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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Such a beautiful update. Thank u so much for filling us with these Flashbacks... Well its incomplete nah?? So let me say Beautiful Flashbacks.

U portrayed the childhood fun and fights so beautifully.. Along with the cute family moments. The kind hearted family, naughty children... So beautiful!

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Krishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Amazing update! So many nuances to read and catch... Thank you so much for the update! I can't wait to read more!

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

Di beautiful update
just loved it
aww arjun ayesha bond in past amazing..
mr. gupte fab..
rosh awesum..
wow three girls fab di..
nw i m fully connected wid our dear lady in red..
rosy brilliant excellent
love u di
hats off wrk..
claps!!
thanx fr d pm di
Di special wala hug
fr making my guess right
yay...!
me happy..!

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Great update..
Thanks for the pM

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

loved d childhood memories 😊

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Niki

@luvzindagi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Wow Avantika Di, 👏
That was really a pleasant peep in through the past 😊
The four friends and their bickering was so cute... you made reminded me my childhood days when we used to play in the soil...😳😊
And I loved the teenage Arjun, he was so sweet and innocent...😳 A genuine wide smile was there on my lips when He felt happy as Inspector Gupte offered him to live with him! 😊
I chuckled at the typical teenage boy in him who said, 'Main ladkiyon se nahi darta...dekh lunga unhe...'😆😊
So Roshni was their third best friend huh...! I liked her name Mishti...😊
And his imagination scene with Roshni was a really nice one...Her 'All.Is.Not.Lost' is what he really needs to understand now... I hope Sha and Roo will help him get over the tragic past and also recover themselves
Now I am really eager to know what happened that destroyed this once happy family
Thanks for the PM Di
🤗

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Loved it...
Is rosy..misthi.?
nd Roo must be Roshni...
The flashbacks were really nice...
Arjun totally drenched in water..that too in the first day of house itself..!!
nd Arjun nd Aisha fighting for the Rose plant..
It was really a wonderful update..

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NeethuEli

@NeethuEli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#448

Lovely update. Even the small scene of the friends were too beautiful. Waiting for the next updates.

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

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Posted: 12 years ago

#449

Avantika di thanks for writing such a fab story...loved each n every word of update...the way u are unfolding past is praiseworthy...how u give us the glimpses of past when they are most appropriate...
u have asked for questions...u know I have a long list...bt I want to have the Apple of saber...kyunki sabar ka gal meetha hota hai...so am going to sit back n wait for ur updates to answer both my questions n clear my doubts...
ayesha's character is getting clearer or more complex...
I am missing rosy n karan...
mysteries jaldi khatam kijiye mohtarma warna...warna mein wait kar loon gi
I liked the flashback scene so much..the girls n their fights with arjun...am waiting eagerly when every doubt will clear...update soon...plz plz plz

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#450

Oh Avantika,

You are the best narrator. The way you narrate the entire story, describe each plot , merging the past and future. That is entirely a different sensation. And, this update was genuinely very well brought up. All the characters were so well described. You have the ability of making me love all the characters , every plot and part of the story.

There pasts are entwined to one another. Each one incomplete without the other. The three girls , there relation ,there naughtiness, there love and compassion towards one another makes me love each one of them. There encounter with the new guy was very adorable and hilarious. Perfect welcome for the new guy.

I see that the family is very genuine and compassionate. And the girls too are very sweet and i loved there little banters with one another. Especially , there banter with Arjun. They really do share such a beautiful relation. Having such a beautiful relation and spending such beautiful moments with one another, this loss really do hurts.

Perfect and amazing write up dear!!!

I loved it to the core.

~Dee~

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