Taarey SS: Pyar- meetha jeher *DISCONTINUED*

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dh19

@dh19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

am just speechless.
have beautifully expressed there fillings and emotions.
become emotional after reading this ..
thanks for the pm and pls. update with other ff too.,

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ShivTRSS

@ShivTRSS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey
Res..
Unres..

I don't know dii.. I seriously don't know mai kya bolu iske baare me.. Jitna bolungi kam hai.. Bas yahi ki.. I cried.. I cried reading it.. Itne achche se.. The way u decribed their feelings was sooo emotional yet beautiful.. I could literally see both of them breaking down in front of my eyes.. specially Taani.. I can feel what they felt.. LOVE YOU DII FOR WRITING THIS!! Mai bata nahi paa rahi hu ki mujhe kaisa lag raha hai yeh padh ke..YOUARE AN AWESOME WRITER!!! Yeh sab understatements hai aapke liye! U truly understand their characters sooo well!! Hats off to you dii for writingthis! N yeh thankyou direct dil se aa raha hai..Please please please keep writing! Once again.. I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!I wanna read it furthur.. Thankyou soo much for this and thankyou soo much for pming me.. do pm me when u update!

shivangi, u r such a sweetie. Meri best friend ka nam b shivanee he to muje to tumhara nam sunke hi tumse pyar ho gaya. Aur meri itani tarif karane ke liye me tehdil se shukriya ada kr rhi hu. Nd me seriouslly sry hoon ki mene rulaya. Par mujse gussa mt hona haan. Hona ho to undono T aur R se ho na, dono hi mujse ese ghatiya kam karvate he. Sry to bhi. Nd thank u apni di ko itana acha wala cment dene ke liye hmeshase

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ShivTRSS

@ShivTRSS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

@shreya- thanks again shreya. Muje pta he ham sab kitane attached he unse. Nd muje aap sb ki cments bhot special feel krvati he. To thank u yar. Sbko.

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Veereyi

@Veereyi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Ye such much bohot jyada imotional tha...rona baaki hai...bt jis tarah se aaone isko likha hai iys out of d world...d mst wat i can say...may b d mst intensse deep pure true feelings wala update...luv u fr dis...update asap...

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chandrima

@chand91

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

i have no wrds 2 exprs my feelings

jst wow

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sonakshigupta

@sonakshigupta

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

hey aashna u hve done a mind blowin job f describin rey n taanis feelin so accurately...i so wish things wud improve...i h8 seein dem so hurt...god...dekha nai jata...har ek episode ueh soch kar dekhte hai ki aaj kuch bettr hojayega...bt har baar taklif badti hi jati hai...damn it! i juz cnt put in2 wrds wat m feelin rite nw...thnx 4 d pm...n pkz update jaldi karna

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aditi

@adi.cutiepie

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

it was so emotional but i am in love with ur ss do update soon dear

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chandrima

@chand91

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

plz unhe bahot zada dard mat dena

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Shivangi

@peraltagasm

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ShivTRSS
shivangi, u r such a sweetie. Meri best friend ka nam b shivanee he to muje to tumhara nam sunke hi tumse pyar ho gaya. Aur meri itani tarif karane ke liye me tehdil se shukriya ada kr rhi hu. Nd me seriouslly sry hoon ki mene rulaya. Par mujse gussa mt hona haan. Hona ho to undono T aur R se ho na, dono hi mujse ese ghatiya kam karvate he. Sry to bhi. Nd thank u apni di ko itana acha wala cment dene ke liye hmeshase

Hehe.. thankyou dii.. n aapki himmat kaise hui ki itne beautiful writing ko aapne ghatiya kaha?? Never say anything like this again.. n sorry kis baat ke liye?? Please dii.. apne itne achche writing skills ko underestimate mat karo.. u literally killed it!! I love every bit of ur every writing! ! N as shreya rightly said.. mujhe aapki dusre ff waali line jo sabse zyada affect ki thi.. woh thi.. " why do we fall in love.. why not rise in love??".. itnd deep thoughts laana easy nahi hai dii.. please never underestimate ur writing skills dii.. atleast for our sake!! Love you!!