Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 2)

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#971

wow.. this is amazing..

when I read the concept I assumed it was going to be a serious story and I prepared myself to get into that mood & mode.. but I am loving the humor and how you have not put too much emphasis on the sad things. I liked your style of writing, and I read till here from the beginning in few hours 😊

Hope I finish reading other parts soon :)

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kooltoad

@kooltoad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#972

wow, Khushi's one small statement "that he has right to get upset with her" gave such a morale boost to arnav...

and the way he was so worried about her going away from him, not agreeing to his proposal, him not able to provide what she desires, her little wishes that he wants to fulfill, his annoyance with himself, his doubts and reassurance to himself, his determination, his slow move, steady but sure move towards her, dealing with her in such a dicey situation without losing his cool although she was driving him crazy - it was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.!!!

and then our dear khushi, she is so cute - firstly she will doubt him, not beive him and then she will make him angry while trying not to create any problem or discomfort for him and then so sweetly tries to rectify her mistake that he can't be angry with her anymore and fall for her more, but what can she do, she doesn't know that he likes her, she's is still in her - "i should be a good girl... a good friend... i should not trouble him... i am his responsibility... under an obligation... etc etc..." mode... how will she understand if he is doing what he is doing for "some other reasons" altogether, that he has reached far far ahead in his feelings towards her and feels sooo "differently" for her now and sees her in a romantic light now, poor naive khushi!!!

I'm enjoying every bit of it!

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#973

fantastic updates

just finished reading 13 to 17 chapter...

wow they both slowly coming close to each other...

arshi's party scene was amazing..now arnav getting jealeuos from akash..

and totally loved the khushi's pov after the party..o.m.g he finally realized that he love her..

so sweet arnav take khushi for dinner and arnav kissed khushi on her cheek...😊..

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#974

Ch 13 was awesome :) So Akash likes Khushi? Hmm...lol I wonder how Arnav will react to that lol. And Khushi is so innocent. Cant wait to see Arnav's reaction when he sees her all dressed up to go to the party 😊😊😊

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#975

OMG...chapter 14 was amazing!!! Arshi at the party was awesome!!! They are head over heels in love with each other but dont admit it!! I cant wait to read what happens next 😊😊

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#976

Ch 15 was awesome loved it 😊😊

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#977

Ch 16 was amazing...loving how this story is going 😊😊

Finally Arnav admits to himself that he loves her and now wants to marry her 😊😊

I wonder how he will woo her now 😊

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#978

Ch 17 was sooo romantic...awww I loved it!!! Their first date was just sooo beautiful and romantic and just sooo awesome!!! 😊😊😊

And he kissed her cheek in the end...AHHH!!!! Loved it!!! 😊😊😊

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#979

Akash was the much needed fuel and push for Arnav to take a step to change the friendship inot something more beautiful i.e love. And he is on his way taking steps. First the party, the innocent touch and now the kiss. 😳