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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

superb update di...!!!👏

it was full of mystery and suspense as usual...!!!😆😉

loved it...!!!

hmmm so aisha planning to bring back arjun to his old self...!!!

the feelings are very beautifully written...!!!

ooo rathore left them...!!!

awww feeling bad for arjun...!!!😭

do they know roshni from childhood or not? 😲

and what is aisha planning? and why is she saying ki rosy is to be kept in dark? how is she gonna betray arjun?😲

cant wait for the mystery to end...!!!

continue soon...!!!

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kunchu

@kunchu

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#382

Avantika.. the suspense is killing me yaar!!!

each chapter has been so thoughtfully writen to keep the reader wonder what would be hitting next..

and honestly I'm not getting a single idea!!!

so Aisha is planning to bring Arjun back to track... from a lifeless man .. back to life...

but how?? hows Rosy going to help?? whats Aisha's plan??

and most imp.. whats the past??

GOD.. pls update soon...

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@MriduB

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Great update! 😊
Continue soon!

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

ufff...tumaara suspense toh mujhe ek din maar dhaalegi dear

aur kya kya plan kar rahi ho? 😉

So whats Aisha planning to do? betraying a friend a second time matlab, she has already betrayed him or someone else before

And she is gonna link up Arjun and Rosanna, huh??? poor Karan, usska kya hoga? tum triangle ya rectangle create karne waali ho kya?

Cont soon and next time give us some clues to the past! usska chaavi deh do yaar!

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#385

First of all my hearty appologies for not commenting on any of the updates on TLIR uptil now.I agree from the writer's POV its very imp. to know the feedback from the readers in terms of appreciation or criticism.Coming to your writings on TLIR,I loved the phrases that you use while starting of the chapters.Now coming to the story part.the misteries that you create are out of the world & there is no doubt in it.But while reading this FF i dont know why but i couldn't understand or relate the two characters ie.Aisha & Arjun, 😔may be bacause there are many phases of them to be explored so was waiting for the story to proceed &understand them & then commenting it.But after your Dhamki i had to comment on it.😉.& last but not the least Thanks u for the PM.

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fasiha

@fasiha_rocks

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

hiii

sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry

for commenting late😭

actually when u have started this ff i was busy with my exams😭😭😭

so i never got time to read it

but today i have read all the parts😃😃😃

after logging out from IF

i kept on revising in my mind all the parts😆😆😆

to be frank i never even revised my subject books like this😆😆😆

after reading all the parts i feel like coming to u and requesting u to please tell me the entire ff

as i am not able to control myself😆😆😆

even while eating i was thinking about ur ff

i have even told ur ff to my little sister

u r just a fabulous and amazing writer

i dont have enough words to praise ur writings👏

once again sorry for commenting so late😭😭

thanks a lot for sending me PM😊😊

if u havnt sent me the PM of part 7-A then i would have missed read such a mysterious and awesome FF😭😭

please PM me whenever u update

dont forget😊😊😊

will be waiting for next part

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sana

@Luna92

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#387

as always..fabulous👏 ek ek emotion feel karwa dete ho aap..👏

haye yeh arisha ka dard..😭

abhi bohot si baaten saamne aani hein.. waiting for them..

update soon..

and thaaankooo for the PM..🤗 😆 😳

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#388

Hey!!!

Nice update..

M curious as always to know what will happen the next.

What does Ayesha has in her mind now? What is she planning??

I missed Rosanna , its as if the update is incomplete without her. She is the soul of the entire story. Although there was no Rosanna you always do justice with the update.

Lovely update.

Continue soon!!!

~Dee~