Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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Homeslice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#371

"Fine, Khushi. I will tell Di that we can get married"

She pushed at his shoulders and looked at him shocked, "What?!"

These lines are EPIC! :D

Amazing work! :)

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quicksand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#372

Hud Hud Dabang was too funny 🤣
loved it!!!😛

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ReginaPhalange-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#373

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OMG, this was probably my favorite chapter! Nicely done Lazyleaves! And very unexpected turn of events :o
I was forced to let out a chuckle at the rolling pin part.
And thank God this misunderstanding isn't as ugly as the one in the show!
Their exchange towards the end was the icing on the cake for me. A perfect blend of romance, concern(most importantly), longing and humor.

It's amazing how reading this FF can completely change my mood on an otherwise lousy day.

😃

Edited by Cantthinkofone - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#374

not smile but i actually laughed

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Hot_Chocolate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#375

That was awesum plz accpt my rqst n pm me nxt part..really like this story

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Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#376

Whattay twist in the tale, I say...an Arnav eager to get married after just 4 mulakat and a khushi dreaming about gote wala bridal wear...

How you played with words, girl...absolutely brilliant...first Anjali Khushi convo and then Arnav-Khushi...

I was chuckling away to glory...now I want to see how Arnav will pry out that foot that he deeply lodged in his mouth...

Well done, lady 👏

Edited by Polkadots78 - 12 years ago

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#377

loved the unique lazyleaves touch! way to go, girl!

could hug anjali for her machinations and must commend khushi on her choice of weapons...loved her crazy thoughts about arnav wanting to murder her... can you imagine khushi throwing away jalebies? it must have killed her to do so! imagine her saying she was still a virgin so couldn't die now 🤣... I am sure arnav would be only too glad to help her out in that sphere😉! had a wide smile plastered on my face as I read this update... arnav so meekly accepting the 'proposal' for the sake of stopping khushi's tears is unheard of... khushi's 'what?!' was to die for!😆 trust these two to talk at cross-purposes... each and every line and incident is just HILARIOUS and leaves one rolling around the floor clutching one's stomach! 👏 a superb addition to the collaboration!

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kushigowda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#378

kya update hai yar super duper updateloved it 😊 👏 ⭐️

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applesauce.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#379

OMG,zeh this is one of the most beautiful piece of writing from you.Yes,the choice of words,the sweet,Wicked humor in it..Amazing👏I could picturise and imagine this full episode on Show

Loved it!❤️
I dont how else to verbalise how much I loved this chapter.😃