~FORBIDDEN DESIRE (UL II)~ Ch 02 Pg 97 16/01 EXT

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#981

I think Khushi is somehow responsible for his parents death. That is why Arnav hates her so much! But please make him cancel the two marriages or I will have an heart attack!

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anusada

@anusada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#982

Great going :-)
Next one asap 😊

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Achu

@arshy4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#983

Oye Appy... I think Its the story which capable of take a start off from where your other FF ONS-II ended...

This FF has got the same effect on readers which ONS-II had... The story and Khushi's state of mind together itself is melting each and every reader's heart... AppyY Dear...Hats off to you for making such a wonderful heart melting yet different story...

I love to use that pic I used to comment on ONS-II thread here...

Edited by arshy4ever - 12 years ago

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#984

i am in love wd this ff

its just fab

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872041

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#985

simply WOW!!! i loved it! your work is just amazing ,and i read some of your other work and love them too. PLZ pm me when you update

👏

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aveeshakiran

@aveeshakiran

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#986

OMG!!!! BEAUTUFUL STORY...i loved it..fabulous concept pllzzz let me kno wen u r updating...do keep writing👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Dazz

@Dazz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#987

Hey den im a sinhalese 4m sri lanka..!awsm update "marama niyamai" :-D:-D

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#988

didi, tame kidhu k tamne pehli vaar German ma comment aai, bolo havee, mei kai bhasha ma comment kari che?

he he..

rehne do.. if u wont get my comment, maru toh poppat thai jashe..

aww, i so loved to read arshi's childhood..i so get lost in it.. very very beautifully written ha maa..

After Khaushi oes, arnav will do works for his dadi.. as if.. hah...

but this line cracked me up..

"ouch! Uff, yeh ghutno ke dard".

so filmy dadi.. LOL..

(na na, majak na udavvi joiye maare, naitar shu kadar rehshe maari tamari najar ma.. he he..)

oh Gosh!! why why why???!!!!

arnav's and khushi's bachpan is so much lovely and emotional+catchy!!

that apna samajta hai line is jut too much too pull myself from an awe mode ha didi... i mean, next line was like.. agar he doest not marry me, then apni jaan de dungi.. sahi mei yaar, i am like-shit.. aisa kuch hoga kya??

uff.. this past is really creating mysties in many ways poosible.. only u can hadle it, and handle it well!!

OMG.. the end just shattered my reading spirit.. so much to handle..

lovely update di.. keep posting..

sorry for being late.. but i do keep reading..

sorry again..