Arjun FF: The Lady in Red.. Thread 2. Link added.. - Page 42

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

ufff...tumaara suspense toh mujhe ek din maar dhaalegi dear

aur kya kya plan kar rahi ho? 😉
Haha.. Nahiii.. Itni bhi berehem nahi hoon yaar.. 😉😆

So whats Aisha planning to do? betraying a friend a second time matlab, she has already betrayed him or someone else before..
Yupp.. read the last line and you'll know.. 😉

And she is gonna link up Arjun and Rosanna, huh??? poor Karan, usska kya hoga? tum triangle ya rectangle create karne waali ho kya?

Rectangle? Ermm.. Shayad..

Cont soon and next time give us some clues to the past! usska chaavi deh do yaar!
Yupp.. lots of 'peeks' coming up..

Originally posted by: ariyaFan

First of all my hearty appologies for not commenting on any of the updates on TLIR uptil now.I agree from the writer's POV its very imp. to know the feedback from the readers in terms of appreciation or criticism.Coming to your writings on TLIR,I loved the phrases that you use while starting of the chapters.Now coming to the story part.the misteries that you create are out of the world & there is no doubt in it.But while reading this FF i dont know why but i couldn't understand or relate the two characters ie.Aisha & Arjun, 😔may be bacause there are many phases of them to be explored so was waiting for the story to proceed &understand them & then commenting it.But after your Dhamki i had to comment on it.😉.& last but not the least Thanks u for the PM.

Originally posted by: fasiha_rocks

hiii

sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry

for commenting late😭

actually when u have started this ff i was busy with my exams😭😭😭

so i never got time to read it

but today i have read all the parts😃😃😃

after logging out from IF

i kept on revising in my mind all the parts😆😆😆

to be frank i never even revised my subject books like this😆😆😆

after reading all the parts i feel like coming to u and requesting u to please tell me the entire ff

as i am not able to control myself😆😆😆

even while eating i was thinking about ur ff

i have even told ur ff to my little sister

u r just a fabulous and amazing writer

i dont have enough words to praise ur writings👏

once again sorry for commenting so late😭😭

thanks a lot for sending me PM😊😊

if u havnt sent me the PM of part 7-A then i would have missed read such a mysterious and awesome FF😭😭

please PM me whenever u update

dont forget😊😊😊

will be waiting for next part

Originally posted by: CrAzYaRjUnIaN92

as always..fabulous👏 ek ek emotion feel karwa dete ho aap..👏

haye yeh arisha ka dard..😭

abhi bohot si baaten saamne aani hein.. waiting for them..

update soon..

and thaaankooo for the PM..🤗 😆 😳

Originally posted by: Enchantress

Hey!!!

Nice update..

M curious as always to know what will happen the next.

What does Ayesha has in her mind now? What is she planning??

I missed Rosanna , its as if the update is incomplete without her. She is the soul of the entire story. Although there was no Rosanna you always do justice with the update.

Lovely update.

Continue soon!!!

~Dee~

Originally posted by: Amri174

Hey! That's an intriguing chapter. Ayesha's introspection makes things all the more mysterious!

Waiting for the next chapter:)

Originally posted by: naughtykittyyy

heyy rd ds updt thrice t 2 gt 2 know whdr im nt mssng anyy clues

bt evry time im gtng mr n eagr 2 know da past of der life

der past der days , der life, der msries,loss alll i wana know

i hv rd it b4 sm hours bt itni der se soch rahi hoon ke kya kya possblts ho sakti hai iss stry ke

bt trust me gtng mr n mr confusd...fir sochna chor ke cmnt karne lag gay

Arre baap re.. Itni curiosity!! Chalo thodi kam kar dete hain.. Next Chapter mein.. 😉😆 Shanti.. Balike.. Abhi toh bohot kuch hona baaki hai.. 😉

wht dd aysha wana do noww...

whm she bitrad in hr past

whyyy she do dat

whm dd she bitrd...n agn wana walk on da same path
Read the last line of the previous one carefully.. You'll get your answer.. 😉

lv dat thng dat she wana make arjun as past ...

its true dat arjun khud hi aysha ki iss arjun ki chngn missn par biggst troubl hay

though it ws fully on ayshas pov... though i like it
Hmm.. Ayesha is also going to be a very integral part of the story, just like Rosy, Arjun, Karan and Roshini..

bt andr qtn arise agn whs dos 3 girls...ohooo gd kitna suspnc rakha hay tumne

ab thorasa clear vi kardon...egrness badti hi ja rahi hayy..

Chalo.. Next wale mein '3 girls' ka raaz bhi khol dete hain.. 😉

Originally posted by: yas23

awesome update
the story is getting even more nd more
whts aisha planning nw??
so roshni wansn't one of the 3..thn who is the other girl
can't wait for the next part
thanx 4 pm
continue soon

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Oh. Every time u manage to create such a suspense that I m never satisfied with the quantity. I always starve for more. U need to get to unfold the story real fast. Or I might die of curiosity.
Plz do update fast.

Originally posted by: dia121

Avantika Diii again a superb update...

As the story is proceeding so my curosity is increasing to know

What's next?

Aisha wanted real arjun or i can lost arjun back...but arjun is the most strubborn person...

Actually in next update i hope my questions will be answered

about how aisha is going to betray arjun again and some part of rosy's life...

But in the end awsome update and nice depiction👏