
viren : manvi ye veg hai... (manvi this is veg...)
manvi : jiju... mujhe ye sab nahi khana.. plss kahin aur chalein...??? (jiju.. i dont want to eat all this... lets go somewhere else...)
virat : bhai aap iski baat mat suno... ye toh... (bhai dont listen to her... she is just...)
viren : chalo manvi lets go somewhere else... kisi indian restaurant... (lets go manvi... some indian restaurant...)
manvi : yes jiju... u r the best...
virat : chalo... khana bhi waste kara dia or paise bhi... (lets go... wasted the food as well as the money...)
manvi : chep tum kitne kanjoos ho yaar... (chep you are such a scrooge...)
they all had their dinner and came back home...

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
hate sb
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update👍🏼.. Loved Virman convo very much.. Virat is always naughty😉.. I really liked the part where SB saw them coming out of store room and then her reaction was also funny 😆.. Loved that restaurant part also.. I wonder if Viren knows about Manvi and Kabir😕.. Will be waiting for your next update.. Thank you so much for the pm.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
naina its cute...
the nok jhoks are nice...
update it soon yar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...luvd virman's convo in d storeroom😆
update d nxt part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow that was awesome update naina:)👏
virat and manvi's convo was fab and hilarious😆...i loved every bit of this update:)😳
and i think virat is slowly falling for our mannu... hope he realises it soon and confess her...😳
aur tum kabir ki mystry kab khologi... eagerly waiting for him...😕
and the best part of update was SB saw them together again... i wish her face would have been worth watching:)🤣
thanks for wonderful update and pm dear:):):)🤗

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