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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac

I'll update tomorrow...Pakka promise 😆


Don't be late 😡
Tomorrrow means tomorrow
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Posted: 12 years ago
i have no idea how i missed this FF... *cursing myself*

sana, i love this FF...
"boys protocol"...ROFL... 🤣

and Rey is so epic...and Taani ke excuses to Swayam...😆

and the PRecap was jus epic...cant wait for the next update...excited for tomorrow...

please please please mujhe PM kar dena...i dont wana miss it again... 😭
Edited by Mohit_monaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

i have no idea how i missed this FF... *cursing myself*


sana, i love this FF...
"boys protocol"...ROFL...🤣

and Rey is so epic...and Taani ke excuses to Swayam...😆

and the PRecap was jus epic...cant wait for the next update...excited for tomorrow...

please please please mujhe PM kar dena...i dont wana miss it again...😭

Thank u Sneha, sure i'll PM u 😃

@Pikky 😡 wat do u mean huh? Tujhe yakheen nahi ho raha hai kya? Ab agar maine kal update nahi kiya toh mera naam soniya rakh dena 😉 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys! Firstly, i'm really sorry about updating so late but kya karoon i'm already a slow writer and upar se exams and Secondly, thank u so much for having patience with me 😃 and thirdly, you're going to need a lot more patience coz I have boards since 1st and I think I wnt be able to update till 30th...Sorry 😔 but i'll pakka try my best, will atleast write one line one day 😆 Btw I knw I said tomorrow but the update got over sooner than I expected so here is it...😊


"Taani ko dekha hai?" Rey asked for the umpteenth time.
"No" the girl replied.
Rey moved forward to another girl and asked the same question with the reply being same.
Frustrated, he made his way to the canteen.
Rey: Oh God! Kisi ne nahi dekha usko, abhi tak college aayi nahi kya? But she never comes so late! And why isn't she picking up the phone? I've to apologize to her for last night. Bekaar mein gussa ho gaya uspe aur phone cut kar diya. She must have felt so bad (sighs) Where are you Taani?
Scene shifts to Taani sitting in a car. She looks at her watch impatiently and leans out the window just as Swayam comes rushing out of the house, "Bhai what took you so long? I've been waiting for 15 minutes!"
Swayam: Sorry!
Taani: Sorry? That's all you're going to say...Ek toh you woke up late, then stopped me when I was leaving for college and now made me wait for 15 minutes! Why are you so adamant on going to college together today? Pehle toh kabhi nahi karte the aisa...?
Swayam turns red and looks away.
Swayam: Nothing, I just thought if we hav a car and if we live together then you shouldn't have to go alone in an auto.
Taani: And you realized this now? Months after I came?
Swayam glares at her.
Swayam: Taani i'm the big brother, okay? I should be asking questions not you!
Taani rolls her eyes and says, "Okay fine, big brother! Can we go now plz? Main pehle hi bohot late ho chuki hoon.
Swayam looks at his watch.
Swayam: Kahan late hui ho? Abhi toh classes shuru nahi hui hai. Don't worry we'll reach there in time.
Taani sighs. She had wanted to go early and plan a surprise for Rey before he came and now her brother had ruined it. She glanced at him, annoyed. She knew he was being possessive again so she didn't pust the matter more afraid that he will doubt her again. After yesterday, she was going to keep Rey's secret no matter what. So she just muttered a "Yeah" and sulked in her seat.
After a while, they reach the college and Swayam takes off almost immediately.
"Oh Great! Act like you're late now" Taani calls after him but he ignores her and goes on.
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Frustrated, Rey walks into the canteen and orders a cold drink to cool himself down. Just as he was about to pop open the can, he felt a hand slap him on the back. He turned, irritated, to find Vicky grinning at him. His anger melted.
Vicky: Dude tu yahaan kya kar raha hai? Didn't you get Swayam's text?
Rey knits his eyebrows in confusion.
Rey: Swayam's text?...Let me check!
He reaches for his phone in his pocket and finds a new message. He opens it and reads, "Meet me in the abandoned corridor computer room. Its URGENT!"
Rey: Whats so Urgent?
Vicky: No idea! But looks like its a Big Secret...Dekho na abandoned corridor mein bulaya hai jahaan koi nahi hota.
Rey: Hmmm...Lets go and find out then!
They go to the old computer room and find Bharat, Nil, Amar and Swayam waiting for them.
Swayam glares at them and says, "What took you so long?"
Rey & Vicky mutter a "Sorry" and settle on the tables there with the others while Swayam stands glaring at them.
Nilesh: Arrey Swayam, woh sab chodna yaar aur bata kya hua? Why did you call us here?
Vicky: Something Important?
Rey: Haan, main bhi kabse yehi soch raha hoon.
Rey looks at the cold drink lying forgotten in his hands, pops it open and starts drinking.
Bharat: Phirse uss Sharon ka locha toh nahi hai na?
Amar: Bata Na Twayam...
Swayam takes a deep breath, bracing himself and says, "Guys...I wanted to tell you that...that Taani has a boyfriend and I need your help in finding him!"
Vicky,Nil,Bharat,Amar slap their hands over the mouth while Rey spills the drink from his mouth in shock and starts choking. Everyone stares at him as he takes one whole minute to regain control.
"What?!!" he exclaims in a rough voice.
Swayam gives him a weird look and asks, "Rey,are you okay?"
Rey: Yeah! Yeah! I'm alright...How do you know she has a boyfriend?
Swayam: Kyunki she comes late everyday and...
Rey: So? Late aa rahi hai matlab uska boyfriend hai! Swayam tu bhi na!
He lets out a nervous laugh.
Swayam: Rey atleast let me finish!
Vicky: Haan Rey, beech mein mat bol yaar. Swayam you continue.
Rey sits back, annoyed.
Swayam: Haan toh she's been coming late and upar se she suddenly has all these new expensive things...
Nil: Like what?
Swayam: Like a watch.
Rey: Haan toh? She must have bought it for herself.
Swayam: Haan usne bhi yehi bahana banaya tha dat she bought it from some station, 500 mein something something.
Rey's face breaks into a grin at that, "She said that?"
Swayam glares at him and says, "Rey yahaan i'm freaking out over what kind of a jerk my sister is dating aur tu has raha hai?"
Rey flinches at the word "Jerk" and looks away.
Rey: Whatever! Carry on because I think your reasons for doubting her are still not enough.
Amar: Haan Ley sahi keh raha hai Twayam...Lalkiyan toh waise bhi thopping karti rehti hai.
Swayam groans and says, "Okay! Now explain this Rey since you suddenly want to defend my sister..."
Rey blushes with embarassment and tries to deny it but everyone hushes him.
Swayam: ...Kal I asked her where she was and why didn't she pick up my phone so she said ke woh Neha ke saath film dekhne gayi thi aur usne cell silent par daal diya tha but thats impossible because kal Neha...
"Mera Saath thi" Vicky completes for him.
Swayam: Exactly! Now explain that! Why did she lie?
Everyone looks at Rey and he shrugs, not wanting them to doubt him further.
Swayam: Conclusion: she has a boyfriend and we have to find him, so whose with me.
Vicky: (grins)Me! I love secret missions.
Nil: Me too!
Amar: Main bhi.
Bharat: Aur main bhi.
All eyes turn to Rey again and he decides its better to stay inside and manipulate them rather than staying outside and making them doubt him. He musters up a smile and says, "I'm in"
Everyone breaks into cheers.
Rey: (thinks) Oh God! I have to tell Taani but how will I tell her with all of them spying on her...Kuch Jugad karna padega.
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Precap:
Boys collecting clues about the guy!!!! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow sana...finally an update...we waited for so long...thanks for updating...

about the update its great...swayam doubting taani...and their morning scene is nice ...i can imagine rey's face when swayam said taani has a bf...update next soon...
Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac



@Pikky 😡 wat do u mean huh? Tujhe yakheen nahi ho raha hai kya? Ab agar maine kal update nahi kiya toh mera naam soniya rakh dena 😉 😆



teri toh 🤬 btw kuch bhi ho jaye mein teko beherupiya hi bulaungi no matter wat sana khan🤢😆
nd abt my death dun worry mere pehle tu hi maregi meko bure log pehle marte hai or tu sabse buri hai 🤢😆

ok abt ur update ha ha thik hi tha 😆 lol kidding ha
omg luvd it to d core watta update yaar so funny 🤣 uff rey ka coldrink kaash swayam pe gir jata 😆 maja aata haye rey ki kismat deko khud ki gf ka bf dhundh raha hai 😆 so funny nd weird...uff m luving dis cute funny possessive bro swayam😆 lol 500 ka watch station se liya so 'phunny'😛😆
omg ye ss toh bilkul funny hai re bilkul tere jaisa ...gud job...aur agar tune do din mein update nahi kiya to tera name LCS rakh dungi 😡🤣 so be alert 😛😆
Edited by patie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG, it was sooo good, I was laughing like crazy, I loved the dialogues!!!! Sooo good, can't wait for u to cont
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my god this is amazing yr
all the bast 4 exams
thanks 4 pm
hope u will continue soon😊
Edited by love_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
"Swayam glares at him and says, "Rey yahaan i'm freaking out over what kind of a jerk my sister is dating aur tu has raha hai?"

🤣

this is so epic...cant stop laughing...bechaara Rey...and Swayam ka possessiveness...😆

"Kuch Jugad karna padega" 🤣

and the precap is so epic...so a BF spies on his GF along with her bro and frens...sounds so epic...cant wait for Taani's reaction on this...! 😆

and thank you soo muchh for the PM =) already waiting for the next chp...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh Goddess i couldt stop laughing. im ur new reader. all 3 chapters r good. excited for next part. gudluck for ur board exams
Edited by gowri_amy - 12 years ago

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