I was gonna gt a res on d first page fr dis 😡
ahem ahem..
Kaha se shuru karu? Taunt se ki thanks se?
Thanks for d fact dat u wrote dis one...it really means a lot to me...
And taunt coz..uhm well, you know..
Anyway, coming to the OS...
I hav never gone overboard telling you how much i lykd it coz i wanted to save dat part for commenting here..
So the start, u knw d way he was confused and thought bout stuff itself set an awesome base for his character...it gav out his nature very subtly, yet perfectly..
The whole past, him n Kria becoming best friends was awesome..i was in another world..he was so damn caring towards her, n i was in complete aww of him...especially wen aftr she confessed, which by the way was super cute, d way he went outta his way to make sure she was fine..
Coming to the beach party, u already knw how much i blushed over d kiss...his mind fighting wid himself over his desires, was well written. to b honest, it was normal for a guy lyk him to do such a thing, except my heart went out to kria...n mahn, she must hav lukd hawwwt in dat Bikini..
D part wer her hand slides down, n his unabashed reaction had me go haaaww..
D way she confronted him was cute, n i loveee him so much, for d jerk he was...yes i m nalayak, but i love rey lyk dis...coz...ahem..
The whole missing her part was nice, coz well, it wasnt d typical, she went away he realised he loved her..it was him missing her bestie...period.
oh n again, i was lyk awww wen he asked her out...i mean it was so random, yet so cutee...
D fact dat he was honest enuf to tel her dat he did try dating others was funny...
and their dates, omg i could imagine it all..dating ur best frnd can get awkward, no personal experience, but u've shown it well😃
And their whole making out thing was thoda shocking, n wen finally kria realised, i dint wanna imagine was she must hav gone thru..
wen she confronted him bout it again, i lykd d way dey talked...coz dey were bff, so dey could speak their mind out...Rey was being a jerk, but stil he valued their frndship n dint wanna lose her, ofcourse his intentions may b wrong but it still impressed me 😛😛
His whole jealousay, n Kria's go to hell attitude was awesome, well he deserved dat..but achha hain zyada nahi kia usko hurt..
And the end, rey changing, i knw how confused u were bout it, n it came off gradually, yet at d rite tym..
Loved d os a lot...☺️
Can i expect a smaller part two to it? chotu wala, but showing his changed nature? pljjj na...ok u mite wanna kill me...but stil..pljj
jus one more part? i wont demand more 😆😛😳
Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago