Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 2) - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: foesb

This was so out of world! You are a fantastic writer😊 from the beginning itself I liked the pace u were carrying out the story, now this particular phrase of the story is gonna be so interesting to read since Arnav has made up his mind to give a 'clue' to a clueless Khushi with regard to his intentions. Let's see how Khushi will react, already she has started showing symptoms of her famous 'acidity'😃 the part where both of them went and checked on kids before parting for their journey was so domestic and it made a cute family moment😊 once again you are a fantastic writer👏




Thank you so much :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG what we got here a thoroughly jealous and determined Raizada

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update!! Was in splits reading about Arnav being consumed by the green eyed monster!!

Akash, poor guy, is trying his best to flirt with Khushi, and unknowingly egging on Arnav to become more and more determined and possessive and yes, covetous. 😊

I found these lines to be so, so good """But however certain he was about his feelings, it did not mean he'll profess them without being sure of hers. And Arnav Singh Raizada had a plan to overcome that hiccup. He will just have to bring Khushi on the same page as him.""

Arnav to the core---determined to have Khushi, but first wants to be certain that his feelings are reciprocated!! Guess all the risk taking is left to the business world, for his personal life he wants all the i's dotted and t's crossed and ensure the love of his life adores him as well before spelling out his feelings!! 😊

Eagerly looking forward to the next update. Please do PM me, have sent you a Buddy request.

Cheers


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arhi-Did-IT

ASR & his touch 😉 his jealousy 😆




that was so wonderful 😆

poor akash

I think he deserved a chance to tell his feelings only to be politely declined of course
poor arnav and khushi - all confused 😛



i can't wait to see what happens next
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update!!!
possessive arnav is always a treat to have!!!
w8ng for next!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RamnVij

Amazing update!! Was in splits reading about Arnav being consumed by the green eyed monster!!


Akash, poor guy, is trying his best to flirt with Khushi, and unknowingly egging on Arnav to become more and more determined and possessive and yes, covetous. 😊

I found these lines to be so, so good """But however certain he was about his feelings, it did not mean he'll profess them without being sure of hers. And Arnav Singh Raizada had a plan to overcome that hiccup. He will just have to bring Khushi on the same page as him.""

Arnav to the core---determined to have Khushi, but first wants to be certain that his feelings are reciprocated!! Guess all the risk taking is left to the business world, for his personal life he wants all the i's dotted and t's crossed and ensure the love of his life adores him as well before spelling out his feelings!! 😊

Eagerly looking forward to the next update. Please do PM me, have sent you a Buddy request.

Cheers




Thanks for such a detailed and insightful comment :)







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Posted: 12 years ago
a nice one again 👏

loved the way she that all those symptoms of a heart attack
great one 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a nice part. Arnav had develop guts.. Bt i like that. Love the way everytng is Developing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update!!! arnav singh raizada is burning in jealousy🤪
its so good to read...
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Posted: 12 years ago
😛 Ahh! The Touch!!!!!
Did I ever tell u... Oh! I love u!
Awesome update...
Arnav is so adorable when he is jealous... I love it! Love it...😳
Waiting for ur update...😉

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