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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fleurs

Awesome update & thanks for the PM 🤗


  • Arnav inquiring Khushi repeatedly whether she is fine after causing all the discomfort at the party & dragging her out just because he couldn't desist her from spending time with Akash was adorable


  • Too many perplexed thoughts overriding Khushi's mind & finally Khushi herself concluding that it was normal for Arnav to have held her in that position in a business party but still analyzing the fact as to whether Arnav was aware of his doings & her discomfort, comparing Arnav's behavior in the past & his responsible & caring attitude towards her in the present was well written

  • Khushi's dilemma on the topic 'Comfortable with what? Party? Or Him?' was adorable & the part where she rebukes herself 'Do not let your thoughts wander in to THAT territory' points out her maturity to analyze & then draw a conclusion

  • Arnav in a quandary as to whether he having hurt Khushi in their former meetings will cost his dreams about his future with Khushi, Arnav making up his mind to make up for his wrongdoings & win Khushi's heart & give her the happiest future that will make her forget the hurt he had caused rather than suffocating in guilt, Arnav worried that he isn't romantic enough & confused as to how he will woo her was framed so exquisitively

  • Loved when Arnav was fuming over Akash inviting Khushi to meet his parents & thinking of preventing the meet

  • Waiting to see how Arnav will make Khushi understand his love for her beyond the friendship they share now

Quoted the fantastic lines :

  • 'OKAY? Do I look okay? I don't FEEL okay for sure. And what was with that hand on my back? Do you have any idea how close I was to fainting?...'
  • 'Great, am I participating in a race right now'' I hate these designer dresses. So costly, and yet they try to save on the cloth. IDIOTS'''. It was his hand on my back, not the other way round. '
  • 'He didn't even know that the dress has such a deep neck. That's why his mind did not register the position of his hand. Must be that only.'
  • 'Do not let your thoughts wander in to THAT territory'
  • 'In fact he is the best friend you've ever had in your life. He cares for you, your career, everything.
  • Of all the virtues that Arnav Singh Raizada possessed, selflessness was not one
  • He cannot pin point the day, incident or time when Khushi became special to him. She came into his complicated life like a restful sleep, if he would compare.''he was like never before peaceful, happy and looking forward to start his day, his life''.. But she was perfect for him, and he has to make sure that she sees him in the same light for herself.
  • If only this Akash Roy had not turned up with his nonsensical notions, he would have probed Khushi's thoughts and expressed his intentions in good time.
  • 'Better late than never' he chuckled
  • This chap calls her everyday, ...right now looks moony-eyed sitting in front of her. And this girl is seriously blind to not notice this
  • 'Taking her to meet the family now, are we? Like hell I'll let that happen' growled a very displeased Arnav Singh Raizada, as he made his way to where the two 'friends' sat chatting.




Thanks for a detailed comment Fleurs. I really wanted to know what all clicked in this update. I really appreciate it :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
A really nice story dear. Nice to see a well grounded khushi not too awed by arnav.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome yaar
too good loved it
plz update soon and plz dnt forget to pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part,too good...thx for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
love it it was amazing anyways loved it and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bahaha, caveman Arnav to the rescue? Loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update . ..
but what z he gng to do now...


thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brillaint update!!
This part was so nicely written:)
I am really enjoying every bit of this story!
Great job and thank you very much for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lol loving khushis thoughts to her see and about arnav touching her lol an Chen when Akaash asked to meet his fam I was like yeah as if ASR will let that happen can't wait it see how arnav tackles it lol great :) thanks for the pm can't wait for the next oart :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update :) loved it loadz <3 Arnav will never let her go to meet the family :$ Hope confesses to her soon xoxo

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