Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 2) - Page 93

completed all 17 chapters in one iteration.

Originally posted by: Anony_mous

No, I don't find you asking a time limit rude at all.

I shall update soon... from my end I want it to be asap :)

The update was fabulous 😊

Arnav's first step to impress his lady love with flowers & dinner date was a good one

The little argument between ARSHI was cute

The part where Arnav thinks he is hallucinating & the way he tried to clear his doubts ... '...dupattas flying...' was enjoyable

Arnav's jealousy over Khushi accepting Akash's invitation for dinner without any second thoughts but trying to refuse his invitation & he asking her about her concern for the babies was well written

Arnav's talk in his mind that he wasn't forcing her for marriage & that she has the freedom of choice but then instantly the ASR popping out confirming that he would land up as the final choice was awesome

Loved Khushi's thought of not upsetting Arnav & wanting him to remain happy always and her effort of surprising him

The description about the happenings of the dinner date - the possibility of Arnav bringing the whole menu at her table if it hadn't run for pages, both not wanting it to end... was good

The end was amazing when Arnav left a baffled Khushi with his kiss & wink . Wonder what would be going on in Khushi's mind & heart.

Waiting impatiently to know Khushi's reaction & her feelings

Quoted the lines that were lovely :

• 'Are you sure you have the right address?'

• 'Does dinner at 7 with me sounds like a good idea? Arnav.' it read.

• He does not repeat things and is generally serious about promises he make.

He never gives false hopes, does he?

• 'Were kids not going to be alone when you were going with Akash?' his voice turned dangerously low.

• 'Do I have the right to be upset with you? No. So I am not. Bye' he disconnected.

• He is angry and in anger he will say things he does not mean, hurting her and himself too. ...She did not like Arnavji angry, depressed or stressed. He should always be happy, at peace, smiling his half smile and arguing with her like a grumpy 6 year old, she thought with a tender smile playing on her face.

• She does not seem to entertain the idea of spending even one evening with just him easily. And with Akash she was hell bent on going.

• Well no body is tying her up and getting her married. She will have the liberty to choose.

And he will make sure that she chooses him, anyhow, the ASR in him bargained.

• His heart skipped a few beats, but sobered up instantly. 'Hallucinating now, Am I?' '. 'Do mental images wave THIS enthusiastically and jump? And do they shiver instead of flowing their duappatas in air?'
  
• 'Wrong. I said it was not needed. I never said did not want to go' she twisted her earlier statement.

• She wants to go out with me. In fact she made an effort to come and surprise me. But wait, why did she not come inside? Did she think I'll mind that?

• Then how would have I been able to see your surprised face'

• 'Yup. And I am beyond any competition in that area'

• ... for him it was definitely a date and he was going to treat it like one.
• She wanted to try everything, and Arnav would have gladly obliged had the menu not run ten pages long.

• She felt like an individual who was being showered attention and affection by very handsome man. His eyes looked different when he looked at her here. A woman, yes, she felt like a woman dining out with her man. She felt aware of Arnavji, she did not feel like his friend but felt like a ... date. The thought made her heart race. Arnavji and her on a date. 'Why not? If nothing else, I can pretend for one evening that this is a date' her heart trembled at the idea.

• Both of them did not want this evening to come to an end, but it did.

• So never say that you don't have any right'

• 'I'll most certainly not' she heard him say after a few seconds.

• And the next thing she knew was her standing dumbstruck with a hand on her cheek, where a tender kiss was placed by a smiling Arnav, who winked her a goodnight, before proceeding to his room.